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I have 1179 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2641813 times and 1205 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1657 of my 15,539 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1689 votes

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poet on the rack

Philosophers and poets discuss how it is to be More tree than tree Point of view fucks off to Timbuktu Imagination pickled on a straight line In...
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Land lubber

Only the sea contains the sea Laws of sensation Balance on moon beams Light burning in the turn Roll and crest and crown Crop of water healing below...
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the visitor

I kiss the ghost in the study, you have to wind down curved stairs to reach, pass a similar entrance, with a similar set of keys, and fly down...
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Love Cats

‘I never met Mr Hitler but he seemed like a nice man,’ said Mum. ‘I said Hiller Mum. Hiller!’ Mum wasn’t fazed by my outburst. ‘That’s what I said.’...
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thought police

When thoughts fail That’s a thing Do they go to a mental gym? Do they spell calisthenics? Hope to hop on one leg Spend leisure time in a different...

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1657 of my comments have received 1689 Great Feedback votes

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supernatural ending Vera.

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014

supernatural ending Vera. which means you can do and say anythng and nobody believes you.

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Posted in school photos 71

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I'm sure Kellen could get

Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2014

I'm sure Kellen could get used to Jake and others' suffering and getting payback.

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Posted in Gifts That Cost Your Soul 3

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an oldie, nicely told. I'll

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2006

an oldie, nicely told. I'll have a look at your new book. well done

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Posted in An Atheist Family Christmas

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nice story, lovely ending, an

Posted on Sun, 02 Mar 2014

nice story, lovely ending, an aphorism.

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Posted in Más que la belleza

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some lovely imagery.

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2014

some lovely imagery.

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Posted in The secret to Hollyhocks

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This is very good. Jason's

Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014

This is very good. Jason's voice is just right. You don't need to say 'I make an effort at politeness'. You've already shown it and that's added commentary. Similiarly, appearances' sake is a bit convoluted and would be better left as appearance...

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Posted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 2 of 3

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ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2014

ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be watching for more of this, made me smile.

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Posted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 1 of 3

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yep, a book with insight for

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

yep, a book with insight for people that like to read and should be read.

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Posted in Reviews - In The Day by Kevin Marman

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It's a bit like a video game.

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014

It's a bit like a video game.

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Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine

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really liked this elsie,

Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2014

really liked this elsie, rings true. That's the best compliment I can give.

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Posted in Other Fiction - Treasure Island

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