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I have 1216 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3576153 times and 1252 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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flockers

Nobody expected Charlie Dean to be a success. Big teeth that flashed like butcher’s knives, he had the kind of bully-boy laugh that made you want to...
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the tug boat

The Tug Boat pub was infected by McAllisters. He turned to go before he was spotted, but he made his move too late. ‘Happy Anniversary’ went the war...
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Toy-town.

A girl is broken. Clocks slide slowly forward. Gouging out bruised life in chunks. Short days. Endless nights. On the wrong time. On the wrong line...
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exile

Woke up this morning. She could talk forever. We had less than an hour. Little book of miracles in her hand Understand. We were kind to each other So...
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Cherry
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you get what not

Jo warned me, twice, ‘behave yourself’. But she didn’t trust me. Bundled me out the front door, and shoved me down the steps to make sure I got the...

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1903 of my comments have received 1966 Great Feedback votes

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a trumpet for a brother, a

Posted on Sun, 26 Feb 2017

a trumpet for a brother, a trumpet for a sister, my guess is your guess, is that the broom that sweeps may, indeed, sweep us all away. 

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Posted in Brocken Spectre

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I know lots of stories about

Posted on Fri, 24 Feb 2017

I know lots of stories about drinking and drunks, some funny, some sad, some funny and sad at the same time. How do we reach honesty? That's a different story, and one which I'm not quite sure how it ends. I think you've had a good crack at here...

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Posted in A familiar through-line

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if you don't know if it's

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2017

if you don't know if it's fact or fiction, then that's a good measure. Not that it matters. We're all fictional creations. Life catches us all. Death,  last and forever. 

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Posted in Dave Swakeley is Dying

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two storey. (American

Posted on Sat, 11 Feb 2017

two storey. (American spelling story). Giro? seems more British than Russian. I guess there's no hyphen in bar top. You don't need top anyway. Bar is sufficient.  There's a jump between Putin drinknig and leaving that is muddled. 'Turning on old...

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Posted in Worse Than Death

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She aimed a finger at my head

Posted on Wed, 08 Feb 2017

She aimed a finger at my head, and slowly moved it forward until it rested on the gateway of my cursed recession.  ' Descriptively, you know what you mean and I know what you mean after I read on, but maybe recession as a lead into baldness is...

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Posted in CC 108: Daniel

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cheers Elsie, I guess the

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2017

cheers Elsie, I guess the house is like many others in which the man is king, the wive loyal servant, told what to think and what to do. 

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Posted in grimms16

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juxtaposition of life and

Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017

juxtaposition of life and death, aye. Makes you think. 

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Posted in Waters

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sounds a wee bit like Harry

Posted on Sun, 01 Jan 2017

sounds a wee bit like Harry Kane and a mix of Alex Ferguson and Bill Shankley as the manager. 

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Posted in The Loanee - A Promising Future

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christmas and new year number

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

christmas and new year number one, well done. 

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Posted in Brightest and Best of the Sons of the Mourning?

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I've always wanted a tsunami

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2016

I've always wanted a tsunami you could fold up in your pocket. 

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Posted in Her father was a thunderstorm

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