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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2683909 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1671 of my 15,599 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1704 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Bible John 2

I clutch the handle of my holdall, with my purse secure inside. ‘I’m not sure,’ I say. I hold a leaflet out as a shield. ‘Perhaps she’ll get some of...
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Bible John

‘Why do they call you Bible John?’ I ask. ‘They’re just takin the cunt,’ he says. Then apologises a few seconds later for his language. I was given...
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poppy's last shout

Cast adrift. Poppy’s single room in the hospital annex is sparse and milky as a bone. The umbilical cord of the machine by her bed works almost...
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The big Malky

Frank took two days to hitchhike down to London. It was all new. A night sleeping in a plastic bin bag sheltering outside a Tube station, with what...
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snap

You didn’t need to be a fortune teller to work out what Granda was thinking. Eyes windows of the soul, but eyebrows garbed like two grey squirrel...

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1671 of my comments have received 1704 Great Feedback votes

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tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow,

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow, might never come, poor today, but rich in another way. 

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Posted in A Friend Named Big Bird

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that's the truth, truth,

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015

that's the truth, truth, Nothing I can say, but the world doesn't have to be that way. 

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Posted in This is the world we live in:

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death is never far away. Not

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015

death is never far away. Not us we pray. But for a moment we lie and watch the bird of prey fly by. Lovely. 

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Posted in Kite

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excellent, fast paced with

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

excellent, fast paced with characters that stand out and great ending. bound to be trouble. Ideal for the dealer. 

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Posted in Chapter Three

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eighteen, bursting with life,

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

eighteen, bursting with life, when you believe your a man but just a boy, chained to the grass, forever, or until forgotten. Sad. Funnily enough a guy reversed in a van today and shouted my brother's name. he thought I was him. He's dead, of...

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Posted in Out of This World

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sleep is so important. The

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

sleep is so important. The more we think how important it is the less likely we are to enjoy it. 

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Posted in A.M.

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the only winners are the

Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015

the only winners are the losers. sadly. Enjoyed this snatch of life. 

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Posted in Fay's Flutter

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music does the work of place

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

music does the work of place and time. Lard cake sounds disgusting, but anything sweet is a treat. Then the ending. Makes you think. Poor wee souls. 

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Posted in Cravings (One)

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sounds about right

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

sounds about right -unfortunately. 

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Posted in Caliphate

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my votes for Darwin. I'm sure

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

my votes for Darwin. I'm sure God would understand. I'm only a man. 

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Posted in I Can't Believe In Darwin's Theory

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