celticman

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I have 1189 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2901461 times and 1217 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1701 of my 15,722 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1737 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Ferme

A tree of meaning grows bark Leans to-and-fro Week by week something new Light shifting through Lopped off words Out on a limb Life keeps tripping...

Peachy pictures

Told to sort through my things. You were funny, born nearer to the Sex Pistols with their purple Mohican hairdos, their zips and spits and fuck you,...
Gold cherry

CAPABILITY FOR WORK

Medical training costs one million To produce the right kind of thumb Upside down –you are all right son Shave a billionth of our tax penury Arbeit...
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Cherry

how to be stupid

Reading is the engine of writing. Tune up. Breathe in the perfume of words and phrases. Become familiar with ignorance. Recognise it in yourself...
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Cherry
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dread-nought

Phrases orphaned and read cramming inside my head conversations of sounds drowning, clowning around silence of the heart dual rhythm apart...
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1701 of my comments have received 1737 Great Feedback votes

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oh, date with new dentures.

Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016

oh, date with new dentures. the wolf equivalent of garlic. Nice little mix and minx of a story. 

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Posted in Rudy, Lil Red and DJ Gran [Red Riding Hood Retelling]

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beautiful and true -god knows

Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2016

beautiful and true -god knows it's true and so do you. 

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Posted in Triptych 1: Mass

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the afforntery of that Clare,

Posted on Mon, 04 Jan 2016

the afforntery of that Clare, watch out for the creak of the wardrobe and soon she'll no be there. I like this.

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Posted in The Wardrobe

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 Vietnamese with a waiting [t

Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015

 Vietnamese with a waiting [t]Taxi driver

 he [w]Winced.

characterisation and descriptive prose are great. 

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Posted in The March of the Dragons Chapter 2 (minus the last paragraph due to word count).

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the world is a friendlier

Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015

the world is a friendlier place when we smile. 

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Posted in Sometimes...

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in case they hurt themselves,

Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2015

in case they hurt themselves, you see, I see clearly, but what can you do when there's only me and you? 

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Posted in Glass is a Supercooled Liquid

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good ending in a sickish sort

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015

good ending in a sickish sort of way, sums the story up well. I can't say I've noticed anything like that in my local forays through the park, but I guess as it's always pissing down that helps dampen people's rogering forays. 

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Posted in the shared park

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I didn't think he was very

Posted on Sat, 21 Nov 2015

I didn't think he was very funny. I'll rephrase that, he wasn't funny, but I didn't think you got jailed for it. That worries me. I'm packing my cardigans into a bag now. Ready to flee to England where there's a lot of funny folk. Just another...

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Posted in Plot without a story

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the mastery of time seems to

Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015

the mastery of time seems to be your line. I guess Switzerland isn't much of a date, especially if you've left life too late, but what wonderful recall, it's a lesson to us all. 

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Posted in 'Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World'

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time spins and

Posted on Wed, 11 Nov 2015

time spins and circumnavigates and I guess we place our bet of whose to blame on the table, never thinking our number will come up. 

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Posted in oot ma heed.

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