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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2852145 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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I stole this poem from Vera

You cut a chrysalis just in case, kept the carapace on you. Tied a shoelace around the neck, the butterfly initials you never knew tattooed at the...
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Gold cherry

Hardware Not Included

Clinically proven. I lived between rivers of drinking and islands of insanity. There were lots of reasons for it. But I bet you’ve heard them all...
Cherry

ABCtales Magazine and me

I got the new ABCtales ‘best of’ through the post this morning. I know you can download it, but I prefer paper, it gives me something to chew over...
Cherry

Last Call

She clumped up the middle of Singers Road ignoring the pavements, damp and slippy with the mush of fallen leaves darkening pools against the wire...
Cherry

see you later alligator

We know what we know. We watched the world grow. And yet! And yet! There is that debt. There is that debt. Knowing doubts, bend us true. We know what...

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1691 of my comments have received 1725 Great Feedback votes

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two storey. (American

Posted on Sat, 11 Feb 2017

two storey. (American spelling story). Giro? seems more British than Russian. I guess there's no hyphen in bar top. You don't need top anyway. Bar is sufficient.  There's a jump between Putin drinknig and leaving that is muddled. 'Turning on old...

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Posted in Worse Than Death

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She aimed a finger at my head

Posted on Wed, 08 Feb 2017

She aimed a finger at my head, and slowly moved it forward until it rested on the gateway of my cursed recession.  ' Descriptively, you know what you mean and I know what you mean after I read on, but maybe recession as a lead into baldness is...

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Posted in CC 108: Daniel

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cheers Elsie, I guess the

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2017

cheers Elsie, I guess the house is like many others in which the man is king, the wive loyal servant, told what to think and what to do. 

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Posted in grimms16

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juxtaposition of life and

Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017

juxtaposition of life and death, aye. Makes you think. 

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Posted in Waters

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sounds a wee bit like Harry

Posted on Sun, 01 Jan 2017

sounds a wee bit like Harry Kane and a mix of Alex Ferguson and Bill Shankley as the manager. 

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Posted in The Loanee - A Promising Future

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christmas and new year number

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

christmas and new year number one, well done. 

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Posted in Brightest and Best of the Sons of the Mourning?

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I've always wanted a tsunami

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2016

I've always wanted a tsunami you could fold up in your pocket. 

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Posted in Her father was a thunderstorm

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bit about writing books,

Posted on Tue, 13 Dec 2016

bit about writing books, writing block, finding a publisher and utopism. I particularly liked this idea: 'Power and competition in politics and business greed were sidelined and made unfashionable.  Work was necessary but it was not to rule life...

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Posted in History Of The Creadds (Ch.13d)

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if you look through your

Posted on Tue, 29 Nov 2016

if you look through your fingers it seems very much like this world, but instead of space travel, simple air travel. that's a good thing to base the future on, being like the past, but with speedbumps. . 

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Posted in Is Space The Final Frontier? Who Will The Man Of The Future Be? (Ch.13c)

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I prefer the sun, but I guess

Posted on Sun, 27 Nov 2016

I prefer the sun, but I guess I'm not the only one. Without rain I fear makind would be history. 

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Posted in Rain third position

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