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I have 825 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 680572 times and 767 of my stories have been cherry picked.
437 of my 12,158 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 447 votes

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Angel 54 (new deal)

Angel heard the shuffle of feet coming up the stairs. She could still taste fried food in the air and the dank smell of unwashed kiddie clothing...
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Angel 53 (baby-shaped hole)

When Angel woke it was still dark outside and, for a moment, she thought Jaz was coming to get her and she wondered where she was. It was the sounds...
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Angel 52 (compromise)

‘There’s nothing as cruel as folk,’ muttered Angel, kissing the tops of the twin’s heads and hugging them tight to her breasts. They didn’t let up...
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Angel 51 (good cop, bad cop)

Angel quickly established a routine with Lisa and Adam. They quickly established their own counter-routine which included staying up all night and...
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Angel 50 (dinner and dates)

After Angel fed the twins her nipples were chaffed, but she wanted to make sure they had settled. To distract herself, she picked up the remote and...

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437 of my comments have received 447 Great Feedback votes

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yes, makes sense the rituals

Posted on Tue, 18 Dec 2018

yes, makes sense the rituals that don't work, but somehow do. 

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Posted in Goddess Lihanthe.

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smart, very smart. I like it.

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

smart, very smart. I like it. 

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Posted in Elsewhere

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a cave is a great place to

Posted on Tue, 11 Dec 2018

a cave is a great place to build characterisation from. keep going. 

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Posted in The Cave Chapter 1

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grief is a bell Harry (Kevin)

Posted on Sat, 17 Nov 2018

grief is a bell Harry (Kevin), and your story rings true. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (Blood)

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serenity, one of the few

Posted on Fri, 16 Nov 2018

serenity, one of the few things you can't buy. And great writing, well, you can buy that. I had the last meeting with my writing mentor Carl Mac Dougall today and he mentioned James Joyce and his story The Dead as being pretty much perfect., The...

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (The Night Before)

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wonderful story telling. I'd

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

wonderful story telling. I'd add Tom (Cruise) surname, I had to think about it and lazy people like me don't like to come out of the flow of the story to do that. brilliant. 

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Posted in Sass (Part 2)

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yes, what happened in

Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018

yes, what happened in Sarajevo spread through the Slavic nations and engulfed us all. 

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Posted in Achilleio

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that's what I call desperate

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

that's what I call desperate and sad Jenny, but what do I know? good story Harry, I'm sure it's a metaphor for living. 

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Posted in Band of One

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a chapbook of wise sayiings,

Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018

a chapbook of wise sayiings, I foolishly enjoyed reading. keep writing. 

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Posted in Scattered Wounds: I should like to understand myself properly before it is too late

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embarrassment {another flush

Posted on Mon, 29 Oct 2018

embarrassment {another flush of embracement at this} so many parents have Alzheimer's I'm sure there's more than a few who'd happily choke them too. 

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Posted in A Weekend with Family

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