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I have 1218 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3657256 times and 1256 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1951 of my 16,240 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2017 votes

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Cherry

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‘Hi Sweets.’ Janine rushed out of her room, just as John shuffled out of his, pulling the door shut behind him. ‘We’ll need to stop meeting this way...
Cherry

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The girls’ bedroom door hushed slowly open. Jean had been sleeping as soundly as Joey’s snores allowed her to. Her body, however, was attuned to the...
Cherry

Bullingdon boy.

I wanted to be the kind of cool guy that took thizzz many Budwiesers, drunk all night and all day, didn’t care that I couldn’t talk and nobody was...
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Cherry

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Hunted, running in my dreams, disorientated, scanning left and right; my eyes flickered open focussing on the scabby seat and desk at the window...
Cherry

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Sitting up in bed, the whitewashed wall keeping her back straight, the light of Janine’s cigarette was a beacon in the darkness of the night. John...

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1951 of my comments have received 2017 Great Feedback votes

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yep, a book with insight for

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

yep, a book with insight for people that like to read and should be read.

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Posted in Reviews - In The Day by Kevin Marman

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It's a bit like a video game.

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014

It's a bit like a video game.

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Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine

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really liked this elsie,

Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2014

really liked this elsie, rings true. That's the best compliment I can give.

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Posted in Other Fiction - Treasure Island

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A Dickens of a poem. Well

Posted on Mon, 09 Dec 2013

A Dickens of a poem. Well done!

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Posted in Havisham

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I'm not sure what the

Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2013

I'm not sure what the underlined words or italics are meant to emphasise, but there are lots of surprised in the text and I really liked it.

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Posted in Within the Mirrors

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enjoyed this. thanks.

Posted on Sun, 26 Oct 2008

enjoyed this. thanks.Read full comment

Posted in Bonnie Prince Charlie and the 1745 Jacobite Rebellion

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I especially liked the first

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2011

I especially liked the first stanza, but that is maybe that was just my certain boyish impulses. Great stuff Chris. It's not often I'm proud of 'Futility.'Read full comment

Posted in Futility

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evocative. well done.

Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2010

evocative. well done.Read full comment

Posted in The approach of winter

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Needs a bit of proof reading

Posted on Tue, 09 Mar 2010

Needs a bit of proof reading eg 'She was an attractive and she knew it.' And there is a bit or repetition, you could cut a few hundred words quite easily. A good story, which I enjoyed.Read full comment

Posted in Blood Money

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