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I have 1221 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3824250 times and 1261 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1992 of my 16,351 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2063 votes

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Cherry

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Exhaustion penetrated the pores of John’s face, slackened his jaw, and dulled the light in his pale-green eyes to cataract grey. He cocked his head,...
Cherry

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Potential buyers were coming to view the house. Fastmoves, the estate agents, planted a wooden flag in the front garden. A sign of progress. Jo had...
Cherry

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Clock time was abolished. They left him to stew in the damp underground cell. Shiny white brick swimming from floor to ceiling. Caged light above his...
Cherry

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The front door banged at an ungodly hour. No watch, no alarm clock, to tell him the time, John mashed gummy-sleep from the corners of his eyes with...
Cherry

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Lying in bed, John was pickled with sleep and eyed the Christmas-tree brightness of the yellow light shade above his head and the heavy brocade of...

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1992 of my comments have received 2063 Great Feedback votes

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sweet and not in a sugary way

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

sweet and not in a sugary way. 

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Posted in Buster

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Time indeed, has no hold. 

Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016

Time indeed, has no hold. 

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Posted in My dead diary – Sunday 7th February

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lovely - and wooly thoughts

Posted on Sun, 31 Jan 2016

lovely - and wooly thoughts about love and caring - I like that. 

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Posted in SEVENTEEN (after Oliver Comins)

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unbalancing planes is quite a

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2016

unbalancing planes is quite a trick, but I guess I could get good with time. Liked this. 

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Posted in Beginners, Please...

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oh, date with new dentures.

Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016

oh, date with new dentures. the wolf equivalent of garlic. Nice little mix and minx of a story. 

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Posted in Rudy, Lil Red and DJ Gran [Red Riding Hood Retelling]

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beautiful and true -god knows

Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2016

beautiful and true -god knows it's true and so do you. 

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Posted in Triptych 1: Mass

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the afforntery of that Clare,

Posted on Mon, 04 Jan 2016

the afforntery of that Clare, watch out for the creak of the wardrobe and soon she'll no be there. I like this.

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Posted in The Wardrobe

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 Vietnamese with a waiting [t

Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015

 Vietnamese with a waiting [t]Taxi driver

 he [w]Winced.

characterisation and descriptive prose are great. 

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Posted in The March of the Dragons Chapter 2 (minus the last paragraph due to word count).

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the world is a friendlier

Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015

the world is a friendlier place when we smile. 

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Posted in Sometimes...

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in case they hurt themselves,

Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2015

in case they hurt themselves, you see, I see clearly, but what can you do when there's only me and you? 

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Posted in Glass is a Supercooled Liquid

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