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I have 856 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 771831 times and 803 of my stories have been cherry picked.
480 of my 11,637 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 493 votes

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dolly heaven

Katie’s slippers were more in the dog’s mouth than on her feet. Knuckles the Alsatian looked at her with hopeful eyes, slobbering all over her...
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The Bountiful

I always liked Calvin, everybody on the ship did. He was tall and slender, shiny black hair and a big toothy grin that made you think he looked too...
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Angel 93 (case for the defence)

‘We’re all daeing the best we can,’ said Angel through her tears. ‘But sometimes that’s no enough. I don’t want my baby taken into care.’ The guard...
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The Mole

The boy flapped and dropped the scaffolding pole when he fell, before he hit a stanchion, rebounded onto the rusting spiked fence which impaled his...
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Angel 92 (Return of Pizza Face)

Pizza Face was the first official visitor to arrive. Church had already left and had been replaced by a younger officer with mousey brown hair and...

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480 of my comments have received 493 Great Feedback votes

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I guessed that Harrison would

Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2020

I guessed that Harrison would become Grant. Good start to the body-swap story genre (if such a genre exists?)

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Posted in "Past and Present" Chapter 1

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Life is like that, you

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020

Life is like that, you thought you chose a school, but really, you didn't. When you got there you were relatively poor. Others (like me) would have classified you as well off and snotty. Interresting read. 

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Posted in French to Me Part One: The Breakers.

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great, detailed, storytelling

Posted on Mon, 29 Jun 2020

great, detailed, storytelling *(it wouldn't be great without being detailed) but the timeline. These jobs would take weeks!

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Posted in The Accidental Gardener

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good story. I don't think you

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2020

good story. I don't think you need to reiterate about the cancer being in the middle of Jeff's stomach. 

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Posted in I Can Never Say Sorry…

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yes - and moe. But we can but

Posted on Sun, 21 Jun 2020

yes - and moe. But we can but try to define it. 

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Posted in What is Love?

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hail, spring indeed. 

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

hail, spring indeed. 

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Posted in This year's walk...(08)

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he boredom when cleaning

Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2020

he boredom when cleaning rooms today was unfucking real. It was driving him potty. My brain is dying. Felt like it’s being inflated with air. 

change in third-person voice to 'My' first-person voice. 

new-age wanker. 

indeed...

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Posted in The DJs Who Turn into Swans

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for perhaps the first time,

Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2020

for perhaps the first time, the younger generation can no longer expect to have a better life than their parents. That's the saddest part. As you mention, the rich had it easy. They still do. The poor had bleak and short lives, or so we would...

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Posted in Living In Another Era.

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there's hope for us all

Posted on Tue, 09 Jun 2020

there's hope for us all -eventually. 

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Posted in Aberdeen 2045-Post Coronavirus

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thnaks delibetely ev and

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

thnaks delibetely ev and everyone else who vetured in. Let's get out there and write (there should be some dramatic music here).  

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