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I have 1176 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2441605 times and 1201 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1636 of my 15,454 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1666 votes

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Cherry

huts 1 (rewrite)

The security guard with a pencil moustache, slides open the window of the lodge at the hospital gates and addresses me as ‘sir’. I’m given directions...
Cherry

the case for the prosecution

Every morning Papa Adams opened early to catch workmen before they started the early shift in the yard. He pushed her belly out like a pram and...
Cherry

school project

you purl kisses into a corner of eternity my body an empty bucket filling slowly from the tingle of teeth feet in a slow dance of time swell and the...
Cherry

everything I once knew

Everything I once knew Grows apart and forgotten Like some dull stick Scarred and mutilated. The need to believe in – hope Hopeless Hazy eyed and...
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Bible John 2

I clutch the handle of my holdall, with my purse secure inside. ‘I’m not sure,’ I say. I hold a leaflet out as a shield. ‘Perhaps she’ll get some of...

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1636 of my comments have received 1666 Great Feedback votes

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the dead have all the good

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015

the dead have all the good lines and it'd be mad not to enjoy it. 

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Posted in Dan's Dead

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to really suffer it must be

Posted on Wed, 17 Jun 2015

to really suffer it must be brocolli. It's green. It's mean. It's obscene. But it's high in something or other. Chocolate is the devil's spawn. I know which way I was born. 

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Posted in A Medal!

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wonderful winding ways and

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2015

wonderful winding ways and finding your way home. An interesting journey or pilgramage the purpose of which is not clear, but it doesn't matter, with each step something gives. 

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Posted in Camino 16a – 3 October 2014

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interesting fairy-tale type

Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015

interesting fairy-tale type story. 

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Posted in The Ravens of Portobello

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the wonders of science in a

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2015

the wonders of science in a kind of frankenstein way. Orginal and entertaining. 

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Posted in Recluse

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A nice beat to your poem and

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015

A nice beat to your poem and some great imagery. Well done. Should be sung. 

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Posted in CITY

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evernow is to be the person

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

evernow is to be the person we want to be. Lovely. 

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Posted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.

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family worries, how we scurry

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2015

family worries, how we scurry to and fro from that worry. 

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Posted in Cinderellas Have Stubble Too

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A stor[e]y below 

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

A stor[e]y below 

so the journey begins. Not sure why anyone would volunteer their child for sacrifice. The story of a lottery and sacrifice for the good of the land is more common.

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Posted in Dancing Silhouettes

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take a deep breath, powerful.

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2015

take a deep breath, powerful. 

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Posted in Deterioration Haiku

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