celticman

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I have 1211 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3483169 times and 1244 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1868 of my 16,051 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1924 votes

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bumblebee

The heart script Let me turn away from you While I still can Find a dance Share the past moves Let me murmur in your ear A manifesto of why we are...

Debbie Harry -shut your mouth.

Blondie Denis Denis. Desire of the head. Desire of the heart. What I wish. What I want. Body hell, testing place. Let’s start. Love -fuck forever...
Cherry

godstruck

I mourn the sum of you. The loss of you. The only one I knew. No sweets can make him sweeter. No temper-tantrum tears. No more. Show me the runes. Of...
Cherry

Cogito Ergo Something Something

I’m a creature of habit. All that I seem. An Aristotelian ideal, Proof that I’m real. I believe in faculties. A soul's natural fall. Christians,...
Cherry
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Radio static

I go for a drive. My thoughts follow the road. Squeezing up next to each other. I brake. Everyone hurries when they’re younger. Everything a bother...
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1868 of my comments have received 1924 Great Feedback votes

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Guilt and duty. Those

Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2015

Guilt and duty. Those sisphyean calls we heed or not are played out here and I like your ending. There's a sadness that runs through the story and finds expression in relief - and guilt. 

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Posted in Doing a good thing

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Lovely and gentle

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015

Lovely and gentle remembrances filled with the flowers and icons of childhood. A treat to read. 

 

 Years ago my grandparents did not have TV or fridge a long time; [This is ambiguious. Your grandparents did not have a TV and fridge...

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Posted in My Childhood in the Countryside

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all's well in that flag

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015

all's well in that flag-waving hell, some little grief that runs too deep, or something similiar your may say, but we live to fight another day. That's a ryhme crime!

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Posted in Berkeley (The Californian Tragedy)

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the dead have all the good

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015

the dead have all the good lines and it'd be mad not to enjoy it. 

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Posted in Dan's Dead

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to really suffer it must be

Posted on Wed, 17 Jun 2015

to really suffer it must be brocolli. It's green. It's mean. It's obscene. But it's high in something or other. Chocolate is the devil's spawn. I know which way I was born. 

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Posted in A Medal!

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interesting fairy-tale type

Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015

interesting fairy-tale type story. 

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Posted in The Ravens of Portobello

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the wonders of science in a

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2015

the wonders of science in a kind of frankenstein way. Orginal and entertaining. 

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Posted in Recluse

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A nice beat to your poem and

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015

A nice beat to your poem and some great imagery. Well done. Should be sung. 

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Posted in CITY

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evernow is to be the person

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

evernow is to be the person we want to be. Lovely. 

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Posted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.

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family worries, how we scurry

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2015

family worries, how we scurry to and fro from that worry. 

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Posted in Cinderellas Have Stubble Too

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