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I have 1179 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2608955 times and 1205 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1656 of my 15,536 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1688 votes

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Sean Happens 12

Dad staggered into the kitchen like his legs were encased in iron struts. He held out a primitive crossbow. A kind of spike in the narrow crosspiece...
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Sisters.

I didn’t know I had a sister until it was too late. Snow muffled sound and the weight of the outside world. We didn’t have money for the electricity...
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Memento Mori

You’re frightened by time Last frolics of fading white lies Risky, holding facts You drop them from your dry lips Search for them on the floor...
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Sean Happens 11

‘You can’t kill The Spider as easy as that,’ said Miss Dill. ‘He was already dead in a way. He was born without a soul.’ Mr Martin pursed his lips. ‘...
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Sean Happens 10

Tiredness and fag smoke glazed Sean’s eyes. He was falling asleep leaning against the work surface, but he wouldn’t give into it or go to bed. His...
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1656 of my comments have received 1688 Great Feedback votes

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ah, good twist at the end.

Posted on Sat, 05 Apr 2025

ah, good twist at the end. Superheroes have to eat, even if they have no mouth. 

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Posted in It's obviously a plot behind the human race's back

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money and the maid it's one

Posted on Fri, 04 Apr 2025

money and the maid it's one of the oldest stews. 

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Posted in Pawn (Episode 4 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))

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No worries, insert, neither

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

No worries, insert, neither did I, and I should know. 

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Posted in Steelie 15

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we like to think we're

Posted on Fri, 04 Apr 2025

we like to think we're different, which means better, but often it means the same. 

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Posted in Two Religions. Part Two.

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Thanks insert. I'm glad you

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Thanks insert. I'm glad you're still reading. 

Sorry Jenny, two timelines. One is the pub. The other is 1936, Nazi Germany. If you look very closely you'll see the characters are the same or similair. Steelie is Von Stehle. Mole is Brodie...

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Posted in Steelie 15

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you've turned feeling or lack

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

you've turned feeling or lack of it, into words that carry us with him and his hopelessness. Well done. 

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Posted in The Young Man

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maybe Di, I don't know. I'm

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

maybe Di, I don't know. I'm kinda just guessing and hoping it doesn't show too much and trying to find a path that begins and ends with a plot. 

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Posted in Steelie 11

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A guy jumped off the Erskine

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

A guy jumped off the Erskine Bridge last week (usually it's not reported as it encourages others). Many of the comments blamed immigrants. We, the working class, lost the propanganda war. We get Trump and Putin holding hands. We get hate, hate,...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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ah, Cedric. The story has

Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2025

ah, Cedric. The story has been told mostly from Vanessa's point of view. Now we're getting a bored and jealous Spencer. He sounds human. The ongoing mystery of what Cedric is up to-- good enough to eat. 

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 56

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Precious paper. Unprecious

Posted on Sat, 29 Mar 2025

Precious paper. Unprecious life. 

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Posted in The days are packed

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