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I have 791 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 591678 times and 730 of my stories have been cherry picked.
401 of my 11,812 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 409 votes

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Angel 50 (dinner and dates)

After Angel fed the twins her nipples were chaffed, but she wanted to make sure they had settled. To distract herself, she picked up the remote and...
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Angel 49 (getting acquainted)

Angel heard the click of a switch from the room next to her and the bump and sound of a hoover. The twins didn’t notice, but it buoyed Angel, the...
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Angel 48 (new beginnings)

The Caribbean nurse came to see Angel and her twins before she left the ward. Church and Sarah stood by the door waiting to escort her back to prison...
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Angel 47 (scrap)

Angel could see from her mum’s face that Karen was in huff when she spotted Pizza Face. Karen made a point of cuddling Lisa and kissing her wee face...
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Angel 46 (new ward)

Angel was moved by the nurses to a four-bed ward that smelled vaguely of disinfectant, pee and talcum powder. Her bed faced the double doors. She...
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401 of my comments have received 409 Great Feedback votes

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I think you/ve caught it jane

Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019

I think you/ve caught it jane, what I'm not sure, but I like it. 

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Posted in That's Not The Way I Go

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lovely story Harry. We have a

Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019

lovely story Harry. We have a cat. I say we, but it's my partners. She rescured it when it started mooching around our back and would't go away. It started with feeding her. Then a wee shelter out the back. Then a shelter in the house....well, we...

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 4) (1)

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I saw this documetary ahd she

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

I saw this documetary ahd she was indeed brilliant but troubled. Dying in the bath, well that about sums it up. And to also happen to her daughter...

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Posted in One Hundred Million Dollars.

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wiser because they need to be

Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019

wiser because they need to be. 

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Posted in One.

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you caught it, the joy of not

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

you caught it, the joy of not being joyful or in love, but moping along in Paris, hoping the city will work it's magic and make their life better. Well done. 

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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As they sank deeper into the

Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

As they sank deeper into the archipelago, the birds began to change shape.  They got fluffier, fatter, grew an extra pair of legs, and became sheep. '

Brilliant line, which I'd used it myself. 

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Posted in Paradise Of Sheep

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a pyramid of selves go on

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting. 

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Posted in PCT Beginning

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this is great. Charlie and

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable. 

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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brialliant. Everythng is

Posted on Wed, 06 Feb 2019

brialliant. Everythng is there in front and behind the reader and Chantelle is someone we know so well, without having to look up from the screen. My only qualm is stick in a litte nudge to the reader that it's a minibus and not a car the...

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Posted in An Outing: Part One

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this story -like the others -

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2019

this story -like the others - really is a moveable feast. The joke at the end is great too. 

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Posted in A MOVEABLE FEAST (from Ribbentrop's Chair)

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