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I have 1190 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2916961 times and 1218 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Jack O'Donnell

 

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what comes after Christmas.

Carl sucked on his teeth but didn’t say anything when the camper van parked in their street. The neighbours would squabble about it soon enough...
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silent as need be

Rain battered down. A give-and-take. They walked side-by-side, silent as need be. They crossed Kilbowie Road, watching for traffic, listening for the...
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Awake

Almost the worst thing A face that no longer speaks Warfarin and medical wattle One that makes you weep Sloshing around is somebody No need for an...
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claptrap

Collecting a plastic medal on his 30 th anniversary. Clenched teeth and a rictus smile. The backslapping goodness of them all. Dry lips. Missing God...
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Renaissance.

So it must have been after the birth of the Ku Klux Klan In the first, bright light, the spellbound hugged themselves In their fields of late-cropped...

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1707 of my comments have received 1744 Great Feedback votes

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ah, girl's and pretty faces.

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

ah, girl's and pretty faces. The pain. The pain. 

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Posted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

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I remember none of that, but

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

I remember none of that, but I enjoyed the ride. 

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Posted in My first new beginning

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Danger stranger. The rise of

Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2025

Danger stranger. The rise of Reform on a racist wave does not bode well. 

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Posted in For Whom The Bell Tolls (The Centre Seethes)

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I'd heard of Django because

Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025

I'd heard of Django because of a quiz answer, Jim Can Of Lager whispered. He was a fan. Both are departed. I've never heard Django's music or from Jim Can Of Lager since. Both are dead. Which makes keeping in touch more difficult. Good name for a...

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Posted in Django, Gitáno Gitaristo (Django, Gypsy Guitarist)

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murmur of grace, indeed. 

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

murmur of grace, indeed. 

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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we do what we do cause we do

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

we do what we do cause we do (Jack) 

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Posted in Lit

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gulls as beggars, beggars

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

gulls as beggars, beggars belief.  I hope we see that chink of light. 

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Posted in before Floris

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mesemerising. I'd always had

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2025

mesemerising. I'd always had the devil down as a smoker. Now I know. 

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Posted in The Last Temptation of Kieran Murphy

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sweet spot, indeed. perfect.

Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025

sweet spot, indeed. perfect. If there is such a thing, when the stories run weird. 

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Posted in The Watchers In The Walls

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know the feeling, well. 

Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025

know the feeling, well. 

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Posted in Sunday afternoon

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