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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2673161 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1668 of my 15,587 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1701 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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sense and insensibility

‘It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.’ Pride and Prejudice. Could she...
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free rites

You’ve come a long way From nits in your hair Suit yourself Tears of anger and shame When you went hame Mum would say ‘The world’s just that way’ It’...
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the honourable member for Witney

Best thinking comes from not thinking The proud voice is the loud voice Pontification of what need to be done The great nob-game of bob-a-job To keep...
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poet on the rack

Philosophers and poets discuss how it is to be More tree than tree Point of view fucks off to Timbuktu Imagination pickled on a straight line In...
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Land lubber

Only the sea contains the sea Laws of sensation Balance on moon beams Light burning in the turn Roll and crest and crown Crop of water healing below...

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1668 of my comments have received 1701 Great Feedback votes

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start chiselling now lavadis

Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014

start chiselling now lavadis

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Posted in Unbounders Away

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not sure what a foofie valve

Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014

not sure what a foofie valve is, but the competition is hotting up.

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Posted in Competing - Prologue 2

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What I've read so far is

Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014

What I've read so far is intriguing.

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Posted in Competing - Prologue 1

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the use of quartz stone for

Posted on Fri, 23 May 2014

the use of quartz stone for freezing it one of those details that make everything so real. Look forward to more. Another great episode. I'm wondering what Ian's game is? Something about him getting drunk so easily points to some kind of illness?...

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Posted in Ch4: May 15th part 2

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what room? You lucky knob.

Posted on Sun, 11 May 2014

what room? You lucky knob. Fifteen and I was still working out what to do with it. 

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Posted in The Walthamstow Bird

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not sure about the Panda Gods

Posted on Sun, 11 May 2014

not sure about the Panda Gods and 'Dawn lighted the sky...' doesn't sound right, but apart from that some beautiful descriptions.

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Posted in Triptych

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yep, a close call with those

Posted on Sat, 03 May 2014

yep, a close call with those clowns. It was so close it was surreal. Great story. I'm not familiair with all those American shows, but I guess you nose that.

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Posted in A Nose by Any Other Name

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Childhood’s a place, son, and

Posted on Sun, 20 Apr 2014

Childhood’s a place, son, and not a time. ' visited and revisited. A holiday from the self. Lovely. 

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Posted in At Holcombe Beach (I.P.)

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thanks blackjack, I'm working

Posted on Fri, 23 Aug 2013

thanks blackjack, I'm working my way through it, knocking off the crusty corners of the worst bloomers.

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Posted in school photos

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I don't know enough about

Posted on Wed, 02 Apr 2014

I don't know enough about poetry to coment about rhythm, metre or lieation, but the imagery is wonderful and the voice is true.

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Posted in It is I, Abiku

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