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I have 763 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 569309 times and 700 of my stories have been cherry picked.
387 of my 11,618 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 394 votes

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Angel 28 (proposal)

Angel glanced around at the clock. There wasn’t a lot of time left. She took a deep breath and just came out with it. ‘I don’t know if you heard, but...
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Angel 27 (tony and bruno)

Everything about prison quickly became routine and depressing. Visitors and visiting- time, bucked that trend and gave Angel a share of the communal...
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Angel 26 (church and children)

Most of the prison jobs were taken, but Angel hoped to get something soon. She got free- association a few hours a day and out for meals, sitting at...
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Angel 25 (prison time and design)

A wee boy held his brother’s hand. With intense concentration he guided a blue Dinky car up and down the curves of the chair and table as his family...
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Angel 24 (Corton Vale)

‘How’ve you been?’ Karen stumbled and pressed her face against Angel’s neck and a male prison guard patrolling the passageways around the tables and...

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387 of my comments have received 394 Great Feedback votes

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silence, is often a pause

Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014

silence, is often a pause before the encore.

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Posted in War of Sounds

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wiser because they need to be

Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019

wiser because they need to be. 

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Posted in One.

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As they sank deeper into the

Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

As they sank deeper into the archipelago, the birds began to change shape.  They got fluffier, fatter, grew an extra pair of legs, and became sheep. '

Brilliant line, which I'd used it myself. 

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Posted in Paradise Of Sheep

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a pyramid of selves go on

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting. 

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Posted in PCT Beginning

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this is great. Charlie and

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable. 

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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brialliant. Everythng is

Posted on Wed, 06 Feb 2019

brialliant. Everythng is there in front and behind the reader and Chantelle is someone we know so well, without having to look up from the screen. My only qualm is stick in a litte nudge to the reader that it's a minibus and not a car the...

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Posted in An Outing: Part One

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this story -like the others -

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2019

this story -like the others - really is a moveable feast. The joke at the end is great too. 

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Posted in A MOVEABLE FEAST (from Ribbentrop's Chair)

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saiiling along nicely. The

Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019

saiiling along nicely. The hat thing is good, but when you say Stetson, you don't need to keep qualifynig it by hat. 

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Posted in The Bottom of the Box (2 of 9)

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keep costs to a minimum,

Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019

keep costs to a minimum, drive labour costs down and the labour force to work harder and harder. Run a monopoloy that's not a monopoly. Make vast profits that are not profits. Yes. meet Amazon. Nicely done. 

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Posted in Pontius (Ch.15): Part 1

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nothing changes, steal from

Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019

nothing changes, steal from the poor to give to the rich. 2019 to 1979. Thatcher/Reagan. 

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Posted in The Husbandry Of Youth

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