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I have 1196 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3234960 times and 1224 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1808 of my 16,038 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1854 votes

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grace

After a while she put the book down, Flaubert’s Parrot . She’d gotten a bit confused. There was a magazine rack with a pair of tatty blue slippers in...
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two tone

Two Tone is one of those guy that make your life more interesting than you want it to be. He’s called Two Tone because his skin looks as if it’s been...
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a lesson learned.

Sometimes your life unravels and you know how it happens but you don’t. The phone rings. I check the number. It’s Doreen. I let it ring out. It...
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The Last Act of Love.

Dr Love placed the folders carefully on the table between a tape cassettes, with ear-muffler headphones plugged into it, and an unplugged kettle the...

simple men

‘Nothing to shout about,’ said Lawson. ‘Nothing to worry about either. Quick in and out job.’ He fidgeted, adjusting the specs on his nose. No matter...

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1808 of my comments have received 1854 Great Feedback votes

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my votes for Darwin. I'm sure

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

my votes for Darwin. I'm sure God would understand. I'm only a man. 

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Posted in I Can't Believe In Darwin's Theory

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Guilt and duty. Those

Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2015

Guilt and duty. Those sisphyean calls we heed or not are played out here and I like your ending. There's a sadness that runs through the story and finds expression in relief - and guilt. 

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Posted in Doing a good thing

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Lovely and gentle

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015

Lovely and gentle remembrances filled with the flowers and icons of childhood. A treat to read. 

 

 Years ago my grandparents did not have TV or fridge a long time; [This is ambiguious. Your grandparents did not have a TV and fridge...

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Posted in My Childhood in the Countryside

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all's well in that flag

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015

all's well in that flag-waving hell, some little grief that runs too deep, or something similiar your may say, but we live to fight another day. That's a ryhme crime!

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Posted in Berkeley (The Californian Tragedy)

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the dead have all the good

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015

the dead have all the good lines and it'd be mad not to enjoy it. 

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Posted in Dan's Dead

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to really suffer it must be

Posted on Wed, 17 Jun 2015

to really suffer it must be brocolli. It's green. It's mean. It's obscene. But it's high in something or other. Chocolate is the devil's spawn. I know which way I was born. 

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Posted in A Medal!

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wonderful winding ways and

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2015

wonderful winding ways and finding your way home. An interesting journey or pilgramage the purpose of which is not clear, but it doesn't matter, with each step something gives. 

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Posted in Camino 16a – 3 October 2014

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interesting fairy-tale type

Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015

interesting fairy-tale type story. 

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Posted in The Ravens of Portobello

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the wonders of science in a

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2015

the wonders of science in a kind of frankenstein way. Orginal and entertaining. 

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Posted in Recluse

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A nice beat to your poem and

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015

A nice beat to your poem and some great imagery. Well done. Should be sung. 

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Posted in CITY

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