celticman
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I have 1179 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2494857 times
and 1205 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1648 of my 15,494 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1680 votes

this is good, really good,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2016
this is good, really good, but could be far better if you broke the three seperate narratives into seperate storylines of six, thirteen and eighteen. Slow down time. It's got an edge about it, which I like.
Read full commentPosted in I didn't want to do it
The movement and moments of
Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016
The movement and moments of silence and complicity make a sweet kind of electiricity.
Read full commentPosted in Something Dead In The Road
difficult question to answer,
Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2016
difficult question to answer, but I guess poetry throws a light.
Read full commentPosted in I Really Deserve
Lovely and the denouement
Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016
Lovely and the denouement fits like a driver's glove.
Read full commentPosted in SECRETS Part 2
yeh, I like this or get it,
Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016
yeh, I like this or get it, as like seems the wrong words, as does like. I'm sure you know what I mean.
Read full commentPosted in Cannibal
the rise and fall of us all.
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
the rise and fall of us all.
Read full commentPosted in Today We Dressed Up And Pretended To Be Rich
yellow, my favouritie colour
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
yellow, my favouritie colour and this is so sweet, it's right up my street. Mellow and blue it combines the colours of you.
Read full commentPosted in Yellow for my daughter
enjoyed reading about your
Posted on Tue, 17 May 2016
enjoyed reading about your travels.
Read full commentPosted in Tommy Mel's
yep. 3000 words isn't a lot;
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
yep. 3000 words isn't a lot; only it is. All the reasons you outline are lived examples, but what struck me most was the word 'perfect'. First 3000 is never going to be perfect, if it's legible, or evern if it isn't, that's a start. An outline....
Read full commentPosted in It shouldn't be this hard...
he is what he'll be, that's
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2016
he is what he'll be, that's plain to see.
Read full commentPosted in Rising Fives...
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