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Ugly Puggly 5

‘Dave’s on the phone,’ Molly made that exasperated face that showed she didn’t know who it was and wondered why I hadn’t answered it. She handed me...
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Ugly Puggly 4

Ugly Puggly closed his eyes, but I wasn’t sure he was asleep. We bounced along thin cobbled lanes, his thigh rubbing against the young lad's. He’d...
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Ugly Puggly 3

‘I’ll need to nip hame to get my Keycard,’ I told Ugly Puggly. He stared out of the window and said nothing. Drifting snow camouflaging the kerb...
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Ugly Puggly 2

I waited until we were stranded between traffic lights on Great Western Road before I spoke. People thought Ugly Puggly was being ignorant, because...
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Ugly Puggly

Agnes said, ‘Did you see The Clydebank Post ?’ ‘Nah, why would I?’ I shook my head. Sitting on the stairs, pulling on my work boots. A snarled lace,...
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851 of my comments have received 875 Great Feedback votes

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on a flight to fancy. well

Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022

on a flight to fancy. well done. 

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Posted in When I Write

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there's more than one poet in

Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022

there's more than one poet in this night song. 

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Posted in Night Heron

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in a twnklikng of a child's

Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022

in a twnklikng of a child's eye all the wonder opens. great stuff. 

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Posted in In a Land of Magicians

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this is great. Loneliness

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022

this is great. Loneliness unravels us and poverty leaves us to our own devices. Both are entwined here. A work you should be proud of. 

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Posted in Old P

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yes, indeed can be poisonous,

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022

yes, indeed can be poisonous, Beauty often is. 

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Posted in Eves' Tears

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you're certainlty not

Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022

you're certainlty not grossing us out. You're living it and we follow what you're going through. Nothiing gross. Nobel. 

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Posted in Janus 12

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I think she wants to give

Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022

I think she wants to give birth to the baby Jesus. I really like this, but too much exposition. .Need to lighten it a bit with dialogue. Perhaps some kind of arguement about which baby Jesus they want? the black or white one?  

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Posted in Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

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Living in the moment Jenny.

Posted on Mon, 16 May 2022

Living in the moment Jenny. An open book. An open window. 

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Posted in Open Windows Of My Soul

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yeh, made tastier by being

Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022

yeh, made tastier by being forbidden, I guess. 

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Posted in The Forbidden Kiss

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sometimes a word is enough. 

Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022

sometimes a word is enough. 

John Steinbeck (1902–1968) 

' The writer must believe that what he is doing is the most important thing in the world. And he must hold to this illusion even when he knows it is not true.'

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Posted in Word

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