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I have 1220 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3715250 times and 1259 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1967 of my 16,292 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2036 votes

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Debbie Harry -shut your mouth.

By celticman on Fri, 03 Oct 2014

Blondie Denis Denis. Desire of the head. Desire of the heart. What I wish. What I want. Body hell, testing place. Let’s start. Love -fuck forever...
Love
Poem
Certificate 12
Cherry

godstruck

By celticman on Wed, 01 Oct 2014

I mourn the sum of you. The loss of you. The only one I knew. No sweets can make him sweeter. No temper-tantrum tears. No more. Show me the runes. Of...
Opinion
Poem
Certificate PG
Cherry

Cogito Ergo Something Something

By celticman on Tue, 30 Sep 2014

I’m a creature of habit. All that I seem. An Aristotelian ideal, Proof that I’m real. I believe in faculties. A soul's natural fall. Christians,...
Philosophy
Poem
Certificate PG
Cherry
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Radio static

By celticman on Thu, 25 Sep 2014

I go for a drive. My thoughts follow the road. Squeezing up next to each other. I brake. Everyone hurries when they’re younger. Everything a bother...
Drama
Story
Certificate PG
1 likes
Cherry

Cat's cradle.

By celticman on Wed, 24 Sep 2014

Lonnie waited at the counter for the store-serving person (non-android) to notice him. Artfact was the kind of shop Lonnie tended to avoid. ‘HISTORY...
Science fiction
Story
Certificate PG

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1967 of my comments have received 2036 Great Feedback votes

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wonderful story telling

Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016

wonderful story telling slinkygirl and really believeable narrator, or should I say narrators, because we are all more than one person, as to angels, well only the devil knows the truth of that. 

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Posted in Eighteen part one

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nice rhyme, nice time and a

Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2016

nice rhyme, nice time and a Bermondsey boy returned to his roots and you've made his wrold known. 

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Posted in BERMONDSEY BOY (LONDON)

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thanks torscott, I'm not sure

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016

thanks torscott, I'm not sure I can take any more misery. 

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Posted in Ernie at the edge of the world

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yeh, I sometimes imagine

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

yeh, I sometimes imagine places are like batteries or reservoirs, holding onto energy. 

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Posted in The Cobbe house iv Aftermath

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good luck with this ladylily.

Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2016

good luck with this ladylily. 

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Posted in Bermondsey to Basra Battlefronts.

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I'm a bit dense too seashore.

Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2016

I'm a bit dense too seashore. clumsy, a form of justification, almost a cliche, a throwway liine that comes before, Allahu Akbar and throws away lives. I've actually convinced myself that's what I meant, whiich is quite impressive for me. 

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Posted in Tribe

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gets you on the rebound.

Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016

gets you on the rebound. There's a jump in the point of view from the narrator to that of the dogs watching him, in the first parargraph. It's a forecful imaged. Just meat. But incongrouus. 

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Posted in Dogs

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Brilliant, but you gallop to

Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016

Brilliant, but you gallop to the ending. 

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Posted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)

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we're all weak and fragile.

Posted on Wed, 29 Jun 2016

we're all weak and fragile. That is our strength. 

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Posted in OverPowered

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I'm not even as simple as I

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2016

I'm not even as simple as I think.

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Posted in Outery (Salt of the Earth)

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