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I have 1176 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2436655 times and 1201 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1636 of my 15,449 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1666 votes

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free rites

You’ve come a long way From nits in your hair Suit yourself Tears of anger and shame When you went hame Mum would say ‘The world’s just that way’ It’...
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the honourable member for Witney

Best thinking comes from not thinking The proud voice is the loud voice Pontification of what need to be done The great nob-game of bob-a-job To keep...
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poet on the rack

Philosophers and poets discuss how it is to be More tree than tree Point of view fucks off to Timbuktu Imagination pickled on a straight line In...
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Land lubber

Only the sea contains the sea Laws of sensation Balance on moon beams Light burning in the turn Roll and crest and crown Crop of water healing below...
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the visitor

I kiss the ghost in the study, you have to wind down curved stairs to reach, pass a similar entrance, with a similar set of keys, and fly down...

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1636 of my comments have received 1666 Great Feedback votes

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A Dickens of a poem. Well

Posted on Mon, 09 Dec 2013

A Dickens of a poem. Well done!

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Posted in Havisham

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I'm not sure what the

Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2013

I'm not sure what the underlined words or italics are meant to emphasise, but there are lots of surprised in the text and I really liked it.

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Posted in Within the Mirrors

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enjoyed this. thanks.

Posted on Sun, 26 Oct 2008

enjoyed this. thanks.Read full comment

Posted in Bonnie Prince Charlie and the 1745 Jacobite Rebellion

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I especially liked the first

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2011

I especially liked the first stanza, but that is maybe that was just my certain boyish impulses. Great stuff Chris. It's not often I'm proud of 'Futility.'Read full comment

Posted in Futility

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evocative. well done.

Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2010

evocative. well done.Read full comment

Posted in The approach of winter

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Needs a bit of proof reading

Posted on Tue, 09 Mar 2010

Needs a bit of proof reading eg 'She was an attractive and she knew it.' And there is a bit or repetition, you could cut a few hundred words quite easily. A good story, which I enjoyed.Read full comment

Posted in Blood Money

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