celticman

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I have 1195 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3166248 times and 1223 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1775 of my 15,956 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1817 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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thought police

When thoughts fail That’s a thing Do they go to a mental gym? Do they spell calisthenics? Hope to hop on one leg Spend leisure time in a different...
Cherry

only you

Sunlight lacks warmth Light without you Forget loyalty and respect Dark rise of swollen belly in our bed Glimmering embers of what we said Love gone...
Gold cherry

the day before Christmas

Christmas Eve is the cruellest day. Doreen steps up behind an old guy stinking of fags and booze, sporting a baseball cap back to front, reddish hair...
Cherry

tender souls 2

Hallelujah said it wasn’t far and he carried their suitcase. But by the time they got there Ray’s feet hurt. Hoar frost made the slopes from the Old...
Cherry

angry-white man

BNP cynicism. First came the drunken Paddy. Then the grasping Jew. Smelly Paki. Polish Plasterer Romanian rats Who’s to blame for our nation’s shame...

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1775 of my comments have received 1817 Great Feedback votes

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evernow is to be the person

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

evernow is to be the person we want to be. Lovely. 

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Posted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.

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family worries, how we scurry

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2015

family worries, how we scurry to and fro from that worry. 

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Posted in Cinderellas Have Stubble Too

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A stor[e]y below 

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

A stor[e]y below 

so the journey begins. Not sure why anyone would volunteer their child for sacrifice. The story of a lottery and sacrifice for the good of the land is more common.

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Posted in Dancing Silhouettes

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take a deep breath, powerful.

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2015

take a deep breath, powerful. 

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Posted in Deterioration Haiku

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we're all capitalists now

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2015

we're all capitalists now comrade. 

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Posted in an American thinks of Russia

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yes, I like it too. 

Posted on Wed, 04 Feb 2015

yes, I like it too. 

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Posted in Orbital (fourth position)

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plot against the crows, often

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015

plot against the crows, often difficult but a lasting image. 

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Posted in Earth Heart (3)

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writers'faces. I was very sad

Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2015

writers'faces. I was very sad to hear about Terence Oblongs death. We spent many a day on the mountain of Just Fucking Write and I must say he was an inspiration. I was a bit peeved however to find I'll be sharing the Valley of the Giant Stoats...

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Posted in The death of Terrence Oblong

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I like these tales of Emer's

Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015

I like these tales of Emer's Ireland and Archie Given going taking his life. 

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Posted in The Hill in the Pale

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I read it in one gulp, but it

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

I read it in one gulp, but it went down smoothly. Lovely as a draught of a draught. 

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Posted in Christmas Game Over

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