celticman

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I have 1194 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3110430 times and 1222 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1757 of my 15,903 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1798 votes

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mystic mike

I will punish myself with myself drift on –alone putty around the edges stylites from the nineties council house and dog man without a job ascetic...
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flockers 11

Swirled whisky around my tongue. Listened to the shrill see-saw cadence and frenzied excitement in his voice and the little gulps of silence. Poured...
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flockers 10

Must admit the journey home was constrained, especially on the train. Didn’t see much of Myra in the next few weeks. Neither of us had a phone. Put...
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flockers 9

Felt better. Scrubbed up as best as I could in the morning, a complexion like boiled pink ham, showed a face no mother would kiss. Breakfast a...
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Story of the week

King of the Dole

Eleven o’clock opening. Davie wedged himself on his usual barstool with his back to the mosaic of square windows. He leaned across a bar still wet...

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1757 of my comments have received 1798 Great Feedback votes

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the mastery of time seems to

Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015

the mastery of time seems to be your line. I guess Switzerland isn't much of a date, especially if you've left life too late, but what wonderful recall, it's a lesson to us all. 

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Posted in 'Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World'

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time spins and

Posted on Wed, 11 Nov 2015

time spins and circumnavigates and I guess we place our bet of whose to blame on the table, never thinking our number will come up. 

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Posted in oot ma heed.

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panic indeed. simple sentence

Posted on Tue, 10 Nov 2015

panic indeed. simple sentence are good, but look for a bit more variety. 

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Posted in Panic Room

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check on your Mum as a name

Posted on Mon, 02 Nov 2015

check on your Mum as a name and as a description (eg my mum). I'm not sure how jaggy stones catch elbows (too high up the body) in opening paragraph. That apart. The tone is just right. Possible story of the week. Gets my vote. 

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Posted in Fly like Superman

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ouch, sock on the wrong

Posted on Sun, 25 Oct 2015

ouch, sock on the wrong appendage, the wrong foot that's not a foot. As all good stories it starts as one think (alternative therapy) and melds into something deeper, lighter and heavier. 

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Posted in White Light

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art for art's sake that is

Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015

art for art's sake that is why we create. money counterfeits that scheme, but leaves us queasy and uneasy with what is real. 

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Posted in Barcelona

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there's no stupidity in not

Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015

there's no stupidity in not knowing. Stupidity is when we kid on we do Jean. 

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Posted in CAPABILITY FOR WORK

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I remember the brothers well.

Posted on Tue, 06 Oct 2015

I remember the brothers well. My neighbours Dingle Dingleberrry were distintly related to the Dingleberry and had troule finding his toes. The Steampowered Valet disrober was a boon as it allowed him to look the other way when it was put into...

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Posted in A Victorian Gentleman and the Steam Age

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primal beauty. 

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015

primal beauty. 

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Posted in Starry, Starry Night

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an interesting insight into

Posted on Fri, 02 Oct 2015

an interesting insight into what it means to be a boxer, both inside and outside the ring. 

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Posted in The Boxing Match From A Boxer's Perspective

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