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I have 1189 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2900753 times and 1217 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Jack O'Donnell

 

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A statue of you

A statue bright as a new grave Thick and unquick stone The best laid to rest Glory, glory, glory! Gene ology drowned in unbright light Framed in a...
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what comes after Christmas 3

The basement smelt damp and faintly of pee. A knot grew in Carl’s gut. He hurried with Naama in his arm. He was a wee man and she was no weight at...
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what comes after Christmas 2

Carl grew so weary sitting beside her bed his shoulders were mudflats. It seemed so long ago. He couldn’t remember how it came to this. The world...
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Pick Up

Almost home. Angel hurried up in the hill at Byron Street, pulling her coat tighter around her flowery Boots' blouse, the high winds catching in her...
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what comes after Christmas.

Carl sucked on his teeth but didn’t say anything when the camper van parked in their street. The neighbours would squabble about it soon enough...
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1701 of my comments have received 1737 Great Feedback votes

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ah, 13 boys. 13 graves. I'd

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2025

ah, 13 boys. 13 graves. I'd say bingo--if  I played. 

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (8)

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The rise of the moron's moron

Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2025

The rise of the moron's moron Trump, the little trump Boris Johnson and Nigel Farage, countless right-wing politicians on a single-issue platform of hate, none of which surprised me. What does surprise me is how many people have bought into it....

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Posted in The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube

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guy ritchie...that would be

Posted on Wed, 10 Sep 2025

guy ritchie...that would be murder. 

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Posted in A Tapestry in Eighteen Panels

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even Nigel Farage is right

Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2025

even Nigel Farage is right once? 

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Posted in Listen to the mad man

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ah, girl's and pretty faces.

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

ah, girl's and pretty faces. The pain. The pain. 

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Posted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

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I remember none of that, but

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

I remember none of that, but I enjoyed the ride. 

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Posted in My first new beginning

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Danger stranger. The rise of

Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2025

Danger stranger. The rise of Reform on a racist wave does not bode well. 

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Posted in For Whom The Bell Tolls (The Centre Seethes)

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I'd heard of Django because

Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025

I'd heard of Django because of a quiz answer, Jim Can Of Lager whispered. He was a fan. Both are departed. I've never heard Django's music or from Jim Can Of Lager since. Both are dead. Which makes keeping in touch more difficult. Good name for a...

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Posted in Django, Gitáno Gitaristo (Django, Gypsy Guitarist)

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murmur of grace, indeed. 

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

murmur of grace, indeed. 

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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we do what we do cause we do

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

we do what we do cause we do (Jack) 

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Posted in Lit

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