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I have 1183 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2758600 times and 1210 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1679 of my 15,622 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1713 votes

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Steelie 19

The boy was growing tired. Von Stehle could see it in the way his head lagged to one side and the way he no longer caressed the material like he was...
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Steelie 18

Von Stehle finds himself whispering too. ‘What kind of help?’ ‘The usual kind of help a woman in my position needs.’ Brittleness and bitterness in...
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The Thin Line.

He cut another line. So thin, it was more burn than sweet. He adjusted his collar, itchy with sweat and straightened his black tie. The toilet stall...
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Steelie 17

Von Stehle breathes the sooty air, which carries the coldness of the Alps. He considers how to answer the boy in a way in which he might understand...
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Steelie 16

The snow softens and covers their tracks. He squeezes the boy’s shoulder. The russet flame of a fox. Its snout points in their direction, sniffing...

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1679 of my comments have received 1713 Great Feedback votes

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great stuff. good definitions

Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024

great stuff. good definitions of sheep singular and plural. They replaced people in large parts of the Highlands and Island, while not being very large. My guess is Spencer and his ilk will do the same with us. 

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 36

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wonderful storytelling. 

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2024

wonderful storytelling. 

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Posted in Tom Tom Turnaround (2)

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red, red, and read. There

Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2024

red, red, and read. There should be rage, but it is hidden in pop-up stories. 

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Posted in They Were Only Children

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I did have a fight with Marti

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2024

I did have a fight with Marti Pellow's brother, we called him Kojak, after he tried to lift a few can from our carry out. Love was all arounds us. So the feeling grows. 

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Posted in Benches & Hedges

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doubt unravels us, but

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

doubt unravels us, but sometimes that can be a good thing. the greatest lie may be the one we tell ourselves. 

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Posted in Doubt

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Yes, she really was saintly

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

Yes, she really was saintly and human too. 

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Posted in Remembering Corrie ten Boom

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the moron's moron is German,

Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024

the moron's moron is German, obviously. His mother was a wee Free. Obviously too free to have a narcisstic psychopath rapist embezzeler (I might have missed a few, add  your own) for a son. We don't count population that way. We include midges,...

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Posted in Too Many Tabs Open

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I suppose we all end up with

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

I suppose we all end up with a woman (or man) we've only know a short while. I guess we'll fall back on they were a different generation. We're a different generation too. Perhaps if we write it down that'll help?

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Posted in Muscle memory

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I shaved my dad before he

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

I shaved my dad before he died. Lived with him and worked with him. Never knew him. The strange thing is my sisters say I'm the dead spit of him. hmmmm. 

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Posted in Muscle memory

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The next BBC Open Call

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

The next BBC Open Call submission window will be open between 12 noon on Tuesday 7th November 2023 and 12 noon on Tuesday 5th December 2023.

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 6

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