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school photos 71
Exhaustion penetrated the pores of John’s face, slackened his jaw, and dulled the light in his pale-green eyes to cataract grey. He cocked his head,...
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Potential buyers were coming to view the house. Fastmoves, the estate agents, planted a wooden flag in the front garden. A sign of progress. Jo had...
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school photos 69
Clock time was abolished. They left him to stew in the damp underground cell. Shiny white brick swimming from floor to ceiling. Caged light above his...
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The front door banged at an ungodly hour. No watch, no alarm clock, to tell him the time, John mashed gummy-sleep from the corners of his eyes with...
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school photos 67
Lying in bed, John was pickled with sleep and eyed the Christmas-tree brightness of the yellow light shade above his head and the heavy brocade of...
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I don't know enough about
Posted on Wed, 02 Apr 2014
I don't know enough about poetry to coment about rhythm, metre or lieation, but the imagery is wonderful and the voice is true.
Read full commentPosted in It is I, Abiku
the crew seem afire and I'm
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
the crew seem afire and I'm sure that death and glory is their desire.
Read full commentPosted in The Crew of the Wolverine
supernatural ending Vera.
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
supernatural ending Vera. which means you can do and say anythng and nobody believes you.
Read full commentPosted in school photos 71
I'm sure Kellen could get
Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2014
I'm sure Kellen could get used to Jake and others' suffering and getting payback.
Read full commentPosted in Gifts That Cost Your Soul 3
an oldie, nicely told. I'll
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2006
an oldie, nicely told. I'll have a look at your new book. well done
Read full commentPosted in An Atheist Family Christmas
some lovely imagery.
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2014
some lovely imagery.
Read full commentPosted in The secret to Hollyhocks
This is very good. Jason's
Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014
This is very good. Jason's voice is just right. You don't need to say 'I make an effort at politeness'. You've already shown it and that's added commentary. Similiarly, appearances' sake is a bit convoluted and would be better left as appearance...
Read full commentPosted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 2 of 3
ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be
Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2014
ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be watching for more of this, made me smile.
Read full commentPosted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 1 of 3
yep, a book with insight for
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
yep, a book with insight for people that like to read and should be read.
Read full commentPosted in Reviews - In The Day by Kevin Marman
It's a bit like a video game.
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
It's a bit like a video game.
Read full commentPosted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
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