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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2696966 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1671 of my 15,599 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1704 votes

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criminal mastermind kaspar gutman

Sitting alone staring into thin air What with the squeak of the back gate ‘Who’s that there?’ I dare. A femme fatale appears out of grit and smoke...
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membership of the math group

Mutter of mathematics The path of a dumpling is never clearer The sum of all yearning Song of caged children –from long ago Rhyming the reasons...
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glitter

The man from Council. A wee nyaff, clipboard, pen and baldy heid. He’d come to see the wall in the back bedroom and there was no arguing with him. ‘...
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supernova

‘Fuck me like you hate me.’ He did. If you lived long enough, perhaps you’d have learned to kiss sweet as candyfloss, and kept a sensible distance...
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old stock

Some nights when Charlie can’t sleep the past will enter his heart, a skeletal broken thing looking for home and he’ll hear the truth of his youth...
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1671 of my comments have received 1704 Great Feedback votes

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wonderfully perceptive

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

wonderfully perceptive storytelling. Kayla Stella Nue rings true. 

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Posted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)

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bambi, but how much more

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2018

bambi, but how much more harrowing is the hundreds of millions of chickens and cattle that never experience daylight, in which a pen is their sun. A story well done. 

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Posted in To Dance in the Shadows

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memory is a lullaby. 

Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2018

memory is a lullaby. 

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Posted in Stars Still Shine Brightly

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nicely done, very visual and

Posted on Thu, 07 Dec 2017

nicely done, very visual and acoustic. 

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Posted in Peeping at the Borrowed Plumes

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Mark the might mouse is a bit

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

Mark the might mouse is a bit of a spellbinder. I hope he doesn't overdo it with the catnip. 

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Posted in The Fairy Cats

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we live we die and wonder why

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

we live we die and wonder why. I don't know, but nearer the end than the begining is a trend. 

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Posted in The Search for Meaning

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yeh, shades of snow and ice

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

yeh, shades of snow and ice and all things nice, but a message too, not long for you. 

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Posted in The Snownan.

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nice eyes don't grow old they

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017

nice eyes don't grow old they just lose a bit of twinkle.

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Posted in You had such nice eyes

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where are our friends,.

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017

where are our friends,. indeed? 

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Posted in Touch Me Not

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nicely done. grown-ups are

Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2017

nicely done. grown-ups are weird. That's why I refuse to grow up. 

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Posted in Poppy

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