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I have 1217 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3633748 times and 1254 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1941 of my 16,206 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2006 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Cherry

Every Day Free

The Asian taxi driver sat with the engine running, a half-full bottle of Irn Bru wedged upside down in a loop near the door, sloshing from one fare...
Cherry

bumblebee

The heart script Let me turn away from you While I still can Find a dance Share the past moves Let me murmur in your ear A manifesto of why we are...

Debbie Harry -shut your mouth.

Blondie Denis Denis. Desire of the head. Desire of the heart. What I wish. What I want. Body hell, testing place. Let’s start. Love -fuck forever...
Cherry

godstruck

I mourn the sum of you. The loss of you. The only one I knew. No sweets can make him sweeter. No temper-tantrum tears. No more. Show me the runes. Of...
Cherry

Cogito Ergo Something Something

I’m a creature of habit. All that I seem. An Aristotelian ideal, Proof that I’m real. I believe in faculties. A soul's natural fall. Christians,...

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1941 of my comments have received 2006 Great Feedback votes

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yeh, I like this or get it,

Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016

yeh, I like this or get it, as like seems the wrong words, as does like. I'm sure you know what I mean. 

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Posted in Cannibal

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the rise and fall of us all. 

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016

the rise and fall of us all. 

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Posted in Today We Dressed Up And Pretended To Be Rich

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yellow, my favouritie colour

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016

yellow, my favouritie colour and this is so sweet, it's right up my street. Mellow and blue it combines the colours of you. 

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Posted in Yellow for my daughter

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yep. 3000 words isn't a lot;

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

yep. 3000 words isn't a lot; only it is. All the reasons you outline are lived examples, but what struck me most was the word 'perfect'. First 3000 is never going to be perfect, if it's legible, or evern if it isn't, that's a start. An outline....

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Posted in It shouldn't be this hard...

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he is what he'll be, that's

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2016

he is what he'll be, that's plain to see. 

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Posted in Rising Fives...

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how could you miss it, insert

Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016

how could you miss it, insert? you read everything, even the stuff I've yet to write. that's how good you are. 

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Posted in a day in the sun

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I guess it's a collection of

Posted on Sun, 10 Apr 2016

I guess it's a collection of thoughts and feelings rolling in youth and finding nihilism and no answers which is a kind of answer. That and vodka, of course. 

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Posted in Vodka

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I'm not sure if you've got

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

I'm not sure if you've got the geography of the planets in your head, but I'm guessing you do. Interesting. Sci-fi is a difficult mix of the known and unknown. I think you've got that here. 

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Posted in The Net Caster (Part Eighteen)

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you go from starring in the

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

you go from starring in the latest fitness video to a cowboy film. You never fail to entertain, Jenny. 

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Posted in Proud Moments

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ah, Jenny, you started

Posted on Mon, 04 Apr 2016

ah, Jenny, you started wearing a leotard. I think I seen you in that film stading behind Jamie Lee Curtis as she worked out. Enjoyed your ups and downs. 

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