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Ugly Puggly 10

I used to go to my local, three or four times a week. I caught the odd cry of ‘Hi, Jim,’ but that was from old timers like Jock. He didn’t wait for a...
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Ugly Puggly 9

I wandered through to the kitchen. While the kettle was boiling, I picked out a mug from the debris in the sink. Tap water was boiling hot. I ducked...
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Ugly Puggly 8

I took Agnes a sausage-roll for lunch. Seventy pence from Villa Bakery. You couldn’t beat that. She’d rolled out of her bed, and she wasn’t looking...
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Ugly Puggly 7

Dave said with the kind of accent that rubbed your nose in wealth, ‘Makes you think.’ I hadn’t noticed that before. I didn’t care what he did with...
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Ugly Puggly 6

I fell asleep in the chair. The telly was on mute and a finger of whisky left in the bottle of Glayva. I’d slobbered down the middle of my dark...
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851 of my comments have received 875 Great Feedback votes

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ah, she gets inside the

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022

ah, she gets inside the castle. 

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Posted in The Castle (8)

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She switches gender. It's a

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2022

She switches gender. It's a man's world. S/he I imagine will fit in better as a boy. 

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Posted in The Castle (7)

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meaty, and a wider historical

Posted on Wed, 25 May 2022

meaty, and a wider historical  lense. 

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Posted in The Castle (6)

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I'm sure Professor Puitin

Posted on Wed, 25 May 2022

I'm sure Professor Puitin will keep Mr Muggins busy, even if he is in hollday. 

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Holiday In Marmaris 2022 : Part 2 : The Agreement With Mrs Muggins (Toyships On The Black Sea!)

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childbirht does have it

Posted on Tue, 24 May 2022

childbirht does have it trends. To push or not push, etc.  Cece is vicious at a distance. 

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 9

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I did wonder about her age,

Posted on Tue, 24 May 2022

I did wonder about her age, or their ages. Sixteen.'She possessed a harsh uncompromising face that reflected her harsh uncompromising life.' I'm not sure this works as a descripton. The reader already knows enough about her life to judge it harsh...

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Posted in The Castle (3)

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Communism isn't a bad idea.

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

Communism isn't a bad idea. Despots and Putins are. 

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Holiday In Marmaris 2022 : Part 1 : Holiday Delays and Invasions

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gets a vote of I'd like more

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

gets a vote of I'd like more from me. 

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Posted in The Castle (2)

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terrific detail and story

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

terrific detail and story telling. 

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Posted in The Castle (1)

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ghost moth. perhaps its time

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

ghost moth. perhaps its time is short, but for a moth, perhaps not? 

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Posted in Luna Moth

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