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I have 1203 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3299613 times and 1234 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1810 of my 15,882 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1859 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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McCann2

Fresh air in The Jolly Jack was for those locals in long coats with their backs to the door. Barry Ryan sneaked a quick look at he pushed through the...
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The McCann Case.

He remembered the first time he’d met Ryan. Full of talk about ‘systemic change’ and ‘empowerment’. All that shite about class warfare and the masses...
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'Penny’s Pass the Parcel’ Part 2

Sheriff Milton eased his cruiser to a stop, the tyres crunching on the gravel of Amos Snodgrass's driveway. The yellow crime tape fluttered in the...
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awaiting

She nipped out to the Co-op. It was cold out, but she didn’t have a jacket because she didn’t think she’d need a jacket because she wouldn’t be that...
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Python

Mrs Helen Sattar, the Community Member of the Parole Panel listens. Writes messages to herself, but until now remains silent. ‘How do you feel about...
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1810 of my comments have received 1859 Great Feedback votes

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great stuff. I almost know

Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026

great stuff. I almost know who done it. But what I'm not quite sure. 

 

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Posted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.

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'Buddy can you spare a dime'

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026

'Buddy can you spare a dime' was that call to recognise what was and is the rabid relations of class warfare. We lost. I'm a fan of Germinal too. Zola at his best. 

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Posted in A Hungry Bear Doesn’t Dance

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You've added to the moral

Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026

You've added to the moral turpitude. I'm not sure how to spell it, or what that means. Whatever it is, I like it. 

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story - Part Four

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'He’d followed up on a

Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026

'He’d followed up on a routine call from Hawthorne Elementary.  An older man.' This bit is meant to signal a flashback. 

Sherrif Milton remembering how he met Snoddy. 

The previous paragraph eases the reader into the flashback. '...

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Posted in 'Penny’s Pass the Parcel’ Part 2

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I guess we all do, some more

Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2026

I guess we all do, some more readily than others. 

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Posted in I Go My Own Way

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thanks TJ and Vera and Insert

Posted on Wed, 10 Dec 2025

thanks TJ and Vera and Insert and Turlough as you know without readers, we don't really exist. 

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Posted in R&D 5

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Whatever the question was,

Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025

Whatever the question was, the answer is absolutely. I'm no music man. I don't know any of those artists. But Bloody Mother Fucking Arsehole. Absolutely. Absolutely. Absolutely. 

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Posted in Calling All Angels

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I understand your pain.

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025

I understand your pain. Although, of course, I'm too busy understanding my own pain. I'm reading about contagion and infection rates and mathematical modelling. Books are like that. Well, not mine. Or not yours. But we can only hope. 

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Posted in You are surprised as a published writer…

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AI is a worry, among others.

Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025

AI is a worry, among others. Poetry may be the answer. 

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Posted in Perverse Future

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The love robot rivals and now

Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2025

The love robot rivals and now Cedric has a screw loose (metaphorically) of course. 

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 58

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