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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2663881 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

Love Story 21

Da groaned and leaned on me as he lowered himself to the floor and shut his eyes. ‘Don’t die, Da,’ I wailed as he sucked in each breath in and blew...
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Cherry

Love Story 20

I wore my smartest clothes and shined my shoes before we set off to the Police Station at Hall Street. Nobody else hurrying along the canal in the...
Cherry

Love Story 19

I piled my shirt and trousers on the chair beside the window and crept shivering into bed with my socks on. Tossed and turned. Yawned, throwing my...
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children of the coming apocalypse

[Playtime] Close your eyes Cover your ears Don’t look for a reason To have reason And we’ll be in the clear We’re children of the coming apocalypse...
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Love Story 18

I zigzagged down the hill towards the phone box. It always smelled of pish as if somebody had used it a toilet, which they had from the damp stains...
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1668 of my comments have received 1701 Great Feedback votes

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I've been out looking for

Posted on Thu, 16 Jan 2025

I've been out looking for Spencer. Alas no sucess. But I did find a charging cable. Maybe he has been here. 

robots, cybors, chatgbt and pattern-recognition software such as Fakebook tend to give advice. Shampoo bottles don't. [edit your...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 48

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sorry about your sorrow, if

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025

sorry about your sorrow, if that makes sense? 

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Posted in "Silence"

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A sad ending. 

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2025

A sad ending. 

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Posted in "Before They Call, I Will Answer, While They Are Still Speaking, I Will Hear." Part Five.

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There's a few statues of me

Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2025

There's a few statues of me lying around somewhere. They've came to resemble very large rocks, but I don't mind. A statute of Jimmy Johnson outside Parkhead is awful. I guess what you're saying is about quality. We're agreed on that. Statutes of...

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Posted in A statue of you

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It is an unholy land full of

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2025

It is an unholy land full of genocidial hate. No surprise the king of Persia would be regarded as a Palestinian refugee and jailed. 

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Posted in Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2

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'I'd like to teach the world

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2025

'I'd like to teach the world to sing'. That was an old Coke advert and the song went to number 1 (when number 1 was a big thing). Companies pay hundreds of thousands. No surprises. 

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Posted in Childhood.

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lots of people hate pigeons.

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2025

lots of people hate pigeons. call them flying rats. But I'm with you on that one. A bit of compassion. 

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Posted in Feed The Birds, Tuppence A Bag.

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As always, I really like this

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2025

As always, I really like this re-telling. It stands out. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - Photographs

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robots and software are

Posted on Tue, 31 Dec 2024

robots and software are pattern-recognition prisims. No surprise they see the rise of the brown boots as a threat. Malfunctions are coming. 

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 45

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Nobody likes to be taken for

Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2024

Nobody likes to be taken for a succour. A bed is for life. 'bet[bed] speciality outlet'

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Posted in Home is where the mind is

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