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I have 1206 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3451337 times and 1238 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1850 of my 16,005 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1904 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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the things that we buy and don't know why?

The thought came like a First World War telegram – he assumed that she’d thought his family were marvellous. His mother was short and plump as a...
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Forbidden Fruit.

‘Put your false teeth in,’ I said, ‘maybe then they’ll believe in you and believe in your prophecies more’. Old Joe had taken up a position between...
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Blood is thicker than water

Rain splatters the pavement when I set out. My sister, Teresa, doesn’t live far, but then the moon isn’t that far, and I don’t particularly want to...
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A song for Europe 2

Cry off negotiation Cut up small Snatch a breath Will she-won’t he? Luck of the draw Those who survive Those who died Word of mouth Mouth on mouth...
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Plot without a story

The note flapped through the letterbox and lay on the linoleum. I pulled open the door, just in time to see a denimed back sauntering up the street...

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1850 of my comments have received 1904 Great Feedback votes

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methinks no. hope not. 

Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2019

methinks no. hope not. 

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Posted in The Robin.

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the art of truthfulness I

Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019

the art of truthfulness I like that. Lots of layers of meaning. Adds strenght to the story. 

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (6)

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I think you/ve caught it jane

Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019

I think you/ve caught it jane, what I'm not sure, but I like it. 

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Posted in That's Not The Way I Go

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lovely story Harry. We have a

Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019

lovely story Harry. We have a cat. I say we, but it's my partners. She rescured it when it started mooching around our back and would't go away. It started with feeding her. Then a wee shelter out the back. Then a shelter in the house....well, we...

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 4) (1)

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I saw this documetary ahd she

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

I saw this documetary ahd she was indeed brilliant but troubled. Dying in the bath, well that about sums it up. And to also happen to her daughter...

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Posted in One Hundred Million Dollars.

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wiser because they need to be

Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019

wiser because they need to be. 

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Posted in One.

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you caught it, the joy of not

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

you caught it, the joy of not being joyful or in love, but moping along in Paris, hoping the city will work it's magic and make their life better. Well done. 

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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a pyramid of selves go on

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting. 

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Posted in PCT Beginning

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this is great. Charlie and

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable. 

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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brialliant. Everythng is

Posted on Wed, 06 Feb 2019

brialliant. Everythng is there in front and behind the reader and Chantelle is someone we know so well, without having to look up from the screen. My only qualm is stick in a litte nudge to the reader that it's a minibus and not a car the...

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Posted in An Outing: Part One

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