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raring

By celticman on Fri, 07 Nov 2014

Why rara aves in the study of zoology? Glorious Pere Aleatorius Cast off the die Bequest no fixed reason or why No alee or nature shelter Spinning...

Drama

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carrel

By celticman on Sat, 01 Nov 2014

You’re not there Side by side as we were Sitting stretched sometimes Sighing and nodding Chasing certain phrases Folded together newspaper pages Worn...

Philosophy

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our house

By celticman on Thu, 30 Oct 2014

Sometimes I feel really old. I’m sitting in the kitchen when my niece sneaks in the back door. I kid on I hadn’t heard the clatter of hurried feet,...

Historical Fiction

Story

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best days of our lives

By celticman on Tue, 21 Oct 2014

Our meetings fraught I’m a fragile thing Flexing home-made wings Balancing on a lid of doubt Bent double with longing Recall our meeting? I come to...

Romance

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gets you on the rebound.

Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016

gets you on the rebound. There's a jump in the point of view from the narrator to that of the dogs watching him, in the first parargraph. It's a forecful imaged. Just meat. But incongrouus.

Posted in Dogs

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Brilliant, but you gallop to

Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016

Brilliant, but you gallop to the ending.

Posted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)

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we're all weak and fragile.

Posted on Wed, 29 Jun 2016

we're all weak and fragile. That is our strength.

Posted in OverPowered

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I'm not even as simple as I

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2016

I'm not even as simple as I think.

Posted in Outery (Salt of the Earth)

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if life is a classroom I'm in

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016

if life is a classroom I'm in the wrong school.

Posted in Classroom

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in a circle, in a cycle, a

Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016

in a circle, in a cycle, a controlled storm of writing.

Posted in The First Step

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this is good, really good,

Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2016

this is good, really good, but could be far better if you broke the three seperate narratives into seperate storylines of six, thirteen and eighteen. Slow down time. It's got an edge about it, which I like.