celticman

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I have 1200 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3258828 times and 1229 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1792 of my 15,834 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1837 votes

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Debbie Harry -shut your mouth.

Blondie Denis Denis. Desire of the head. Desire of the heart. What I wish. What I want. Body hell, testing place. Let’s start. Love -fuck forever...
Cherry

godstruck

I mourn the sum of you. The loss of you. The only one I knew. No sweets can make him sweeter. No temper-tantrum tears. No more. Show me the runes. Of...
Cherry

Cogito Ergo Something Something

I’m a creature of habit. All that I seem. An Aristotelian ideal, Proof that I’m real. I believe in faculties. A soul's natural fall. Christians,...
Cherry
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Radio static

I go for a drive. My thoughts follow the road. Squeezing up next to each other. I brake. Everyone hurries when they’re younger. Everything a bother...
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Cherry

Cat's cradle.

Lonnie waited at the counter for the store-serving person (non-android) to notice him. Artfact was the kind of shop Lonnie tended to avoid. ‘HISTORY...

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1792 of my comments have received 1837 Great Feedback votes

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the use of quartz stone for

Posted on Fri, 23 May 2014

the use of quartz stone for freezing it one of those details that make everything so real. Look forward to more. Another great episode. I'm wondering what Ian's game is? Something about him getting drunk so easily points to some kind of illness?...

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Posted in Ch4: May 15th part 2

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what room? You lucky knob.

Posted on Sun, 11 May 2014

what room? You lucky knob. Fifteen and I was still working out what to do with it. 

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Posted in The Walthamstow Bird

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not sure about the Panda Gods

Posted on Sun, 11 May 2014

not sure about the Panda Gods and 'Dawn lighted the sky...' doesn't sound right, but apart from that some beautiful descriptions.

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Posted in Triptych

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yep, a close call with those

Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014

yep, a close call with those clowns. It was so close it was surreal. Great story. I'm not familiair with all those American shows, but I guess you nose that.

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Posted in A Nose by Any Other Name

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Childhood’s a place, son, and

Posted on Sun, 20 Apr 2014

Childhood’s a place, son, and not a time. ' visited and revisited. A holiday from the self. Lovely. 

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Posted in At Holcombe Beach (I.P.)

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thanks blackjack, I'm working

Posted on Fri, 23 Aug 2013

thanks blackjack, I'm working my way through it, knocking off the crusty corners of the worst bloomers.

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Posted in school photos

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I don't know enough about

Posted on Wed, 02 Apr 2014

I don't know enough about poetry to coment about rhythm, metre or lieation, but the imagery is wonderful and the voice is true.

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Posted in It is I, Abiku

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the crew seem afire and I'm

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014

the crew seem afire and I'm sure that death and glory is their desire.

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Posted in The Crew of the Wolverine

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supernatural ending Vera.

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014

supernatural ending Vera. which means you can do and say anythng and nobody believes you.

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Posted in school photos 71

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I'm sure Kellen could get

Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2014

I'm sure Kellen could get used to Jake and others' suffering and getting payback.

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Posted in Gifts That Cost Your Soul 3

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