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I have 763 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 569295 times and 700 of my stories have been cherry picked.
387 of my 11,618 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 394 votes

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Angel (change and charges)

Angel’s time had been taken up with crying and trying not to, when she had riches bestowed on her, a puff of a smoke—she had to bang on the door for...
Cherry

Angel 22 (time)

‘We can dae this the hard way, or we can dae this the easy way,’ said the stout officer doing the fingerprinting and he rifted. His breath smelled of...
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Angel 21 (making a hash of it)

The tall cop kept a hold of Angel’s arm. Clean shaven with a bony boyish face it was difficult to tell what age he was, but with a dimple on his chin...
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Angel 20 (fizzing)

‘Did you hear Diana Dors died?’ Kimmie tried to make conversation. She was sitting on the couch in their flat in Partick, had a mug of tea in her...
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Angel 19 (bad dreams)

‘Jesus, that’s minging.’ Angel sat up in bed, her face had been pressed against the wall. Disoriented, not sure where she was, until she felt Pizza...

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387 of my comments have received 394 Great Feedback votes

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under the nod - great term,

Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019

under the nod - great term, sums up so much. Great story, keep moving. Storey is the British spelling for housing. You've got story, if that's American English that's fine. Otherwise, have another look. 

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Posted in The Bottom of the Box (1 of 9)

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I'd ditch the first 3

Posted on Tue, 29 Jan 2019

I'd ditch the first 3 paragrapsh, but the rest is the walk of life. yeh, I found it funny my mate's dad like Dire Straits. Dirge I thought. But I was never into music. Brooksy made of glass. Doomed. Dire, I know, but brilliant. 

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Posted in Brooksy

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yeh, we were always tougher

Posted on Fri, 25 Jan 2019

yeh, we were always tougher back in the old days. or so the story goes...

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Posted in 21st Century Kids

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as we get older the world

Posted on Fri, 25 Jan 2019

as we get older the world spins quicker. 

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Posted in My Attention Span Is Getting Steadily Shorter

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a better world indeed. 

Posted on Wed, 23 Jan 2019

a better world indeed. 

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Posted in Thanks in part to Louis M and William W: another love poem

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it's a bit too deep for me,

Posted on Thu, 24 Jan 2019

it's a bit too deep for me, but I liked your brevity. Keep it going. 

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Posted in FactoidMan and ShallowMan

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god, I'm with you on this one

Posted on Wed, 23 Jan 2019

god, I'm with you on this one Hilary. But a plea to Donald Trump is time wasted. The legacy we shall leave our children and grandchildren is drought, wars, hunger and all those other apocalyptic horses that Trump and his supporters think aren't...

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Posted in The Melting Iceberg

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sounds a bit like one of the

Posted on Mon, 21 Jan 2019

sounds a bit like one of the Hindu gods. 

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Posted in Life and Times of a Priestess: Ch.11 : Dumis (Part 1 - Section 2)

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I hope the poor wee soul is

Posted on Thu, 17 Jan 2019

I hope the poor wee soul is in a good place. Her parents were middle-class and photogenic. That helped fire the media uproar. And as we know from many studies, they staying together is unusual. The guilt they carry, who but they know?  

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I can see the problem. And I

Posted on Mon, 24 Dec 2018

I can see the problem. And I can see the solution. But I've just not got enough sticky tape to join them together. 

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