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I have 1211 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3491748 times and 1244 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1869 of my 16,054 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1925 votes

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Love Story 11

‘She would notice,’ I bit down on my bottom lip to show that was our conversation over. Ali recovered quicker than a whiplash victim cashing a cheque...
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Love Story 10

Mum floated about smoking between the kitchen and living room. Da ruffled the sports’ pages of the Daily Record to show he was reading and didn’t...
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Love Story 9

Jealousy was an accidental sin. Like stabbing your mum in the eye with a fork, while explaining something which you’d forgotten to mention, but she...
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Love Story 8

I agreed to go with Pastor Colin on a mission. He expected me to know what it was without telling me. His silver Ford Escort was more reliable. He...
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Love Story 7

‘I’m not going to school,’ I said. ‘How no?’ she asked. ‘Cause,’ my voice cracked and went up a notch. ‘I’m no well.’ Her arm shot out and a cupped...
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1869 of my comments have received 1925 Great Feedback votes

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the newspaper nobody ever

Posted on Sun, 09 Nov 2025

the newspaper nobody ever read. Must be the Egyptian equivalent of the Sun. 

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Posted in Alexandria

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much I sadly find myself

Posted on Sun, 09 Nov 2025

much I sadly find myself agreeing with here. Backward steps for humanity. 

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Posted in Victory In Europe Day 8th of May 2025 : Hollow Victory Celebration After Almost 80 Years of Success and Peace

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ah, if death could make us

Posted on Tue, 21 Oct 2025

ah, if death could make us better than we are this is the cure. 

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Posted in Why does it always rain in graveyards?

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Jesus. That's hard to read.

Posted on Tue, 21 Oct 2025

Jesus. That's hard to read. Impossible to life with. Yet, for so many, that was their life. To think so many children are escorted to and from school gates. And to imagine the reality of that kind of reality. That kind of short life. 

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Posted in Crying Against The Dying Of The Light

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I'd a Mrs Bridges at school.

Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2025

I'd a Mrs Bridges at school. That was the actual teacher's name. She taught me for two years. I wasn't on of her favourites. She wasn't one of mine. Mrs Boyle asked that question when we were in Primary 2. I said I wanted to be a binman. She was...

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Posted in At Home in the Pause

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creative hands enchant god.

Posted on Sun, 12 Oct 2025

creative hands enchant god. creative words bring god onboard. 

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Posted in Floki's Viking Spirit

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As my da used to say, 'Whit

Posted on Sun, 12 Oct 2025

As my da used to say, 'Whit dae yeh think that is? A piano?' he was talking about the phone in the hall, we weren't meant to use. You're talking about you. Yes, it is a piano. And I like it. 

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Posted in Clavicembalo col piano e forte

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some stories are worth re

Posted on Thu, 12 Nov 2015

some stories are worth re-reading. 

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Posted in That's Life ( Pt 4 )

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Blood is time. Well spent

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2025

Blood is time. Well spent here.

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Posted in The language of the leaves

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ah, the sad truth. 

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2025

ah, the sad truth. 

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Posted in That's Life ( Pt 1 ) Leaving: This is for Di

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