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I have 1214 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3534898 times and 1249 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1885 of my 16,098 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1944 votes

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grimms33

By celticman on Fri, 24 Feb 2017

Jaz is standing chittering at the bus stop outside Ramsay’s Fruit and Veg when a beige Morris Marina sweeps through the puddles, making an old guy...
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grimms32

By celticman on Thu, 23 Feb 2017

Charlie the barman hovers around the five-foot mark and looks like King Louie from Junglebook , a comic figure, who knows everybody that is anybody,...
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grimms31

By celticman on Tue, 21 Feb 2017

‘Shouldn’t you be going up the road, about now?’ says Jaz, smiling into his pint. ‘To get ready for your big date.’ Rab’s bottom lips droops and he...
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grimms30

By celticman on Fri, 17 Feb 2017

Jaz catches Pizza Face a slap on the back of the head when he catches him and Tony smoking a roll-up at the bottom of the stairs. ‘Go up to Rab’s and...
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Certificate 18
Cherry

grimms29

By celticman on Thu, 16 Feb 2017

After a while Tony and Angela get sick of hiding from a giant dinosaur under the bed and crawl out dusty and uneaten, which is just as well, because...
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1885 of my comments have received 1944 Great Feedback votes

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mischief is always there,

Posted on Sat, 30 Oct 2021

mischief is always there, creeping up, behind you. 

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Posted in Forest Terror

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evrey crow has its day. Nice

Posted on Fri, 29 Oct 2021

evrey crow has its day. Nice to see the rich the fall guys for once and not the heroes.  

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Posted in The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 2 of 3)

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yeh, life drips and gutters. 

Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021

yeh, life drips and gutters. 

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Posted in Before Rhythm of Hours Change the Beat

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I wish her well. 

Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021

I wish her well. 

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Posted in That's R$CH!!!!

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the planet isn't wonky, we

Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021

the planet isn't wonky, we are (unfortunately). 

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Posted in Wonky Planet (A Punky Tale Of The Future) by Alfred Muggins

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the covering of fog and

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

the covering of fog and incipient horror blend into poetry. 

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Posted in Wintered Thin

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phew, difficult, but a

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

phew, difficult, but a journey we all make. 

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Posted in Blessings Dear Late Mum And Dad

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Christopher Lee that's where

Posted on Tue, 26 Oct 2021

Christopher Lee that's where it all started with me. Hiding behind the couch. 

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Posted in Dreams of Halloween

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I guess we're in George

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

I guess we're in George Saunder, Lincoln in the Bardo territory here. I say that because there's not lots of examples of work featuing purgatory. As a Catholic, I, of course, know where it is. Although it has been phased out of our mythology. I...

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Posted in The Black Crow of Purgatory (Part 1 of 3)

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I'm not much of a music man,

Posted on Sat, 23 Oct 2021

I'm not much of a music man, Jenny, but it's the life that gets us. 

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Posted in That Was Genesis

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