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I have 1203 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3386508 times and 1234 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1825 of my 15,930 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1875 votes

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Steelie 11

‘Don’t worry too much,’ Steelie spoke out of the side of his mouth.‘Yer common-sense has goin missing. It happens quite a lot around here. Usually it...
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Steelie 10

Rain lashed against the windows and brought a clatter of feet from the smokers outside. A man with a scar bisecting his chin, swaggered over to their...
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Steelie 9

A dog howled outside the front windows. The sound cutting through the pub. Brodie looked at Steelie, his hard gaze softening when he moved empty...
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Steelie 8

‘Right, that’s it,’ growled DI Griffin. ‘You’ve taken the piss wance too often. I’m taking you in.’ He muttered to himself while searching behind his...
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Steelie 7

‘Ur there any spirits wae us?’ Steelie’s voice barely more than a whisper. The planchette shivered, and pieces of cardboard marked with letter and...

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1825 of my comments have received 1875 Great Feedback votes

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true and beautiful too. 

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

true and beautiful too. 

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Posted in After You'd Gone

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She can do both, but I'd go

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2026

She can do both, but I'd go for A. Reminds me of the skateboarding and endless runs to get the glitches and the trick right. 

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Posted in Hard Time Killing Floor - Part Two: The Bentonia Tuning

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I' ve never been on Cloud

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2026

I' ve never been on Cloud Nine. I got to Cloud Two. But was turfed off for malingering. Sometimes it's better to be more VC. 

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Posted in Ghosted: A Meteorology

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poor Ludo. but Johnny Ten

Posted on Thu, 07 May 2026

poor Ludo. but Johnny Ten Levs has suddenly become richer: Johnny Ten Euros. I'd call it named inflation. 

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Posted in Teeth of Many Colours

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well, that's got me thinking

Posted on Thu, 07 May 2026

well, that's got me thinking about some part of me that's not AI taxable. 

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Posted in Black Mushroom Soup

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prophetic 

Posted on Tue, 05 May 2026

prophetic 

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Posted in The World That Was

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too good to be A...

Posted on Sun, 03 May 2026

too good to be A...

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Posted in Hard Time Killing Floor - Part One: The Auction

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wonderful writing. he made it

Posted on Thu, 30 Apr 2026

wonderful writing. he made it. So did you. 

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Posted in The Less Miserables Lose a Friend (3)

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skateboards have given way to

Posted on Thu, 30 Apr 2026

skateboards have given way to something stronger and more breakable than bones. 

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Posted in The Less Miserables Lose a Friend (1)

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you've sprung with spring,

Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2026

you've sprung with spring, Jenny. 

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Posted in Through The Mist Of Time

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