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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
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I long for her to be Upstairs tucked in like me But not me Anybody but— – to know I’m doing OK Not mad Just be glad – When you turn off your tv...
Cherry

Huts Xish

After work my luck doesn’t change. On my way home I slide on a wet standing stones in the burn, and batter my knee off a submerged rock. I juggle...

new shoes from the Sally Army

I want I was I am Scratchin in a Sally Army that echoes like a tin can Drinkin the final day Gold star for being clean The obsession standoffish the...
Cherry

Huts IX

I poke and pick and ease my tongue into a hole where a tooth should be, but that doesn’t stop me smiling when the day shift lets go of me. I take the...

carpe diem

At a personal level I don’t like funerals much. Life everlasting gets a trifle wearing. Leave it the professionals and all that. I brief the priest...

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1692 of my comments have received 1726 Great Feedback votes

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stolent moments can be sweet.

Posted on Wed, 20 Sep 2017

stolent moments can be sweet. 

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Posted in The Journey

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yep, often wonder how women

Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017

yep, often wonder how women walk on those heels. heads in the clouds 

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Posted in Heels

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yep, I guess so

Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017

yep, I guess so

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Posted in First Love

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I'm not sure why you call it

Posted on Fri, 15 Sep 2017

I'm not sure why you call it document 1. I guess there'll be other documents. This has the makings of a good apocalyptic story (like the Road) but I feel there is too much explaining from the unseen narrator goiong on and the action is a...

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Posted in Document 1

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I'm surprised anybody that

Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017

I'm surprised anybody that isn't rich can live in London. Two-thirds of most poor folk's wages go on rent. How is that possible? Existence? Well, I guess your non-English dad and mum saw the reality of Primo Levi's If This is a Man, or indeed...

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Posted in Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London

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a saw-toothed landscape yet

Posted on Sat, 19 Aug 2017

a saw-toothed landscape yet something slightly scary but a beauty shinies through. 

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Posted in Un Dia en Las Palmas

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the seasons lead us and we

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

the seasons lead us and we follow on drfiting through time. 

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Posted in Seasons

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yeh, kids stuff and their

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

yeh, kids stuff and their little ways. 

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Posted in Tapper

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a joy to the heart indeed. 

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

a joy to the heart indeed. 

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Posted in Amazed

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There are more people who are

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017

There are more people who are homeless and the same amount of the beds.  [deled the beds. egMore homeless and the same number of beds 

a familiar tune Elise, less money which need to go further, but doesn't. Wages drop and some corporation...

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Posted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men

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