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I have 1210 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3460999 times and 1242 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1858 of my 16,029 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1912 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Borrowed time

Let go of the week Let go of the work And find yourself alone Free of judgement An epiphany of reflection Mostly self-serving deflections Letting go...
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Boomtown

Podge clutched at the soft fitting on the chair and it helped pull himself upright. Glanced at the pints and tumblers on their table and lifted a...
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Head scratching.

The One Who Must Choose In some traditions (Norse, Slavic, Celtic), fate is flexible. The naked dreamer stands at a crossroads, exposed but empowered...
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McCann case 5

She tugged the high-viz a little over her big belly as they walked back. A rattle in his throat. He dropped back a step, holding a hand up to show he...
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McCann case 4

He was close enough to the other workers to be part of the huddled group of smoker, but far enough away not to get involved. Non-smokers stumbled...

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1858 of my comments have received 1912 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely, he's not done.

Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2026

Lovely, he's not done. Neither am I or think I'm not, but maybe. 

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Posted in Since April

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not all cats get to heaven? I

Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2026

not all cats get to heaven? I guess that's fair. If I make the cut I hope not to meet Jordan Peterson or Donald J. Trump. 

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Posted in Things that he took to the Afterlife

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great stuff. I almost know

Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026

great stuff. I almost know who done it. But what I'm not quite sure. 

 

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Posted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.

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'Buddy can you spare a dime'

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026

'Buddy can you spare a dime' was that call to recognise what was and is the rabid relations of class warfare. We lost. I'm a fan of Germinal too. Zola at his best. 

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Posted in A Hungry Bear Doesn’t Dance

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You've added to the moral

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026

You've added to the moral turpitude. I'm not sure how to spell it, or what that means. Whatever it is, I like it. 

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story - Part Four

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'He’d followed up on a

Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026

'He’d followed up on a routine call from Hawthorne Elementary.  An older man.' This bit is meant to signal a flashback. 

Sherrif Milton remembering how he met Snoddy. 

The previous paragraph eases the reader into the flashback. '...

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Posted in 'Penny’s Pass the Parcel’ Part 2

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I guess we all do, some more

Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2026

I guess we all do, some more readily than others. 

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Posted in I Go My Own Way

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thanks TJ and Vera and Insert

Posted on Wed, 10 Dec 2025

thanks TJ and Vera and Insert and Turlough as you know without readers, we don't really exist. 

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Posted in R&D 5

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Whatever the question was,

Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025

Whatever the question was, the answer is absolutely. I'm no music man. I don't know any of those artists. But Bloody Mother Fucking Arsehole. Absolutely. Absolutely. Absolutely. 

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Posted in Calling All Angels

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I understand your pain.

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025

I understand your pain. Although, of course, I'm too busy understanding my own pain. I'm reading about contagion and infection rates and mathematical modelling. Books are like that. Well, not mine. Or not yours. But we can only hope. 

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Posted in You are surprised as a published writer…

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