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I have 1193 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3076151 times and 1221 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1745 of my 15,867 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1786 votes

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what comes after Christmas 3

The basement smelt damp and faintly of pee. A knot grew in Carl’s gut. He hurried with Naama in his arm. He was a wee man and she was no weight at...
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what comes after Christmas 2

Carl grew so weary sitting beside her bed his shoulders were mudflats. It seemed so long ago. He couldn’t remember how it came to this. The world...
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Pick Up

Almost home. Angel hurried up in the hill at Byron Street, pulling her coat tighter around her flowery Boots' blouse, the high winds catching in her...
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what comes after Christmas.

Carl sucked on his teeth but didn’t say anything when the camper van parked in their street. The neighbours would squabble about it soon enough...
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silent as need be

Rain battered down. A give-and-take. They walked side-by-side, silent as need be. They crossed Kilbowie Road, watching for traffic, listening for the...
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1745 of my comments have received 1786 Great Feedback votes

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the poet in you, indeed,

Posted on Thu, 04 Dec 2025

the poet in you, indeed, Jenny. 

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Posted in Happiness Of Anticipating Inspiration

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to be out and about is poetry

Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2025

to be out and about is poetry to bring home. 

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Posted in "Winter Constitutional"

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Radost to the water boards.

Posted on Thu, 27 Nov 2025

Radost to the water boards. Radost to the moron's moron, Farage and Le Pan all whose incomes have received a signficant boots from our Russian friends. Radocst to the Tory Scum Party. I was going to say something about snakes. I think you've...

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Posted in Nor Any Drop to Drink

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I think the wee guy in flip

Posted on Fri, 28 Nov 2025

I think the wee guy in flip flops played for the Peru team that beat us 2-0 in the 1970 world cup. the stars there were in alignment with the pub. I don't want to diminish your great achievement, but we really should have beaten them. 

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Posted in Inca Ice and Lupins

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we used to call kids that

Posted on Wed, 26 Nov 2025

we used to call kids that were good at maths 'brainy' at school. There was always a kid called 'Brains' in telly programmes, such as the Double Deckers. I've never really bothered having a brain. It's too much work. 

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Posted in AWOL

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I'm ahead with nuclear wars

Posted on Tue, 25 Nov 2025

I'm ahead with nuclear wars (planned) and introverts, extraverts and perverts on the moron's moron, Trump scale, but I've never heard of otrovert? 

I thought you'd just made it up. But it's true. I don't know how it applies to me as I...

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Posted in Water Water Everywhere

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we'd two sinks when we moved

Posted on Thu, 20 Nov 2025

we'd two sinks when we moved into our council house, a gerry-built tin box, but gerry didn 't build it. the wee sink was for dishes and stuff. The bigger sink for the mangle. A pulley above our head for drying clothes when  you couldn't put them...

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Posted in Dolly Blue Monday

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a small word stress. It lies

Posted on Sun, 23 Nov 2025

a small word stress. It lies flat on the page. ‘swallowing the sun as a dwarf star’. Well, wonderful words. 

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Posted in Curiosity is the Only Requirement

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Hair today, gone tomorrow.

Posted on Fri, 21 Nov 2025

Hair today, gone tomorrow. Well, in my case that's true. Your memories hold true. 

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Posted in Drama Of Pheromones

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I guess in the end I thought

Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2025

I guess in the end I thought she'd be saved. No matter. All her good deeds. She'll get to heaven. 

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Posted in The Day She Chose to Be Good

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