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I have 1214 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3531366 times and 1249 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1885 of my 16,096 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1944 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Cherry

grimms19

Dermot picks up Angela and carries her into his wee boy’s room. His son, a step ahead in the lobby, slips into the room picks up his book of fairy...
Cherry

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It’s closing time when Dermot leaves the pub. The last round of drinks with his mates he’s downed a couple of goldies, the whiskies flowing through...
Cherry

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Jaz and Rab guard the bottom of the close, the wind scouring the back courts. The bins are on fire again. Flames leaving smouldering debris, the...
Cherry

grimms16

Instead of going home, Jaz kept walking. Not far, a few closes along, on another day, a good summer’s day, he could lean out the window and give Rab...
Cherry

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‘Get up, ya lazy bastard!’ Jaz’s mum Senga shouts at her son. ‘It’s almost twelve, why don’t yeh go out and get a job like aw the rest of them? I...

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1885 of my comments have received 1944 Great Feedback votes

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great story. 

Posted on Fri, 17 Sep 2021

great story. 

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Posted in Ghosts (Part Two)

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nice surprise, but not of the

Posted on Fri, 17 Sep 2021

nice surprise, but not of the good kind, at the end. 

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Posted in Ghosts (Part One)

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aye, funny to think, in an

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

aye, funny to think, in an unfunny way, Ireland's population was once 8 million. This ends here, bet it doesnae. 

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Posted in Troubles

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the mirage is the mirror to a

Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021

the mirage is the mirror to a larger hunger. 

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Posted in Hunger

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I guess we're all galactic

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

I guess we're all galactic travellers, especially on the A29. 

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Posted in The highwayman

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I'm a reader that writes

Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021

I'm a reader that writes stuff nobody much reads. I've written a couple of longer, novel sized stories. One, in particular, I think is good and should be published. Sometimes I send it off. But I don't expect it to be publsihed. I don't really...

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Posted in On Giving Up

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twenty-years old [hyphen, I

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

twenty-years old [hyphen, I think]

beat-up dog. 

could only have dreamt (delete 'of')

 Whilst we couldn't ever remember meeting there, we got on from the first second (delete 'we met')

quiite a view from the summit....

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Posted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

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funny thing memory, who we

Posted on Fri, 27 Aug 2021

funny thing memory, who we are and who we are not. Dad and not dad. I'd the same thing with my mother. Mum and not Mum. When she died I said I was delighted. People might have taken that the wrong way, but not Mum had no life. 

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Posted in A Home Coming

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I wonder if kids will know

Posted on Mon, 23 Aug 2021

I wonder if kids will know what SWALK is? but you certainly do. SWALK to you too. Well done. 

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Posted in Love Letters From The Past S.W.A.L.K.

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good stuff. I was wating for

Posted on Wed, 25 Aug 2021

good stuff. I was wating for Cole to turn up. As a seasoned reader of chimes, I knew he would. 

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Posted in Wind Chimes on the Boardwalk

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