celticman

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I have 1220 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3692808 times and 1259 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1960 of my 16,274 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2028 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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uncovering oneself (3)

The downstairs bar shut. I bought a bottle of Buckie from the Off Sales. It was more expensive than usual, but I was more flush than usual...
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Story of the week

uncovering oneself (2)

I spent so much of my life not fitting in I fitted in best with those that didn’t. The Atlantis lounge and bar was a two-storey building that had...
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Story of the week

uncovering oneself (1)

In my head it was Monday. The garden gate didn’t cry, or try and out-rattle me. Mum’s gardening shoes were resting on the bottom step of the decking...
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post down the line

We grew up, lips leerin’ The whistle went son, the game begins Once round, no-man’s again Barbed wire, no-holds quintain Drilling, dodging, filthy...
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Cadogan Street

‘Hi, it’s me. Phone me back.’ ‘Hi, it’s me. Phone me back.’ ‘I’m a bit worried. Can you phone me back?’ ‘Is there something the matter with this...

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1960 of my comments have received 2028 Great Feedback votes

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time spins and

Posted on Wed, 11 Nov 2015

time spins and circumnavigates and I guess we place our bet of whose to blame on the table, never thinking our number will come up. 

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Posted in oot ma heed.

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panic indeed. simple sentence

Posted on Tue, 10 Nov 2015

panic indeed. simple sentence are good, but look for a bit more variety. 

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Posted in Panic Room

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check on your Mum as a name

Posted on Mon, 02 Nov 2015

check on your Mum as a name and as a description (eg my mum). I'm not sure how jaggy stones catch elbows (too high up the body) in opening paragraph. That apart. The tone is just right. Possible story of the week. Gets my vote. 

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Posted in Fly like Superman

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ouch, sock on the wrong

Posted on Sun, 25 Oct 2015

ouch, sock on the wrong appendage, the wrong foot that's not a foot. As all good stories it starts as one think (alternative therapy) and melds into something deeper, lighter and heavier. 

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Posted in White Light

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art for art's sake that is

Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015

art for art's sake that is why we create. money counterfeits that scheme, but leaves us queasy and uneasy with what is real. 

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Posted in Barcelona

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there's no stupidity in not

Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015

there's no stupidity in not knowing. Stupidity is when we kid on we do Jean. 

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Posted in CAPABILITY FOR WORK

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I remember the brothers well.

Posted on Tue, 06 Oct 2015

I remember the brothers well. My neighbours Dingle Dingleberrry were distintly related to the Dingleberry and had troule finding his toes. The Steampowered Valet disrober was a boon as it allowed him to look the other way when it was put into...

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Posted in A Victorian Gentleman and the Steam Age

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primal beauty. 

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015

primal beauty. 

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Posted in Starry, Starry Night

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an interesting insight into

Posted on Fri, 02 Oct 2015

an interesting insight into what it means to be a boxer, both inside and outside the ring. 

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Posted in The Boxing Match From A Boxer's Perspective

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you goose tina, this poem

Posted on Thu, 01 Oct 2015

you goose tina, this poem flies. 

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Posted in Come October

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