celticman

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I have 1180 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2650024 times and 1206 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1661 of my 15,564 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1693 votes

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The Gods of Selfies

Gods of selfies lets you rip yourself in two Make yourself anew Like a river bursting its banks And the sky licked ashore You were pure as snow...
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A statue of you

A statue bright as a new grave Thick and unquick stone The best laid to rest Glory, glory, glory! Gene ology drowned in unbright light Framed in a...
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what comes after Christmas 3

The basement smelt damp and faintly of pee. A knot grew in Carl’s gut. He hurried with Naama in his arm. He was a wee man and she was no weight at...
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what comes after Christmas 2

Carl grew so weary sitting beside her bed his shoulders were mudflats. It seemed so long ago. He couldn’t remember how it came to this. The world...
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Pick Up

Almost home. Angel hurried up in the hill at Byron Street, pulling her coat tighter around her flowery Boots' blouse, the high winds catching in her...
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1661 of my comments have received 1693 Great Feedback votes

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silence, is often a pause

Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014

silence, is often a pause before the encore.

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Posted in War of Sounds

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spider alert. Better than

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

spider alert. Better than spiderman. 

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Posted in The Irritating Gentleman (part two)

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Love the transition, Hayley

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Love the transition, Hayley being talked down to and then taking charge- in an omnious way. I wonder what she plans to do with the irritating man. 

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Posted in The Irritating Gentleman (part one)

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makes sense out of nonsense. 

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

makes sense out of nonsense. 

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Posted in 3 oz of Insanity

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bit of theft, sprinkle of

Posted on Mon, 14 Jul 2025

bit of theft, sprinkle of romance. Dark deeds, indeed. 

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Posted in "Art of Trouble"

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works for me. A day late for

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

works for me. A day late for the 4th of July celebrations, but hey, Fuck Trump. Fuck America. 

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Posted in Born on the 4th of July

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the character is in the

Posted on Sun, 29 Jun 2025

the character is in the character and he's right about that blue Proddy shite. 

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Posted in Those Shameful Blue Pyjamas

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memory and trauma, circular

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2025

memory and trauma, circular times. Hardly a crime. Great writing. 

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Posted in To Tell You The Truth — Part 2/2

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the repetition is good as the

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2025

the repetition is good as the broadening and enlargement. Straight lines rarely happen in real life to tell you the truth. But you know that already. 

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Posted in To Tell You The Truth — Part 1/2

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Jeez, three hours!

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

Jeez, three hours!

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Posted in Steak.

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