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I have 1183 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2768444 times and 1210 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1680 of my 15,627 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1714 votes

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Cherry

exile

Woke up this morning. She could talk forever. We had less than an hour. Little book of miracles in her hand Understand. We were kind to each other So...
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Cherry
Story of the week

you get what not

Jo warned me, twice, ‘behave yourself’. But she didn’t trust me. Bundled me out the front door, and shoved me down the steps to make sure I got the...
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longest day

Everything different. Everything the same. Room minging of dampness. His bed and mine. I was convalescing after some long illness. I couldn’t...
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Cherry

Shadow

Dan’s birthday. Their bedroom stinks of stale fag smoke, booze and the acrid burn of hash. After giving him his present, and another kind of treat,...
Cherry

uncorrected proof two.

Woke up this morning, start the day with a prayer that my van will kick-over. It’s an Escort, underneath the grime, the faded red insignia of the...
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1680 of my comments have received 1714 Great Feedback votes

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humble and sad, but never bad

Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014

humble and sad, but never bad.

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Posted in Mistakes

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I'm excited about what's

Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014

I'm excited about what's about to happen too.

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Posted in Out of Control-5

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psalms [palms of hands]

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014

psalms [palms of hands]

type out a candlestick

don;t don't

plenty or rain today and I know how the narrator feels.

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Posted in A late summers day

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Fracking bomb is captialised

Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014

Fracking bomb is captialised and uncapitalised. I share many of your concerns.

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Posted in This life is a plastic wrap

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yeh, who can afford to live

Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014

yeh, who can afford to live in DC? But you'd need a better imagination to figure house prices in London. 'buy a guy' sounds like an offer and not a preposition.

Oh, the Fab Four, sounds like some obscure band.

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Posted in 17. Do You Believe In Magick?

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start chiselling now lavadis

Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014

start chiselling now lavadis

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Posted in Unbounders Away

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not sure what a foofie valve

Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014

not sure what a foofie valve is, but the competition is hotting up.

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Posted in Competing - Prologue 2

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What I've read so far is

Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014

What I've read so far is intriguing.

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Posted in Competing - Prologue 1

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the use of quartz stone for

Posted on Fri, 23 May 2014

the use of quartz stone for freezing it one of those details that make everything so real. Look forward to more. Another great episode. I'm wondering what Ian's game is? Something about him getting drunk so easily points to some kind of illness?...

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Posted in Ch4: May 15th part 2

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what room? You lucky knob.

Posted on Sun, 11 May 2014

what room? You lucky knob. Fifteen and I was still working out what to do with it. 

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Posted in The Walthamstow Bird

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