Thinking Out Loud
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By skinner_jennifer
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I've read in ancient forest,
sung to Autumn's fallen leaves
that blew away with ease
in October's breeze,
I could recite Autumn by Keats
with significance if I had voice
and courage of fine poet,
or musician standing
on street corner
tuneful with guitar,
not rich in money
but wealthy
in harmonious
rhythm and rhyme,
with sparkling eyes like
finest white champagne,
wrapped up warm
against sweeping chills,
words dancing in uncorked mind.
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Thinking not only loud but
Thinking not only loud but with a crystal clear mind, Jenny. A lovely lyrical and flowing autumnal poem. Much enjoyed.
Luigi xx
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You ARE a great poet
You ARE a great poet, because you love words and it shows
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This is wonderful!
This is wonderful!
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The enjoyment of both
The enjoyment of both harmonious words and rhythm and rhyme, and views of nature around, especially in autumn giving delight to the eyes and mind like bubbling champagne! Rhiannon
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Great job. Some nice word choices in this one. :)
GGHades502
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Your voice is marvellous,
Your voice is marvellous, Jenny. I too am a big Keats fan, fell in love with his writing at a young age. This was a joy to read.
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'Uncorked mind' - love this -
pouring fine - lovely poem.
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