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I have 1183 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2758601 times and 1210 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1679 of my 15,622 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1713 votes

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what comes after Christmas 3

The basement smelt damp and faintly of pee. A knot grew in Carl’s gut. He hurried with Naama in his arm. He was a wee man and she was no weight at...
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what comes after Christmas 2

Carl grew so weary sitting beside her bed his shoulders were mudflats. It seemed so long ago. He couldn’t remember how it came to this. The world...
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Pick Up

Almost home. Angel hurried up in the hill at Byron Street, pulling her coat tighter around her flowery Boots' blouse, the high winds catching in her...
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what comes after Christmas.

Carl sucked on his teeth but didn’t say anything when the camper van parked in their street. The neighbours would squabble about it soon enough...
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silent as need be

Rain battered down. A give-and-take. They walked side-by-side, silent as need be. They crossed Kilbowie Road, watching for traffic, listening for the...
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1679 of my comments have received 1713 Great Feedback votes

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mesemerising. I'd always had

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2025

mesemerising. I'd always had the devil down as a smoker. Now I know. 

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Posted in The Last Temptation of Kieran Murphy

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sweet spot, indeed. perfect.

Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025

sweet spot, indeed. perfect. If there is such a thing, when the stories run weird. 

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Posted in The Watchers In The Walls

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know the feeling, well. 

Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025

know the feeling, well. 

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Posted in Sunday afternoon

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we pluck what we can from the

Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025

we pluck what we can from the ether. You pluck poetry. 

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Posted in A Poet's Greek Mythology

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I feel the sweep of something

Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025

I feel the sweep of something sinister and that's no prophesy. 

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (4)

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rhyme is cruel, rhyme is

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025

rhyme is cruel, rhyme is right, that's what I learnt at school. I unlearnt it too. Marking time with geese like you. 

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Posted in After the Geese

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spider alert. Better than

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

spider alert. Better than spiderman. 

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Posted in The Irritating Gentleman (part two)

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Love the transition, Hayley

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Love the transition, Hayley being talked down to and then taking charge- in an omnious way. I wonder what she plans to do with the irritating man. 

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Posted in The Irritating Gentleman (part one)

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makes sense out of nonsense. 

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

makes sense out of nonsense. 

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Posted in 3 oz of Insanity

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tigers are killers, man has

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025

tigers are killers, man has little chance but in our dreams perhaps we can escape before we wake? 

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Posted in I Dreamt of Tigers

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