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I have 1203 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
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Jack O'Donnell

 

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the day before Christmas

Christmas Eve is the cruellest day. Doreen steps up behind an old guy stinking of fags and booze, sporting a baseball cap back to front, reddish hair...
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tender souls 2

Hallelujah said it wasn’t far and he carried their suitcase. But by the time they got there Ray’s feet hurt. Hoar frost made the slopes from the Old...
Cherry

angry-white man

BNP cynicism. First came the drunken Paddy. Then the grasping Jew. Smelly Paki. Polish Plasterer Romanian rats Who’s to blame for our nation’s shame...

the fifth day

It was the fifth hour, after the day of rest, when in he went down. A great silence filled the trees and dust lay over all the land. In the shadows,...
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agonising questions

Pain we get free? No’ well? – some liberty! Get down on your knees and pray You don’t have to be that way It’s no easy becoming Freud Asking question...

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1829 of my comments have received 1880 Great Feedback votes

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as[]well as some brooches, 

Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015

as[]well as some brooches, 

to invisible, microscopic bacteria [he can't see them or sense them [cut]

he was in fact meditating [cut, you're telling the reader something he is aware of [cut?]

never[]mind

lovely, really...

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Posted in Jake Mutant - Chapter Two

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poor Jeremy I think the media

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

poor Jeremy I think the media assault will make him the ploughed field. Good to see Labour finally having some policies that don't mirror tit-for-tat Tory policy eg Miliband's pre-election boast to go with the Tory spending cuts if elected. Fuck...

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Posted in For the love of Jeremy Corbyn

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interesting, I was just

Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2015

interesting, I was just thinking about something similiar (but different). How each generation weighs time. Trees by their weight of leaves offers the obivious analogy, are we so different? 

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Posted in My Father's House

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the sunset must have invaded

Posted on Tue, 22 Sep 2015

the sunset must have invaded the sky an orange.' I know what you mean, [the sun makes the sky glow orange] a little more care and you'll be right up there. 

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Posted in Running on Desire - The Boat

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there's a kind of coming back

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015

there's a kind of coming back I like, an echo of the past and present, the begining and end. 

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Posted in The sound of my love

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you carry on too Jeanne we

Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015

you carry on too Jeanne we just muck in and write as we do. 

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Posted in dread-nought

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feels real. a headache that

Posted on Sat, 05 Sep 2015

feels real. a headache that binds all thoughts to hurry up and pass or let me die.  

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Posted in Migraine

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Reminded me a bit of Stephen

Posted on Tue, 01 Sep 2015

Reminded me a bit of Stephen King (Stand by Me and The Tommyknockers) it's certainly got that otherness that affects dreams and memory and turns a body. I don't think 'no one' needs a hypen. And I'm not sure about choosing 'initiates'. I love the...

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Posted in Relic

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thanks vera and littlebit. I

Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015

thanks vera and littlebit. I acutally forgot I wrote this. I guess that photo of the wee boy in the sand, like the one in MyLi, of a little girl burning in Vietnam, makes you think, just a splurge of sound, on paper, no real sense. What makes me...

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Posted in dread-nought

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I suppose getting it down on

Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2015

I suppose getting it down on 'paper' might help? 

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Posted in Love Journal #1 Damage Control

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