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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2889444 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1694 of my 15,698 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1729 votes

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Steelie 5

Brodie’s breath smelled of stale whisky. He glinted at him with darkened eyes. ‘How did you know my mum’s name was Martha?’ The quarter-gill glass...
Cherry

Steelie 4

Steelie nudged him. ‘Get another round in. Tae even think of Cockeyed Bill’s stink’s making me boak.’ Brodie’s eyes felt heavy. He hadn’t drunk...
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Steelie 3

Brodie said, ‘Well, I’ll be off.’ His American accent no longer bugged Steelie. He warmed to it as he warmed to the troubled man. ‘I’ll no keep yae...
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Steelie 2

The big guy walked back with the drinks in his big hands in a stilted way as if he’d a book on top of his head and he was auditioning for America’s...
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Steelie.

A big guy stood at the pub door like he’d just put on a new suit and didn’t want to get his life creased. He slid into the chair beside Steelie, his...
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1694 of my comments have received 1729 Great Feedback votes

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Ah, it's not the end of the

Posted on Fri, 31 Oct 2025

Ah, it's not the end of the world. Just new beginings. Round up the usual suspects. 

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Posted in Standing Around

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ah, the haddocks are terrible

Posted on Fri, 24 Oct 2025

ah, the haddocks are terrible gossip when they've had a few pints of seawater. 

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Posted in The Concept of Rain at a Jaunty Angle

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ah, if death could make us

Posted on Tue, 21 Oct 2025

ah, if death could make us better than we are this is the cure. 

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Posted in Why does it always rain in graveyards?

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Jesus. That's hard to read.

Posted on Tue, 21 Oct 2025

Jesus. That's hard to read. Impossible to life with. Yet, for so many, that was their life. To think so many children are escorted to and from school gates. And to imagine the reality of that kind of reality. That kind of short life. 

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Posted in Crying Against The Dying Of The Light

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a bird with no feet, indeed.

Posted on Fri, 17 Oct 2025

a bird with no feet, indeed. That's news to me. Keep at it. 

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Posted in The Doom-Seeing Eyes of McGloin

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I'd a Mrs Bridges at school.

Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2025

I'd a Mrs Bridges at school. That was the actual teacher's name. She taught me for two years. I wasn't on of her favourites. She wasn't one of mine. Mrs Boyle asked that question when we were in Primary 2. I said I wanted to be a binman. She was...

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Posted in At Home in the Pause

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creative hands enchant god.

Posted on Sun, 12 Oct 2025

creative hands enchant god. creative words bring god onboard. 

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Posted in Floki's Viking Spirit

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As my da used to say, 'Whit

Posted on Sun, 12 Oct 2025

As my da used to say, 'Whit dae yeh think that is? A piano?' he was talking about the phone in the hall, we weren't meant to use. You're talking about you. Yes, it is a piano. And I like it. 

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Posted in Clavicembalo col piano e forte

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some stories are worth re

Posted on Thu, 12 Nov 2015

some stories are worth re-reading. 

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Posted in That's Life ( Pt 4 )

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Blood is time. Well spent

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2025

Blood is time. Well spent here.

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Posted in The language of the leaves

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