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I have 763 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 569326 times and 700 of my stories have been cherry picked.
388 of my 11,618 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 395 votes

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Angel 18 (portrait)

Pizza Face parked the car in a layby off the street, and at the end of the building. He clutched Angels hand and frog-marched her down the hill and...
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Angel 17 (Wotsits)

‘Where you going?’ Angel asked when Pizza Face started the car the following night. ‘Going?’ he took his foot off the clutch. ‘I never really thought...
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Angel 16 (second base)

Pizza Face waited religiously for Angel parked in his Jaguar every night and weekends before work. The main roads and backroads they’d travelled like...
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Angel 15 (return of Kimmie)

Kimmie’s cat’s-eyes makeup was smudged. She hopped and skipped in front of Angel in a pale blue, zip-up hooded top and gripped the top of her denims...
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Angel 14 (getting to first base)

‘Sorry, I was delayed,’ said Angel as she stepped into the car and pulled her seatbelt on. She sniffed and turned her head away, looking back at the...

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388 of my comments have received 395 Great Feedback votes

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I can see the problem. And I

Posted on Mon, 24 Dec 2018

I can see the problem. And I can see the solution. But I've just not got enough sticky tape to join them together. 

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Posted in A to B

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there's a lot of love here. 

Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018

there's a lot of love here. 

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Posted in love and laundry

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smart, very smart. I like it.

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

smart, very smart. I like it. 

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Posted in Elsewhere

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a cave is a great place to

Posted on Tue, 11 Dec 2018

a cave is a great place to build characterisation from. keep going. 

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Posted in The Cave Chapter 1

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grief is a bell Harry (Kevin)

Posted on Sat, 17 Nov 2018

grief is a bell Harry (Kevin), and your story rings true. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (Blood)

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serenity, one of the few

Posted on Fri, 16 Nov 2018

serenity, one of the few things you can't buy. And great writing, well, you can buy that. I had the last meeting with my writing mentor Carl Mac Dougall today and he mentioned James Joyce and his story The Dead as being pretty much perfect., The...

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (The Night Before)

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wonderful story telling. I'd

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

wonderful story telling. I'd add Tom (Cruise) surname, I had to think about it and lazy people like me don't like to come out of the flow of the story to do that. brilliant. 

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Posted in Sass (Part 2)

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yes, what happened in

Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018

yes, what happened in Sarajevo spread through the Slavic nations and engulfed us all. 

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Posted in Achilleio

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that's what I call desperate

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

that's what I call desperate and sad Jenny, but what do I know? good story Harry, I'm sure it's a metaphor for living. 

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Posted in Band of One

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a chapbook of wise sayiings,

Posted on Tue, 06 Nov 2018

a chapbook of wise sayiings, I foolishly enjoyed reading. keep writing. 

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Posted in Scattered Wounds: I should like to understand myself properly before it is too late

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