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I have 1178 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2476118 times and 1204 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1643 of my 15,481 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1673 votes

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Don't talk back

I slept through the Russian missile crisis when John F Kennedy called the Russian’s bluff and sent them homeward to think again. It was a simpler...
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I stole this poem from Vera

You cut a chrysalis just in case, kept the carapace on you. Tied a shoelace around the neck, the butterfly initials you never knew tattooed at the...
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Hardware Not Included

Clinically proven. I lived between rivers of drinking and islands of insanity. There were lots of reasons for it. But I bet you’ve heard them all...
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ABCtales Magazine and me

I got the new ABCtales ‘best of’ through the post this morning. I know you can download it, but I prefer paper, it gives me something to chew over...
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Last Call

She clumped up the middle of Singers Road ignoring the pavements, damp and slippy with the mush of fallen leaves darkening pools against the wire...

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1643 of my comments have received 1673 Great Feedback votes

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30 story in 30 days, you're

Posted on Thu, 24 Nov 2016

30 story in 30 days, you're having a fucking laugh! keep at it. 

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Posted in BIG JOHN.

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so many invisible days, in so

Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2016

so many invisible days, in so many ways. 

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Posted in No Hand to Hold.

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the sweet and the sour the

Posted on Fri, 18 Nov 2016

the sweet and the sour the bouquet of forgotten flower, the aftertaste, that's what makes this poem so great. 

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Posted in I don't really like Hardy's Legacy

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yes, I agree, echo it is for

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

yes, I agree, echo it is for me. 

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Posted in Echo's

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a stout heart and a wet mouth

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

a stout heart and a wet mouth, right enough. But I don't like the start: 'Paidi’s hurled face of wrath.' I'd guess you'd have to put it another way to get the man and his moods right. 

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Posted in CC 68: The Health of the Salmon

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I really enjoyed reading this

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

I really enjoyed reading this. The only false note I detected was you saying you were 'socially withdrawn' I prefer the more striaghtforward, I was shy. Reminds me a bit of Jackie Kay going to the same kind of meetings, but for socialists, and...

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Posted in Autobiography - To Revolution Singing

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there's a lot of pain here,

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

there's a lot of pain here, brimmng and overflowing words that stain our minds and we have no refrain, because, to be honest, we do the same cruel things again and again. 

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Posted in Do you?

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a year is nothing, but

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2016

a year is nothing, but sometimes it is something. 

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Posted in A Year

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summer cloaking turns...yes

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016

summer cloaking turns...yes it's in the air. 

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Posted in A Tree Branch

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some interpretations of

Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2016

some interpretations of -earth-history, I tend to agree with. What comes next? More of the same I'd guess. 

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Posted in testament: beneath the collonades

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