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I have 811 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 658805 times and 752 of my stories have been cherry picked.
418 of my 12,034 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 428 votes

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Angel 60 (Bruno's confession)

The following weeks were the longest Angel could remember. The twins were fractious with the sudden heatwave and didn’t sleep very well. One night...
Cherry

Angel 59 (QC)

‘I’m not too worried,’ Angel, a slight edge in her voice, caught Stacey hurrying out of the kitchen with a folder in her hand. ‘But Lisa is beginning...
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Angel 58 (cruel symmetry)

‘Coming,’ rasped Angel. Stacey hovered at the top of the stairs, but Angel heard her clumping away to her room when she answered. Outside a dog...
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Angel 57 (Pizza Face and Tony)

Angel was late getting the twins dressed when Stacey came to tell her there was somebody on the phone. Adam clenched his fists like a boxer who was...
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Angel 56 (old wounds)

Angel had kept in touch with Bruno by phoning him. They skittered around where Tony was like two drunks trying to find loose change to pay for a...

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418 of my comments have received 428 Great Feedback votes

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lovely story Harry. We have a

Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019

lovely story Harry. We have a cat. I say we, but it's my partners. She rescured it when it started mooching around our back and would't go away. It started with feeding her. Then a wee shelter out the back. Then a shelter in the house....well, we...

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 4) (1)

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I saw this documetary ahd she

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

I saw this documetary ahd she was indeed brilliant but troubled. Dying in the bath, well that about sums it up. And to also happen to her daughter...

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Posted in One Hundred Million Dollars.

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wiser because they need to be

Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019

wiser because they need to be. 

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Posted in One.

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you caught it, the joy of not

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

you caught it, the joy of not being joyful or in love, but moping along in Paris, hoping the city will work it's magic and make their life better. Well done. 

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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a pyramid of selves go on

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting. 

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Posted in PCT Beginning

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this is great. Charlie and

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable. 

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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brialliant. Everythng is

Posted on Wed, 06 Feb 2019

brialliant. Everythng is there in front and behind the reader and Chantelle is someone we know so well, without having to look up from the screen. My only qualm is stick in a litte nudge to the reader that it's a minibus and not a car the...

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Posted in An Outing: Part One

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this story -like the others -

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2019

this story -like the others - really is a moveable feast. The joke at the end is great too. 

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Posted in A MOVEABLE FEAST (from Ribbentrop's Chair)

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saiiling along nicely. The

Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019

saiiling along nicely. The hat thing is good, but when you say Stetson, you don't need to keep qualifynig it by hat. 

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Posted in The Tar Pit (2 of 9)

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keep costs to a minimum,

Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019

keep costs to a minimum, drive labour costs down and the labour force to work harder and harder. Run a monopoloy that's not a monopoly. Make vast profits that are not profits. Yes. meet Amazon. Nicely done. 

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Posted in Pontius (Ch.15): Part 1

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