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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2889783 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1694 of my 15,698 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1729 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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A refugee

Your life laid bare The sudden intimacy of violence Blood in the air Fully exposed. They place their faith Your lips, your tits, your cunt You squat...
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Ernie at the edge of the world

Ernie left his flat on the eight floor of Dunswin Court at around three o’clock in the morning. He’s got two bedrooms, but only uses one to live in...
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the big malky

Frank took two days to hitchhike down to London. The Big Smoke. First night sleeping in a plastic bin bag sheltering from the rain outside Piccadilly...
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Tribe

Mourn too late at the thrown bones of fate. Small ghettoes of the mind, open for business Better to keep thought away Scores to settle Wait for a...
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All my life

All my life I’ve been fucked-up as somebody obscene Now I’m safe and old I’m wooed and wowed ‘Have you been a good girl, eaten all your bread?’ What...
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1694 of my comments have received 1729 Great Feedback votes

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serenity, one of the few

Posted on Fri, 16 Nov 2018

serenity, one of the few things you can't buy. And great writing, well, you can buy that. I had the last meeting with my writing mentor Carl Mac Dougall today and he mentioned James Joyce and his story The Dead as being pretty much perfect., The...

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (The Night Before)

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wonderful story telling. I'd

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

wonderful story telling. I'd add Tom (Cruise) surname, I had to think about it and lazy people like me don't like to come out of the flow of the story to do that. brilliant. 

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Posted in Sass (Part 2)

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yes, what happened in

Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018

yes, what happened in Sarajevo spread through the Slavic nations and engulfed us all. 

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Posted in Achilleio

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that's what I call desperate

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

that's what I call desperate and sad Jenny, but what do I know? good story Harry, I'm sure it's a metaphor for living. 

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Posted in Band of One

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a chapbook of wise sayiings,

Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018

a chapbook of wise sayiings, I foolishly enjoyed reading. keep writing. 

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Posted in Scattered Wounds: I should like to understand myself properly before it is too late

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embarrassment {another flush

Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018

embarrassment {another flush of embracement at this} so many parents have Alzheimer's I'm sure there's more than a few who'd happily choke them too. 

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Posted in A Weekend with Family

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maybe, but often they don't

Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018

maybe, but often they don't get it. 

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Posted in ORPHAN BOY

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we're all trying to get on to

Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018

we're all trying to get on to a better path. Keep writing. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)

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rainbows are majestic, but

Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018

rainbows are majestic, but you need to be looking up. You were and are. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)

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conspiracy theories are great

Posted on Fri, 26 Oct 2018

conspiracy theories are great for uniting people. when common sense tells you soomething you've got to look again, but the lies people tell themselves are the most insidious of all. If we turn around the popular jib we use with politicians, 'why...

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Posted in Is This True?

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