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I have 1179 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2611634 times and 1205 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1656 of my 15,536 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1688 votes

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Cherry

the lost manuscript 2

He didn’t set out to be a slob. It was just easier not to care in a flat-footed way to wear the same clothes until they were like twins with an...
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Cherry

the lost manuscript.

A self-confessed failure at writing. It made it easier if anybody asked, but they never did. Kittiwakes and guillemots were an orchestra for Damien’s...
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Cherry

Atrocious

The phone rang. I was reading up in a cupboard. In the hallway, at the top of the stairs. It was full of books, and I’ve a lamp and desk, but it...
Cherry

After the Wedding.

We arrived tired and late at the hotel. Rush hour traffic on the M8. Tailbacks. Too few petrol stations and endless road blocks scoured what was left...
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Cherry

the claimant.

That morning, a husband and wife team—physiotherapist and psychologist—shot him a glance in the stairwell. Dr Sim always took the stairs. He knew...
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1656 of my comments have received 1688 Great Feedback votes

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starter for ten. great

Posted on Fri, 23 May 2025

starter for ten. great imagery and suspense. Ends with a bang. 

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Posted in POSTAGE

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sad, in many ways, so few

Posted on Wed, 14 May 2025

sad, in many ways, so few places like Windchimes and that's the last of respite care. I've been thinking of the arguement for Assisted Dying (which I'm broadly in favour of) but I've little doubt for the disabled and neurodiverse there will be...

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Posted in The Rest of My Life: Windchimes

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lifting the lid, indeed. what

Posted on Fri, 16 May 2025

lifting the lid, indeed. what a life. 

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Posted in Without Wheels

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Motorbiking rather than

Posted on Sat, 10 May 2025

Motorbiking rather than docility. good ending. 

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Posted in Your child will remember this day forever

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when life is slow we've

Posted on Sun, 11 May 2025

when life is slow we've nowhere to go, but back to ourselves. 

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Posted in On Godrevy Beach

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I'm not a great man to ask

Posted on Thu, 08 May 2025

I'm not a great man to ask about music, or things in general. Dreampop. Sounds like my kinda sound,  not that I listen, which is often the best way. 

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Posted in That's Dream Pop

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tics all the boxes. Blondie

Posted on Wed, 07 May 2025

tics all the boxes. Blondie was always great to look at. I'm not sure she could actually sing, live?

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Posted in The Fish on the Hill

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I guess Spencer will be a

Posted on Tue, 06 May 2025

I guess Spencer will be a houseman. 61 parts, I'd guess 85 000 words. Book size...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 61 (the end)

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Will Cedric unravel? Or will

Posted on Tue, 06 May 2025

Will Cedric unravel? Or will Spencer save the day? 

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 60

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Ivy gives me the icks. But

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

Ivy gives me the icks. But you've locked words in stone. 

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Posted in Triumphant Folly In The Park

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