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I have 1190 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2906575 times and 1218 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1705 of my 15,732 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1742 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Cherry

grimms11

Despite smirry rain, Jaz and his two pals, Godge and Rab are drinking bottles of wine and messing about on the canal. They've hollowed a shallow boat...
Cherry

grimms10

Outside the wind carries the rain and it spills against my room window, but it’s not really that cold. I’m tucked up cosy in bed. I know all the...
Cherry

grimms9

We’re playing statues in the hall. I’m at the front door, trying to sneak up on Angela in her house. Her mum has come into some money and bought her...
Cherry

epistle to auld Nick

Friday the 13th today That fills some with dismay Auld Nick an Epistle to thee No need to appear or reply to me We’ll see each other soon enough...
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grimms8

There’s nothing else to do. Pizza Face and me with our duffle hoods up, in driving rain, are kicking a ball against the washhouse wall, playing...

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1705 of my comments have received 1742 Great Feedback votes

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yes, nothing to do with

Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020

yes, nothing to do with global warming - apparently!

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Posted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.

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happy sad. sad happy,

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2019

happy sad. sad happy, sometimes we settle for the crappy. 

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Posted in The Day Before Christmas

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good story, but the changing

Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2019

good story, but the changing point of view weakens it. I'd suggest make it his story or her story. 

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Posted in Strings of Desire (A working title)

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200 years doesn't sound like

Posted on Mon, 16 Dec 2019

200 years doesn't sound like rapid change, but I guess it's all a matter of perspective. 

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Posted in Creative Media and Sales : Ch.16d The Decline of Civilisation

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Lovely story and true too. 

Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2019

Lovely story and true too. 

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Posted in Author's Day

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I'm a bit like you, I've

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

I'm a bit like you, I've heard of J.K.Rowling. Haven't read any Harry Potter. But I have hear the myth around how she was working in an Edinburgh coffeeshop...being turned down 12 times is nothing. I've heard of Sheldon, watched a bit of The Big...

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Posted in Jim Parsons and J.K. Rowling.

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gritty and grimy, so he's a

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

gritty and grimy, so he's a cop, interesting. terriific wring. whose story is it, Gallacher or Crowe's? If it's Crowe's the descripton of him given (change of point of view) by Gallacher needs a bit of work and kinda jams the narrative. 

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Posted in A Quality of inertia (WIP)

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Word origin of 'vade mecum'

Posted on Tue, 26 Nov 2019

Word origin of 'vade mecum'

C17: from Latin, literally: go with me

I will walk with you a while in your writing. Alan Bennet's idea  of reading as a hand held out which you grasp. Munch's scream is so popular because it allows for...

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Posted in Scream

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Amen. 

Posted on Fri, 22 Nov 2019

Amen. 

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Posted in He Who is Sent

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a little grace is poetry that

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

a little grace is poetry that stretches the soul of even hungry ghosts. 

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Posted in Second thoughts

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