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I have 1218 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3659575 times and 1256 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1952 of my 16,242 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2018 votes

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Cherry

school photos 63

John waited until the front door opened and slammed shut, the sound of a car choking and flooding into life, before he shuttled out of bed and...
Cherry

school photos 62

Detective Close drove to the house in an unmarked police car, a lime-coloured Cortina, and parked with the rear tyres clipping the kerb. His shiny...

notes for tomorrow.

My face and body blur into view with the neonatal features of a melting snowman, something crying and vaguely human. Find a formula. Then milk and...
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Cherry

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‘For God sake keep an eye on her so she doesn’t so something silly.’ Auntie Caroline was washing the dishes in the bigger of the kitchen sinks and...
Cherry

school photos 47

I was laid out like a fish-supper, in the recovery position, on the floor beside William’s desk. His chair and mine have been yanked sideways up...

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1952 of my comments have received 2018 Great Feedback votes

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the wonders of science in a

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2015

the wonders of science in a kind of frankenstein way. Orginal and entertaining. 

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Posted in Recluse

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A nice beat to your poem and

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015

A nice beat to your poem and some great imagery. Well done. Should be sung. 

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Posted in CITY

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evernow is to be the person

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

evernow is to be the person we want to be. Lovely. 

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Posted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.

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family worries, how we scurry

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2015

family worries, how we scurry to and fro from that worry. 

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Posted in Cinderellas Have Stubble Too

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A stor[e]y below 

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

A stor[e]y below 

so the journey begins. Not sure why anyone would volunteer their child for sacrifice. The story of a lottery and sacrifice for the good of the land is more common.

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Posted in Dancing Silhouettes

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take a deep breath, powerful.

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2015

take a deep breath, powerful. 

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Posted in Deterioration Haiku

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we're all capitalists now

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2015

we're all capitalists now comrade. 

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Posted in an American thinks of Russia

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yes, I like it too. 

Posted on Wed, 04 Feb 2015

yes, I like it too. 

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Posted in Orbital (fourth position)

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plot against the crows, often

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015

plot against the crows, often difficult but a lasting image. 

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Posted in Earth Heart (3)

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writers'faces. I was very sad

Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2015

writers'faces. I was very sad to hear about Terence Oblongs death. We spent many a day on the mountain of Just Fucking Write and I must say he was an inspiration. I was a bit peeved however to find I'll be sharing the Valley of the Giant Stoats...

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Posted in The death of Terrence Oblong

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