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I have 1210 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3478799 times and 1243 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Love Story 24

I’d kissed Ali’s cheek when we left the church. Felt the novelty and glad feeling of having done the right thing. Even though Mum didn’t say so, I...
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Love Story 23

It rained every day and everything closed in before the funeral. Mum had time for a fag before we got into the chauffeured car. The cortege set off,...
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Love Story 22

The Constable looked too small to be a cop even on his tiptoes. A parvenu in uniform just out of the wrapper did little to disguise his weedy build...
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Love Story 21

Da groaned and leaned on me as he lowered himself to the floor and shut his eyes. ‘Don’t die, Da,’ I wailed as he sucked in each breath in and blew...
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Love Story 20

I wore my smartest clothes and shined my shoes before we set off to the Police Station at Hall Street. Nobody else hurrying along the canal in the...

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1862 of my comments have received 1917 Great Feedback votes

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makes sense of a kind of

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2025

makes sense of a kind of sadness. 

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Posted in The Day, Every Day

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ah, GlosKat, I think I need

Posted on Wed, 10 Dec 2025

ah, GlosKat, I think I need an eye test. Ludwig Wittgenstein: What a picture must have in common with reality in order to represent it after its manner—rightly or falsely—is its form of representation. We see what we think we see, even if we don'...

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Posted in R&D 5

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violence is believing it's

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2025

violence is believing it's necessary as you show. 

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Posted in Variable

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cheers TJ, who knows what

Posted on Wed, 10 Dec 2025

cheers TJ, who knows what path we take? Not Abraham. Not me. 

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Posted in R&D 5

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I wondered where Pudgy

Posted on Tue, 09 Dec 2025

I wondered where Pudgy Maxwell's van went to. He might well have sold it to your dad. He'd drag two seats out of the pub, with a punter standing in the middle. Bit shuggly. But good enough to get you to the Celtic match. Pope John Paul II...

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Posted in A Hare's Breath 1 - The Van

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aye and aye, sadly true.

Posted on Tue, 09 Dec 2025

aye and aye, sadly true. where are we noo? 

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Posted in The Big Picture

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the poet in you, indeed,

Posted on Thu, 04 Dec 2025

the poet in you, indeed, Jenny. 

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Posted in Happiness Of Anticipating Inspiration

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to be out and about is poetry

Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2025

to be out and about is poetry to bring home. 

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Posted in "Winter Constitutional"

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Radost to the water boards.

Posted on Thu, 27 Nov 2025

Radost to the water boards. Radost to the moron's moron, Farage and Le Pan all whose incomes have received a signficant boots from our Russian friends. Radocst to the Tory Scum Party. I was going to say something about snakes. I think you've...

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Posted in Nor Any Drop to Drink

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I think the wee guy in flip

Posted on Fri, 28 Nov 2025

I think the wee guy in flip flops played for the Peru team that beat us 2-0 in the 1970 world cup. the stars there were in alignment with the pub. I don't want to diminish your great achievement, but we really should have beaten them. 

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Posted in Inca Ice and Lupins

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