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I have 791 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 591690 times and 730 of my stories have been cherry picked.
401 of my 11,812 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 409 votes

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Angel 55 (advocate)

Angel’s mum had come to visit, but it hadn’t ended well. Stacey asked her to leave because Karen was blitzed and shouting abuse at anybody that came...
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Angel 54 (new deal)

Angel heard the shuffle of feet coming up the stairs. She could still taste fried food in the air and the dank smell of unwashed kiddie clothing...
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Angel 53 (baby-shaped hole)

When Angel woke it was still dark outside and, for a moment, she thought Jaz was coming to get her and she wondered where she was. It was the sounds...
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Angel 52 (compromise)

‘There’s nothing as cruel as folk,’ muttered Angel, kissing the tops of the twin’s heads and hugging them tight to her breasts. They didn’t let up...
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Angel 51 (good cop, bad cop)

Angel quickly established a routine with Lisa and Adam. They quickly established their own counter-routine which included staying up all night and...

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401 of my comments have received 409 Great Feedback votes

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Kicked up a gear. Her turning

Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2014

Kicked up a gear. Her turning on him is good, but maybe express some of the doubts about Ian earlier. A kind of layering effect. His violence towards her is a good way of keeping it real.

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Posted in Ch26: Stolen July 12th part 2

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silence, is often a pause

Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014

silence, is often a pause before the encore.

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Posted in War of Sounds

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a lovely mix of spring

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2019

a lovely mix of spring feelings. 

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Posted in Crocuses in Spring

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and the band played on. 

Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2019

and the band played on. 

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Posted in This Life

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I guess time travel and as

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019

I guess time travel and as the title suggests past and present. Thus the phone and horses and carraiges. Coming at things from a different angle makes for an interesting read. 

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Posted in "Past Or Present" Chapter 12

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I thought you were going to

Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2019

I thought you were going to write about a different kind of Twitter, This is a far better tweet. 

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Posted in My Kind Of Twitter

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Once again, this...and not

Posted on Sun, 24 Mar 2019

Once again, this...and not that. 

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Posted in Seventy Storeys

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appreciate all your help

Posted on Thu, 31 Jan 2019

appreciate all your help stephen. When (if) I come back to this story, the first place I'll look is other people's comments. as you know that's where fault lines lie. 

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Posted in Angel 14 (getting to first base)

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methinks no. hope not. 

Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2019

methinks no. hope not. 

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Posted in The Robin.

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the art of truthfulness I

Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019

the art of truthfulness I like that. Lots of layers of meaning. Adds strenght to the story. 

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (6)

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