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I have 791 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 591699 times and 730 of my stories have been cherry picked.
401 of my 11,812 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 409 votes

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Angel 40 (earrings)

Her shoulders dipped and she sighed, staring down at the table. ‘I’ve got to listen to most of the girls in here talking non-stop about what they’re...
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Angel 39 (returns)

‘You’ve another visitor’s request.’ Church stood in the door of the cell, with a slip of paper in her hand. ‘That’s great.’ Angel made her wait...
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Piddle Pig and the refugees

Mamma was in Eva’s bedroom, with the storybook in her hand, coaxing her daughter to sleep. Her room was fuzzy pink and cosy. The thick pages of...
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Angel 37 (rift)

The screws weren’t in a good mood. Angel wasn’t sure what happened but the girls had kicked off because visiting time had been delayed and the time...
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Angel 36 (every picture)

Angel didn’t need a black cab to take her back to Corton Vale. Flying, she clutched the black-and-white, print-out of the twins, and studied it again...

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401 of my comments have received 409 Great Feedback votes

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sounds a bit like one of the

Posted on Mon, 21 Jan 2019

sounds a bit like one of the Hindu gods. 

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Posted in Life and Times of a Priestess: Ch.11 : Dumis (Part 1 - Section 2)

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I hope the poor wee soul is

Posted on Thu, 17 Jan 2019

I hope the poor wee soul is in a good place. Her parents were middle-class and photogenic. That helped fire the media uproar. And as we know from many studies, they staying together is unusual. The guilt they carry, who but they know?  

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Posted in Madeleine McCann.

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I can see the problem. And I

Posted on Mon, 24 Dec 2018

I can see the problem. And I can see the solution. But I've just not got enough sticky tape to join them together. 

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Posted in A to B

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there's a lot of love here. 

Posted on Fri, 21 Dec 2018

there's a lot of love here. 

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Posted in love and laundry

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yes, makes sense the rituals

Posted on Tue, 18 Dec 2018

yes, makes sense the rituals that don't work, but somehow do. 

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Posted in Goddess Lihanthe.

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smart, very smart. I like it.

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

smart, very smart. I like it. 

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Posted in Elsewhere

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a cave is a great place to

Posted on Tue, 11 Dec 2018

a cave is a great place to build characterisation from. keep going. 

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Posted in The Cave Chapter 1

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grief is a bell Harry (Kevin)

Posted on Sat, 17 Nov 2018

grief is a bell Harry (Kevin), and your story rings true. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (Blood)

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serenity, one of the few

Posted on Fri, 16 Nov 2018

serenity, one of the few things you can't buy. And great writing, well, you can buy that. I had the last meeting with my writing mentor Carl Mac Dougall today and he mentioned James Joyce and his story The Dead as being pretty much perfect., The...

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (The Night Before)

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wonderful story telling. I'd

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

wonderful story telling. I'd add Tom (Cruise) surname, I had to think about it and lazy people like me don't like to come out of the flow of the story to do that. brilliant. 

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Posted in Sass (Part 2)

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