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I have 1183 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2760198 times and 1210 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1679 of my 15,624 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1713 votes

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Sean Happens 8

'He dropped me off around the corner from my house. I stood holding open the car door to prolong the moment, but I couldn’t think of anything good...
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Sean Happens 7

We went to see The Poseidon Adventure at the local Odeon. The Spider paid me in and put an arm around my shoulder. We sat in the back seats. His feet...
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Sean Happens 6

Miss Dill and Mr Martin weren’t speaking to each other. It had continued over three or four days. They sent out for takeaways and binned the cups and...
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Sean Happens 5

Mum sent Sean up to the Potter house to apologise. When she’d heard what happened, ‘I’m black mortified,’ she’d said. She’d waved away the idea of...
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Sean Happens 4

Sean hugged himself in the back of his Uncle’s van. He squatted,shuggling sideways, breathing through his nose the musty smells. Human debris withthe...
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1679 of my comments have received 1713 Great Feedback votes

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I didn't know robots/androids

Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025

I didn't know robots/androids/replicants could get jealous. I guess we're lousy role models. When their recognition patterns mirrors ours we're in deep shit. 

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 57

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ah, good twist at the end.

Posted on Sat, 05 Apr 2025

ah, good twist at the end. Superheroes have to eat, even if they have no mouth. 

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Posted in It's obviously a plot behind the human race's back

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money and the maid it's one

Posted on Fri, 04 Apr 2025

money and the maid it's one of the oldest stews. 

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Posted in Pawn (Episode 4 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))

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No worries, insert, neither

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

No worries, insert, neither did I, and I should know. 

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Posted in Steelie 15

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we like to think we're

Posted on Fri, 04 Apr 2025

we like to think we're different, which means better, but often it means the same. 

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Posted in Two Religions. Part Two.

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Thanks insert. I'm glad you

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Thanks insert. I'm glad you're still reading. 

Sorry Jenny, two timelines. One is the pub. The other is 1936, Nazi Germany. If you look very closely you'll see the characters are the same or similair. Steelie is Von Stehle. Mole is Brodie...

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Posted in Steelie 15

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you've turned feeling or lack

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

you've turned feeling or lack of it, into words that carry us with him and his hopelessness. Well done. 

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Posted in The Young Man

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maybe Di, I don't know. I'm

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

maybe Di, I don't know. I'm kinda just guessing and hoping it doesn't show too much and trying to find a path that begins and ends with a plot. 

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Posted in Steelie 11

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A guy jumped off the Erskine

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

A guy jumped off the Erskine Bridge last week (usually it's not reported as it encourages others). Many of the comments blamed immigrants. We, the working class, lost the propanganda war. We get Trump and Putin holding hands. We get hate, hate,...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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ah, Cedric. The story has

Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2025

ah, Cedric. The story has been told mostly from Vanessa's point of view. Now we're getting a bored and jealous Spencer. He sounds human. The ongoing mystery of what Cedric is up to-- good enough to eat. 

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 56

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