celticman

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I have 1216 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3559173 times and 1252 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1899 of my 16,130 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1960 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Cherry

Cat's cradle.

Lonnie waited at the counter for the store-serving person (non-android) to notice him. Artfact was the kind of shop Lonnie tended to avoid. ‘HISTORY...

Eye Test

I Do Se e YoU WILl b e a new me NO l on Ger i S a Y WH y Be thy Fear FUL @ Not MY self My s tRENGTH My love YoU misUnderstand CU nt W Hore F U cker-...
Cherry

Weapons of Mass Destruction

Jimmy Liney danced at my sister’s wedding. I need to tell you now, that’s not true. For a start Jimmy Liney only had one leg. Well, he’d one good leg...
Gold cherry

You Can't Take Away a Nation.

You can’t take away how we grow. But that is how it seems. What the fuck do you know? Cameron, Clegg, Miliband, cui bono ? Bollinger babblers and...

Muddler

A puddle for a head. Do the maths. I’m in decline. But I feel fine. I’m human. That’s my failing. A life past caring. I’m glitter and glue. Tweaked...

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1899 of my comments have received 1960 Great Feedback votes

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thanks Rob, I'd guess I'm

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2015

thanks Rob, I'd guess I'm held in such esteem because I've been here longest. I must admit to writing as much rubbish as the next man (or woman), but I'd also guess I've lucked in that it's the first you've read and you like it so much....

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Posted in little Hiroshima in my head

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tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow,

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow, might never come, poor today, but rich in another way. 

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Posted in A Friend Named Big Bird

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that's the truth, truth,

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015

that's the truth, truth, Nothing I can say, but the world doesn't have to be that way. 

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Posted in This is the world we live in:

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death is never far away. Not

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015

death is never far away. Not us we pray. But for a moment we lie and watch the bird of prey fly by. Lovely. 

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Posted in Kite

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excellent, fast paced with

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

excellent, fast paced with characters that stand out and great ending. bound to be trouble. Ideal for the dealer. 

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Posted in Chapter Three

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eighteen, bursting with life,

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

eighteen, bursting with life, when you believe your a man but just a boy, chained to the grass, forever, or until forgotten. Sad. Funnily enough a guy reversed in a van today and shouted my brother's name. he thought I was him. He's dead, of...

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Posted in Out of This World

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sleep is so important. The

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015

sleep is so important. The more we think how important it is the less likely we are to enjoy it. 

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Posted in A.M.

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the only winners are the

Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015

the only winners are the losers. sadly. Enjoyed this snatch of life. 

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Posted in Fay's Flutter

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music does the work of place

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

music does the work of place and time. Lard cake sounds disgusting, but anything sweet is a treat. Then the ending. Makes you think. Poor wee souls. 

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Posted in Cravings (One)

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sounds about right

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

sounds about right -unfortunately. 

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Posted in Caliphate

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