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I have 1195 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3173011 times and 1223 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1775 of my 15,957 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1817 votes

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Rust and Dust 2

‘There’s a strange smell in here.’ She paused in the doorway as if to gather it up and make certain. She was small but had that wide-eyed presence...
Cherry

Rust and Dust

Scratching the styptic strip from under his double chin and craning his neck, the gaffer stared past the Tink as if trying to catch him out. The...
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Gold cherry

Last Great Auk,

We were caught by the fog. It seemed to have been conjured up and threw milky cataracts into our eyes. White fulmars watched us from their nests. The...
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harmers 2

She dabbed the scab at her wrist shaped like a keyhole. Picking at it. Although she knew she shouldn’t. Dr Malik was on the phone. Always on the...
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wonkness test

Mussolini, Mein Kampf and our British Empire’s ideology Our struggle, not only on land and sea Our struggle to define ‘we’ Was never wonk work...

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1775 of my comments have received 1817 Great Feedback votes

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I did have a fight with Marti

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2024

I did have a fight with Marti Pellow's brother, we called him Kojak, after he tried to lift a few can from our carry out. Love was all arounds us. So the feeling grows. 

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Posted in Benches & Hedges

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doubt unravels us, but

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

doubt unravels us, but sometimes that can be a good thing. the greatest lie may be the one we tell ourselves. 

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Posted in Doubt

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Yes, she really was saintly

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

Yes, she really was saintly and human too. 

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Posted in Remembering Corrie ten Boom

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the moron's moron is German,

Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024

the moron's moron is German, obviously. His mother was a wee Free. Obviously too free to have a narcisstic psychopath rapist embezzeler (I might have missed a few, add  your own) for a son. We don't count population that way. We include midges,...

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Posted in Too Many Tabs Open

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I suppose we all end up with

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

I suppose we all end up with a woman (or man) we've only know a short while. I guess we'll fall back on they were a different generation. We're a different generation too. Perhaps if we write it down that'll help?

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Posted in Muscle memory

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I shaved my dad before he

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

I shaved my dad before he died. Lived with him and worked with him. Never knew him. The strange thing is my sisters say I'm the dead spit of him. hmmmm. 

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Posted in Muscle memory

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The next BBC Open Call

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

The next BBC Open Call submission window will be open between 12 noon on Tuesday 7th November 2023 and 12 noon on Tuesday 5th December 2023.

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 6

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ah words sometimes fall short

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2023

ah words sometimes fall short, but you have risen to the challenge of raising the dead to something like remembrance. 

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Posted in Mother-tongue

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I hope we're swinging  back

Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023

I hope we're swinging  back into the light. Maybe not yet, Maybe not ever. But the hope sings in your poem. 

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Posted in "Murky Waters"

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I guess we all see worthless

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2023

I guess we all see worthless coins sometimes. but to trade them for words and poetry is to create a new currency. 

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Posted in The thought of it

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