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I have 1211 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3481388 times and 1243 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1863 of my 16,048 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1918 votes

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the call up

Harry’s call up papers came through. He had been dreading them, but when they arrived he felt calmer, but had to put on his trifocals glasses to...
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bergy

It’s strange when you get out hearing soft, whispering womanly voices – he’s been sick—licking of soft strawberry lips to create a sympathetic sound...
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a day in the sun

Winter broke like a stick and the sun clothed itself in clouds to give spring an airing and my world expanded to more than school rooms and cold...

the angel oberon

To dust you will return Invisible to all but a select few My light has not gone out I’m simply waiting for you You with your need You with your greed...

criminal mastermind kaspar gutman

Sitting alone staring into thin air What with the squeak of the back gate ‘Who’s that there?’ I dare. A femme fatale appears out of grit and smoke...

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1863 of my comments have received 1918 Great Feedback votes

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a feast for the eyes, but

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020

a feast for the eyes, but there's morality here buried in mouth-watering fruit. Adam and Eve it. 

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Posted in There is a Still Life in the Old Dog Yet

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gravity is not an apple. yeh,

Posted on Sat, 23 May 2020

gravity is not an apple. yeh, I like that aand this. 

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Posted in How To Be Authentic

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sweet, heavy with years. 

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2020

sweet, heavy with years. 

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Posted in The Last Bus Stop

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cats are real. people aren't.

Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020

cats are real. people aren't. I guess that's true, especially on the astral plane. 

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Posted in How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart? (2)

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yeh, I get it, but keep it to

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020

yeh, I get it, but keep it to yourself sort of story. The morally righteous are never wrong, Nor do they fade away (unfortuately). great story. 

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Posted in How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart?

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slight jump at 'burn me right

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2020

slight jump at 'burn me right through' (burns right through). just a thought. I don't often have them. 

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Posted in Phantoms

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I'm sure Triigger told Boycey

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2020

I'm sure Triigger told Boycey, who told someone I know that the virus was engineered. I'm not sure the reasoning for this, who exactly gains from this? I'm sure it's a James Bond type villain who strokes a cat and has a cunning plan. 

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Posted in Mother's Day With A Difference.

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sad, yet we reember beyond

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

sad, yet we reember beyond the whys and wherefores. 

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Posted in He Knew

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if we can transmit love, then

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

if we can transmit love, then all is not lost. 

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Posted in Deimos

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I guess you covered all the

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

I guess you covered all the bases, but mother's know best and what would your mother say? 

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Posted in Happy Mother's Day

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