celticman

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I have 1214 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3533856 times and 1249 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1885 of my 16,097 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1944 votes

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grimms6

Light shimmered and shed its hat of cloud and shadows. Snowfall drifted down setting the world to white. Our street was smaller and larger,...
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Grimms5

Most folk in a room and kitchen round about here envy us, because there is only me and Da. I guess even Pizza Face, if he ever thought about anything...
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Grimms4

Pizza Face ducked his head down when he took a drag on a fag and hid it behind his leg when he wasn’t smoking. He’d stolen a dout, almost a full...
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the three wise men + one

I was coming back from the Dropp Inn and I met the three wise men, standing in the lane outside The Tasty Spot , at the fence, broken glass at their...
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A gift at Christmas

Years ago, when Christmas was still Christmas and I was just a wee boy stuck in my room in the attic because of the asthma, and everything else that...
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1885 of my comments have received 1944 Great Feedback votes

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alter's head. is that a play

Posted on Fri, 18 Jun 2021

alter's head. is that a play on words or do you mean altar? Both works, but in different ways. Enjoyed. 

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Posted in A Feast of Bells

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Yes, we are all in flux. 

Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021

Yes, we are all in flux. 

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Posted in Cherry Tree

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a loud whiisper is an

Posted on Fri, 04 Jun 2021

a loud whiisper is an oxymoron. But I know what you mean. Choose whiisper or loud. Not both. 

moonlight doesn't trickle. 

great start, plenty of foot-to-the-floor action. And the question of what they needed to steal and why remains...

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Posted in Don't Look Back

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Blade Runner was certainly

Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021

Blade Runner was certainly better than the book. They tended to be prescient, but shit. Brought up o a diet of Star Trek, this is one of the great monolgues (not in the book). I'm rambling. Great poem. 

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Posted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

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a happily unhappy story with

Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021

a happily unhappy story with an unhappy ending. Here's were we say, older and wiser, but life as you've shown is rarely that simple. 

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Posted in The one that got away

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bowl of fruit analogy works

Posted on Fri, 28 May 2021

bowl of fruit analogy works well.

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Posted in Alternatives

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if we get the truth, then

Posted on Thu, 27 May 2021

if we get the truth, then that's win-win. Certainly doesn't happen in politics, but maybe in cat patrol. 

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 10

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you gave me the jitters. I

Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021

you gave me the jitters. I thought Trump was back, no longer barred from Facebook and Twitter and returning to the land of his mom's birth. Thank god it's fiction. 

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Posted in The Sure Yank Redemption

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I'm never sure when a poem's

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

I'm never sure when a poem's a poem, but as an elegy to the past- yeh, love it. 

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Posted in When We Were Young

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it's funny who we are is what

Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021

it's funny who we are is what we are, your mum in bloom as a flower lover. 

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Posted in Capturing Garden Memories

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