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I have 1214 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3530384 times and 1249 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1885 of my 16,096 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1944 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Cherry

standing in the queue to order a word kebab at my local takeaway

What would you like? Voice of division Voice of derision Vice setting tone Garnish with that? Waiting for a letter to arrive Swirly bluebottle battle...
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Cherry

huts 5 (rewrite)

The office is too warm. I sit squelched and sweating under the pall of Wullie the Poles’s Senoir Service , nose buried in files, eyes shifting...

doodles

Little bit thing lying in your sprawl Crying as if the world will end It might It might This very night But don’t you bite Settle on a secret There’s...
Cherry

in a better place

You stop thinking after a time Rubbery words from books not read Answers to life’s geography Warped fizzing can of physiology Keep it under you hate...

huts 4 (rewrite)

Heebie-jeebies, I can’t sit still to read through the file on Norean Kileen. Try not to be too obvious. I spy on her as she waltzes down the corridor...

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1885 of my comments have received 1944 Great Feedback votes

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captivating and carries the

Posted on Sun, 21 Oct 2018

captivating and carries the glory of the world. 

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Posted in clues

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nice one, and finished with a

Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018

nice one, and finished with a question. Did the durnk lady make the plane? Answers on a postcard. 

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Posted in First Impressions

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the inner child sometimes

Posted on Sun, 30 Sep 2018

the inner child sometimes gets lost or forgotten. we all need a little hand. 

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Posted in Inner Child

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the centre cannot hold

Posted on Sat, 13 Oct 2018

the centre cannot hold

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Posted in Here the Gyres rest

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a cat has more than nine

Posted on Thu, 11 Oct 2018

a cat has more than nine lives. I'm glad you're counting. 

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Posted in Moses, The Spider Slayer!

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Biggest Elvis, P.F.Kluge

Posted on Mon, 08 Oct 2018

Biggest Elvis, P.F.Kluge-nessy. 

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Posted in "Thang Yew Ver' Much"

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yeh, Pink Lady, we've all got

Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018

yeh, Pink Lady, we've all got mobility issues, but you tell it well. 

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Posted in Mobility

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great writing harry, I'd love

Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018

great writing harry, I'd love to read your novel. I will read your novel when you're ready. 

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Posted in How writing (and a cat called Daisy) may have saved my life...

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It's great to see you writing

Posted on Tue, 02 Oct 2018

It's great to see you writing harry and you are a great writer. I reviewed your novel somewhere, possibly even here. I read a lot of posts on places like fakebook and aspiring authors always come away with the 'can I make a living from writing...

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Posted in 9 to 5

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It's been such a pleasure

Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018

It's been such a pleasure reading this post and all the supportive comments it makes me feel almost human. Brilliant. Keep at the writing Harry and shine. 

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Posted in A Martian in the Closet

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