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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2870242 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Ambush

If you don’t get by Don’t ask why Maybe next year Shift your feet Move on Can’t you see? Work harder Become like me Cleanse the dust Sunny side up...
Cherry

fix you 3

Back at base, doors scanned and measured Inspector Allan’s approach and let him through. Office walls ebbed and flowed and doubled as free-floating...

toxic bubbles over Manchester

Heat febrile facts—folly blooms Gather the witch’s stool A fiend inspired Little potions, little notions, little imps Shrink chaos and sell the jar...
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Easy Tiger.

‘Easy Tiger,’ Archie said, swaying and backing away towards the living room door. He wasn’t sure how a ten-foot long Bengali tiger had squeezed into...
Cherry

quickie

I’d a bad night. The guy upstairs had a burst pipe on Tuesday, which he didn’t know about. Next thing it’s Thursday, the ceiling comes down, and I’m...

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1693 of my comments have received 1727 Great Feedback votes

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 a murder of crows. Yeh, I

Posted on Mon, 21 Mar 2016

 a murder of crows. Yeh, I understand the symbolism. 

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Posted in A gathering of crows part 1

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that's interesting. Einstein

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

that's interesting. Einstein postulated time and space as being the same (but differrent). I did wonder about the left-handed humming bird. 

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Posted in Pacha

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I guess apocalpytic. When I

Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2016

I guess apocalpytic. When I googled pacha the defintion was some kind of disco. That would certainly put a different meaning on your poem. 

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Posted in Pacha

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a whistful (and lustful)

Posted on Sat, 27 Feb 2016

a whistful (and lustful) passing

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Posted in The End

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I don't want to be

Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2016

I don't want to be politically incorrect, but to state the obvious in language bluer that Dame Tory something or other's hair, would be an impossibility. But I guess that's just part of the story. A place no one wants to be - and you're reporting...

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Posted in My sterile prison cell. Life on a hospital ward

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each bite of the pie and a

Posted on Fri, 19 Feb 2016

each bite of the pie and a different lie. There's poetry in those woods. I'm sure they are misunderstood. A parable of a poem in which to our great shame, our masters those that own the pie, are vile enough to know that eating poor people is the...

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Posted in The Everlasting Pie

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I doubt I understand this,

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

I doubt I understand this, but I don't suppose that's such a bad thing. There's nothing malevolent about it. The woman in the black-and--white photograph is pretty. I'd guess from Sim's stories this is a family member. I'm not sure what one part...

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Posted in Doubt is my mistress

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sweet and not in a sugary way

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016

sweet and not in a sugary way. 

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Posted in Buster

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Time indeed, has no hold. 

Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2016

Time indeed, has no hold. 

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Posted in My dead diary – Sunday 7th February

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lovely - and wooly thoughts

Posted on Sun, 31 Jan 2016

lovely - and wooly thoughts about love and caring - I like that. 

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Posted in SEVENTEEN (after Oliver Comins)

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