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I have 1194 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3110431 times and 1222 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1757 of my 15,903 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1798 votes

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Cherry

standing in the queue to order a word kebab at my local takeaway

What would you like? Voice of division Voice of derision Vice setting tone Garnish with that? Waiting for a letter to arrive Swirly bluebottle battle...
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Cherry

huts 5 (rewrite)

The office is too warm. I sit squelched and sweating under the pall of Wullie the Poles’s Senoir Service , nose buried in files, eyes shifting...

doodles

Little bit thing lying in your sprawl Crying as if the world will end It might It might This very night But don’t you bite Settle on a secret There’s...
Cherry

in a better place

You stop thinking after a time Rubbery words from books not read Answers to life’s geography Warped fizzing can of physiology Keep it under you hate...

huts 4 (rewrite)

Heebie-jeebies, I can’t sit still to read through the file on Norean Kileen. Try not to be too obvious. I spy on her as she waltzes down the corridor...

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1757 of my comments have received 1798 Great Feedback votes

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we're all weak and fragile.

Posted on Wed, 29 Jun 2016

we're all weak and fragile. That is our strength. 

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Posted in OverPowered

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I'm not even as simple as I

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2016

I'm not even as simple as I think.

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Posted in Outery (Salt of the Earth)

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if life is a classroom I'm in

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016

if life is a classroom I'm in the wrong school. 

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Posted in Classroom

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in a circle, in a cycle, a

Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016

in a circle, in a cycle, a controlled storm of writing. 

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Posted in The First Step

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this is good, really good,

Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2016

this is good, really good, but could be far better if you broke the three seperate narratives into seperate storylines of six, thirteen and eighteen. Slow down time. It's got an edge about it, which I like. 

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Posted in I didn't want to do it

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The movement and moments of

Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016

The movement and moments of silence and complicity make a sweet kind of electiricity. 

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Posted in Something Dead In The Road

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difficult question to answer,

Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2016

difficult question to answer, but I guess poetry throws a light. 

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Posted in I Really Deserve

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Lovely and the denouement

Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016

Lovely and the denouement fits like a driver's glove. 

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Posted in SECRETS Part 2

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yeh, I like this or get it,

Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016

yeh, I like this or get it, as like seems the wrong words, as does like. I'm sure you know what I mean. 

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Posted in Cannibal

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the rise and fall of us all. 

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016

the rise and fall of us all. 

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Posted in Today We Dressed Up And Pretended To Be Rich

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