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little Hiroshima in my head

By celticman on Mon, 20 Jul 2015

Little Hiroshima in my head. Up in the air Single self fractures and disintegrates Leaving life too late Making rubble of the past A future that will...

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huts 2 (rewrite)

By celticman on Tue, 14 Jul 2015

'I'm looking for Ailsa ward.' I speak too quickly, trying to sound as confident as him, almost stuttering. But if I stuttered I would have died. The...

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huts 1 (rewrite)

By celticman on Mon, 13 Jul 2015

The security guard with a pencil moustache, slides open the window of the lodge at the hospital gates and addresses me as ‘sir’. I’m given directions...

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the case for the prosecution

By celticman on Sat, 11 Jul 2015

Every morning Papa Adams opened early to catch workmen before they started the early shift in the yard. He pushed her belly out like a pram and...

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yellow, my favouritie colour

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016

yellow, my favouritie colour and this is so sweet, it's right up my street. Mellow and blue it combines the colours of you.

Posted in Yellow for my daughter

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enjoyed reading about your

Posted on Tue, 17 May 2016

enjoyed reading about your travels.

Posted in Tommy Mel's

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yep. 3000 words isn't a lot;

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

yep. 3000 words isn't a lot; only it is. All the reasons you outline are lived examples, but what struck me most was the word 'perfect'. First 3000 is never going to be perfect, if it's legible, or evern if it isn't, that's a start. An outline....

Posted in It shouldn't be this hard...

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he is what he'll be, that's

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2016

he is what he'll be, that's plain to see.

Posted in Rising Fives...

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how could you miss it, insert

Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016

how could you miss it, insert? you read everything, even the stuff I've yet to write. that's how good you are.

Posted in a day in the sun

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I guess it's a collection of

Posted on Sun, 10 Apr 2016

I guess it's a collection of thoughts and feelings rolling in youth and finding nihilism and no answers which is a kind of answer. That and vodka, of course.

Posted in Vodka

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I'm not sure if you've got

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

I'm not sure if you've got the geography of the planets in your head, but I'm guessing you do. Interesting. Sci-fi is a difficult mix of the known and unknown. I think you've got that here.

Posted in The Net Caster (Part Eighteen)

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you go from starring in the

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

you go from starring in the latest fitness video to a cowboy film. You never fail to entertain, Jenny.

Posted in Proud Moments

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ah, Jenny, you started

Posted on Mon, 04 Apr 2016

ah, Jenny, you started wearing a leotard. I think I seen you in that film stading behind Jamie Lee Curtis as she worked out. Enjoyed your ups and downs.

Posted in Proud Moments

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each according to their

Posted on Fri, 25 Mar 2016

each according to their ability. Poetic in answer. Pleasing in nature. Wise in many ways. bon mots.