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I have 1193 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3093672 times and 1221 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1751 of my 15,888 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1792 votes

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Cherry

quickie

I’d a bad night. The guy upstairs had a burst pipe on Tuesday, which he didn’t know about. Next thing it’s Thursday, the ceiling comes down, and I’m...
Cherry

fix you 2

Gary didn’t want to go out and play. He was small for his age. They could fix that his dad had said, but they didn’t have the money, and anyway you...
Cherry

Fix You

The window in the squad car scanned Inspector Allan’s retinas before taking him where he had to go. A child had been found lying in the snow. From...
Cherry

spider town

I saved a spider in a paper cup. It spidered away with the cup I caught a spider with a soup pot It spidered away with the pot I cornered a spider in...

Ferme

A tree of meaning grows bark Leans to-and-fro Week by week something new Light shifting through Lopped off words Out on a limb Life keeps tripping...

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1751 of my comments have received 1792 Great Feedback votes

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a year is nothing, but

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2016

a year is nothing, but sometimes it is something. 

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Posted in A Year

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summer cloaking turns...yes

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016

summer cloaking turns...yes it's in the air. 

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Posted in A Tree Branch

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some interpretations of

Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2016

some interpretations of -earth-history, I tend to agree with. What comes next? More of the same I'd guess. 

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Posted in testament: beneath the collonades

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noir always rains and grey

Posted on Wed, 12 Oct 2016

noir always rains and grey dayis n black and white in cinama pain, but here's to Gene, so long ago it seems obscene, but as you get older the frames get bolder and what stands true are the pieces of me and you. 

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Posted in It Rains in the Movies Too

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reminds me a wee bit about a

Posted on Sun, 04 Sep 2016

reminds me a wee bit about a girl that was taken to the doctors because she could never sit still. The doctor stuck some music on, and as they left the rooms, they watched her through a crack in the door. There's nothing wrong with her, 'she's a...

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Posted in The Land Where Dancing Was Forbidden

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yep, it rocks like a western

Posted on Fri, 26 Aug 2016

yep, it rocks like a western shoot-out. 

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Posted in The Crimson wake vii dark revelations

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wonderful story telling

Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016

wonderful story telling slinkygirl and really believeable narrator, or should I say narrators, because we are all more than one person, as to angels, well only the devil knows the truth of that. 

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Posted in Eighteen part one

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nice rhyme, nice time and a

Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2016

nice rhyme, nice time and a Bermondsey boy returned to his roots and you've made his wrold known. 

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Posted in BERMONDSEY BOY (LONDON)

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thanks torscott, I'm not sure

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016

thanks torscott, I'm not sure I can take any more misery. 

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Posted in Ernie at the edge of the world

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yeh, I sometimes imagine

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

yeh, I sometimes imagine places are like batteries or reservoirs, holding onto energy. 

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Posted in The Cobbe house iv Aftermath

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