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I have 1176 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2441227 times and 1201 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Bible John

‘Why do they call you Bible John?’ I ask. ‘They’re just takin the cunt,’ he says. Then apologises a few seconds later for his language. I was given...
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poppy's last shout

Cast adrift. Poppy’s single room in the hospital annex is sparse and milky as a bone. The umbilical cord of the machine by her bed works almost...
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The big Malky

Frank took two days to hitchhike down to London. It was all new. A night sleeping in a plastic bin bag sheltering outside a Tube station, with what...
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snap

You didn’t need to be a fortune teller to work out what Granda was thinking. Eyes windows of the soul, but eyebrows garbed like two grey squirrel...
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Rambling

Rambled away – weather grey No road and mud suckled Muckle on Hold my coat aloft Breezed away into the day Hills that hug Jag-eyed vision of...

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1636 of my comments have received 1666 Great Feedback votes

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we're all capitalists now

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2015

we're all capitalists now comrade. 

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Posted in an American thinks of Russia

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yes, I like it too. 

Posted on Wed, 04 Feb 2015

yes, I like it too. 

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Posted in Orbital (fourth position)

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plot against the crows, often

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015

plot against the crows, often difficult but a lasting image. 

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Posted in Earth Heart (3)

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writers'faces. I was very sad

Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2015

writers'faces. I was very sad to hear about Terence Oblongs death. We spent many a day on the mountain of Just Fucking Write and I must say he was an inspiration. I was a bit peeved however to find I'll be sharing the Valley of the Giant Stoats...

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Posted in The death of Terrence Oblong

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I like these tales of Emer's

Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015

I like these tales of Emer's Ireland and Archie Given going taking his life. 

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Posted in The Hill in the Pale

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I read it in one gulp, but it

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

I read it in one gulp, but it went down smoothly. Lovely as a draught of a draught. 

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Posted in Christmas Game Over

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surprise ending, but a

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

surprise ending, but a constant source of wonder. 

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Posted in Cosmological Constant

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a well dramatised account of

Posted on Sat, 20 Dec 2014

a well dramatised account of something that should never have been. 

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Posted in 25 Years After

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the remarkable thing isn't

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014

the remarkable thing isn't that some men break, it is that some don't, or at least not outwardly, as you have shown here. sea monsters come in many form, many fetishes and I think we are all reduced and reducable to bubbling children scared or...

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Posted in Sea Monster (part 2/2)

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soaks up everything like a

Posted on Tue, 09 Dec 2014

soaks up everything like a sponge is cliched, Delete the sponge bit or use a butchery metaphor eg HIs brains soaks up things like a cow soaks up bovine spongifom encephalophy, which is more words, which defeats the purpose. Mad or what? I liked...

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Posted in When The Boxes Open

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