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I have 1196 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3236370 times
and 1224 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1808 of my 16,045 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1854 votes
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flockers 9
Felt better. Scrubbed up as best as I could in the morning, a complexion like boiled pink ham, showed a face no mother would kiss. Breakfast a...
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King of the Dole
Eleven o’clock opening. Davie wedged himself on his usual barstool with his back to the mosaic of square windows. He leaned across a bar still wet...
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flockers 8
When Myra told me she went back with Charlie after he raped her I didn’t understand it, but in a way I did. She made a bed up for me on the settee...
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flockers 7
Myra’s studio flat had heating and hot water. I could have cuddled her. She ran a bath with all the suddy and splashy smelly stuff. She dipped her...
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truth grows teeth
Truth grows teeth Anger and shame came You leaving again Kin and king of what might be mine Bullied aside as obscene Luxury we can ill afford Mourn...
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if life is a classroom I'm in
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
if life is a classroom I'm in the wrong school.
Read full commentPosted in Classroom
in a circle, in a cycle, a
Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016
in a circle, in a cycle, a controlled storm of writing.
Read full commentPosted in The First Step
this is good, really good,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2016
this is good, really good, but could be far better if you broke the three seperate narratives into seperate storylines of six, thirteen and eighteen. Slow down time. It's got an edge about it, which I like.
Read full commentPosted in I didn't want to do it
The movement and moments of
Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016
The movement and moments of silence and complicity make a sweet kind of electiricity.
Read full commentPosted in Something Dead In The Road
difficult question to answer,
Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2016
difficult question to answer, but I guess poetry throws a light.
Read full commentPosted in I Really Deserve
Lovely and the denouement
Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016
Lovely and the denouement fits like a driver's glove.
Read full commentPosted in SECRETS Part 2
yeh, I like this or get it,
Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016
yeh, I like this or get it, as like seems the wrong words, as does like. I'm sure you know what I mean.
Read full commentPosted in Cannibal
the rise and fall of us all.
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
the rise and fall of us all.
Read full commentPosted in Today We Dressed Up And Pretended To Be Rich
yellow, my favouritie colour
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
yellow, my favouritie colour and this is so sweet, it's right up my street. Mellow and blue it combines the colours of you.
Read full commentPosted in Yellow for my daughter
enjoyed reading about your
Posted on Tue, 17 May 2016
enjoyed reading about your travels.
Read full commentPosted in Tommy Mel's
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