celticman

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I have 1180 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2649454 times and 1206 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1659 of my 15,563 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1691 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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the tug boat

The Tug Boat pub was infected by McAllisters. He turned to go before he was spotted, but he made his move too late. ‘Happy Anniversary’ went the war...
Cherry

Toy-town.

A girl is broken. Clocks slide slowly forward. Gouging out bruised life in chunks. Short days. Endless nights. On the wrong time. On the wrong line...
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Cherry

exile

Woke up this morning. She could talk forever. We had less than an hour. Little book of miracles in her hand Understand. We were kind to each other So...
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Cherry
Story of the week

you get what not

Jo warned me, twice, ‘behave yourself’. But she didn’t trust me. Bundled me out the front door, and shoved me down the steps to make sure I got the...
Gold cherry

longest day

Everything different. Everything the same. Room minging of dampness. His bed and mine. I was convalescing after some long illness. I couldn’t...
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1659 of my comments have received 1691 Great Feedback votes

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No one is stopping you. Write

Posted on Wed, 10 Sep 2014

No one is stopping you. Write and be wonderful.

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Posted in I Hate Being 19!

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Nothing is something and this

Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014

Nothing is something and this is dazzling.

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Posted in After Death

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Geoff seemed like one of the

Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014

Geoff seemed like one of the good guys. Yet he get's done over as a bad guy. Great volte and twist at the end. Great story.

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Posted in Four doors down

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the rain, the clouds, the cry

Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014

the rain, the clouds, the cry of the children, a background noise dripping with melancholy. After the darkness there may be light, but the darkness remanis.

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Posted in After the flood

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hard to get [h]old of

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014

hard to get [h]old of

interesting, but needs split up into paragraphs. bit of a blob the way it's set out and likely to stop people from reading more, which would be a pity.

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Posted in No Man's land

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Don't know why your shorten

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014

Don't know why your shorten until to the more colloquial 'til in the last paragraph, a sudden colluquialism that doesn't quite gell.

Verm imaginative. I couldn't get grey man, but blue man, well, that set the tone.

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Posted in Shredding

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humble and sad, but never bad

Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014

humble and sad, but never bad.

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Posted in Mistakes

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I'm excited about what's

Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014

I'm excited about what's about to happen too.

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Posted in Out of Control-5

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psalms [palms of hands]

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014

psalms [palms of hands]

type out a candlestick

don;t don't

plenty or rain today and I know how the narrator feels.

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Posted in A late summers day

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Fracking bomb is captialised

Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014

Fracking bomb is captialised and uncapitalised. I share many of your concerns.

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Posted in This life is a plastic wrap

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