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I have 1179 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2601170 times and 1205 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1656 of my 15,536 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1688 votes

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A statue of you

A statue bright as a new grave Thick and unquick stone The best laid to rest Glory, glory, glory! Gene ology drowned in unbright light Framed in a...
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what comes after Christmas 3

The basement smelt damp and faintly of pee. A knot grew in Carl’s gut. He hurried with Naama in his arm. He was a wee man and she was no weight at...
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what comes after Christmas 2

Carl grew so weary sitting beside her bed his shoulders were mudflats. It seemed so long ago. He couldn’t remember how it came to this. The world...
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Pick Up

Almost home. Angel hurried up in the hill at Byron Street, pulling her coat tighter around her flowery Boots' blouse, the high winds catching in her...
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Story of the week

what comes after Christmas.

Carl sucked on his teeth but didn’t say anything when the camper van parked in their street. The neighbours would squabble about it soon enough...
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1656 of my comments have received 1688 Great Feedback votes

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silence, is often a pause

Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014

silence, is often a pause before the encore.

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Posted in War of Sounds

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the character is in the

Posted on Sun, 29 Jun 2025

the character is in the character and he's right about that blue Proddy shite. 

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Posted in Those Shameful Blue Pyjamas

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memory and trauma, circular

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2025

memory and trauma, circular times. Hardly a crime. Great writing. 

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Posted in To Tell You The Truth — Part 2/2

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the repetition is good as the

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2025

the repetition is good as the broadening and enlargement. Straight lines rarely happen in real life to tell you the truth. But you know that already. 

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Posted in To Tell You The Truth — Part 1/2

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Jeez, three hours!

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

Jeez, three hours!

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Posted in Steak.

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when you read about the

Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025

when you read about the ghettos created Poland, you know what they are for. We feel compassion for those poor Jews. We know that every country in the world, most definitely America, closed its doors to human flotasm. To Jews, especially. We know...

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Posted in Fifty-One Empty Places at the Dinner Table

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goddess of death. appropriate

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

goddess of death. appropriate. Want to know what happens. That's always good. 

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)

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ah, addcitve this remembering

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

ah, addcitve this remembering? (I DO IT TOO). 

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Posted in Let Me Go Back

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I don't have a smartphone.

Posted on Fri, 20 Jun 2025

I don't have a smartphone. Never had one. You miss the obvious. Money. It's online now. In countries like China and many Scandanavian countries money is virtually defunt. You can't leave the country without a smartphone. Check in, log in, etc....

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Posted in The Erosion of Choice

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RIP. 

Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2025

RIP. 

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Posted in The Lad. Part One.

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