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I have 1204 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3424495 times and 1235 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1845 of my 15,969 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1897 votes

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Cherry

school photos 69

Clock time was abolished. They left him to stew in the damp underground cell. Shiny white brick swimming from floor to ceiling. Caged light above his...
Cherry

school photos 68

The front door banged at an ungodly hour. No watch, no alarm clock, to tell him the time, John mashed gummy-sleep from the corners of his eyes with...
Cherry

school photos 67

Lying in bed, John was pickled with sleep and eyed the Christmas-tree brightness of the yellow light shade above his head and the heavy brocade of...
Cherry

school photos 66

John thought a hangover was something old fogeys suffered from, his neck felt chiselled out of Bridge of Don granite and he couldn’t move his head...
Cherry

school photos 65

The do after the funeral was held in St Stephen’s church hall. White linen cloth-covered tables were set out around the perimeter of the wooden floor...

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1845 of my comments have received 1897 Great Feedback votes

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enjoyed this. thanks.

Posted on Sun, 26 Oct 2008

enjoyed this. thanks.Read full comment

Posted in Bonnie Prince Charlie and the 1745 Jacobite Rebellion

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I especially liked the first

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2011

I especially liked the first stanza, but that is maybe that was just my certain boyish impulses. Great stuff Chris. It's not often I'm proud of 'Futility.'Read full comment

Posted in Futility

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evocative. well done.

Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2010

evocative. well done.Read full comment

Posted in The approach of winter

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Needs a bit of proof reading

Posted on Tue, 09 Mar 2010

Needs a bit of proof reading eg 'She was an attractive and she knew it.' And there is a bit or repetition, you could cut a few hundred words quite easily. A good story, which I enjoyed.Read full comment

Posted in Blood Money

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