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I have 1216 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3556930 times and 1252 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1899 of my 16,130 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1960 votes

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grace

After a while she put the book down, Flaubert’s Parrot . She’d gotten a bit confused. There was a magazine rack with a pair of tatty blue slippers in...
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two tone

Two Tone is one of those guy that make your life more interesting than you want it to be. He’s called Two Tone because his skin looks as if it’s been...
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a lesson learned.

Sometimes your life unravels and you know how it happens but you don’t. The phone rings. I check the number. It’s Doreen. I let it ring out. It...
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The Last Act of Love.

Dr Love placed the folders carefully on the table between a tape cassettes, with ear-muffler headphones plugged into it, and an unplugged kettle the...

simple men

‘Nothing to shout about,’ said Lawson. ‘Nothing to worry about either. Quick in and out job.’ He fidgeted, adjusting the specs on his nose. No matter...

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1899 of my comments have received 1960 Great Feedback votes

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that's interesting. Einstein

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

that's interesting. Einstein postulated time and space as being the same (but differrent). I did wonder about the left-handed humming bird. 

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Posted in Pacha

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I guess apocalpytic. When I

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

I guess apocalpytic. When I googled pacha the defintion was some kind of disco. That would certainly put a different meaning on your poem. 

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Posted in Pacha

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a whistful (and lustful)

Posted on Sat, 27 Feb 2016

a whistful (and lustful) passing

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Posted in The End

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I don't want to be

Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2016

I don't want to be politically incorrect, but to state the obvious in language bluer that Dame Tory something or other's hair, would be an impossibility. But I guess that's just part of the story. A place no one wants to be - and you're reporting...

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Posted in My sterile prison cell. Life on a hospital ward

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each bite of the pie and a

Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2016

each bite of the pie and a different lie. There's poetry in those woods. I'm sure they are misunderstood. A parable of a poem in which to our great shame, our masters those that own the pie, are vile enough to know that eating poor people is the...

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Posted in The Everlasting Pie

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I doubt I understand this,

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

I doubt I understand this, but I don't suppose that's such a bad thing. There's nothing malevolent about it. The woman in the black-and--white photograph is pretty. I'd guess from Sim's stories this is a family member. I'm not sure what one part...

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Posted in Doubt is my mistress

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sweet and not in a sugary way

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

sweet and not in a sugary way. 

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Posted in Buster

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Time indeed, has no hold. 

Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016

Time indeed, has no hold. 

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Posted in My dead diary – Sunday 7th February

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lovely - and wooly thoughts

Posted on Sun, 31 Jan 2016

lovely - and wooly thoughts about love and caring - I like that. 

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Posted in SEVENTEEN (after Oliver Comins)

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unbalancing planes is quite a

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2016

unbalancing planes is quite a trick, but I guess I could get good with time. Liked this. 

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Posted in Beginners, Please...

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