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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2653178 times and 1207 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Memento Mori

You’re frightened by time Last frolics of fading white lies Risky, holding facts You drop them from your dry lips Search for them on the floor...
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Sean Happens 11

‘You can’t kill The Spider as easy as that,’ said Miss Dill. ‘He was already dead in a way. He was born without a soul.’ Mr Martin pursed his lips. ‘...
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Sean Happens 10

Tiredness and fag smoke glazed Sean’s eyes. He was falling asleep leaning against the work surface, but he wouldn’t give into it or go to bed. His...
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Sean Happens 9

Mr Martin gave Sean a little nudge on the back of his shoulder. ‘Go on then,’ he said. Mum stepped out to meet him. ‘So this is yer little friends,’...
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Sean Happens 8

'He dropped me off around the corner from my house. I stood holding open the car door to prolong the moment, but I couldn’t think of anything good...
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1662 of my comments have received 1694 Great Feedback votes

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Thanks insert. I'm glad you

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Thanks insert. I'm glad you're still reading. 

Sorry Jenny, two timelines. One is the pub. The other is 1936, Nazi Germany. If you look very closely you'll see the characters are the same or similair. Steelie is Von Stehle. Mole is Brodie...

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Posted in Steelie 15

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you've turned feeling or lack

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

you've turned feeling or lack of it, into words that carry us with him and his hopelessness. Well done. 

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Posted in The Young Man

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maybe Di, I don't know. I'm

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

maybe Di, I don't know. I'm kinda just guessing and hoping it doesn't show too much and trying to find a path that begins and ends with a plot. 

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Posted in Steelie 11

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A guy jumped off the Erskine

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

A guy jumped off the Erskine Bridge last week (usually it's not reported as it encourages others). Many of the comments blamed immigrants. We, the working class, lost the propanganda war. We get Trump and Putin holding hands. We get hate, hate,...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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ah, Cedric. The story has

Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2025

ah, Cedric. The story has been told mostly from Vanessa's point of view. Now we're getting a bored and jealous Spencer. He sounds human. The ongoing mystery of what Cedric is up to-- good enough to eat. 

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 56

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Precious paper. Unprecious

Posted on Sat, 29 Mar 2025

Precious paper. Unprecious life. 

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Posted in The days are packed

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our water is safe and clean.

Posted on Tue, 25 Mar 2025

our water is safe and clean. bottled water is money down the drain (literally). untreated water kills more children than bombs. 

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Posted in Water.

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rain is life. a few well

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

rain is life. a few well-placed words can be too. 

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Posted in Rain

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great stuff. All of us need a

Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2025

great stuff. All of us need a rubber duck. 

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Posted in So glad you made it

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wait and listen. 

Posted on Fri, 21 Mar 2025

wait and listen. 

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Posted in Well, I Will Go To The Foot Of Our Stairs!

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