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I have 1122 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1715636 times and 1127 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1379 of my 14,688 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1413 votes

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Ugly Puggly 70

When I drew up in the van outside Molly’s house, we rushed the close door, which was jammed open, and galloped upstairs using our elbows to gain...
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Ugly Puggly 69

I drove home. Molly, in the passenger seat beside me, rocked backwards and forwards clutching her stomach and urging me to hurry. But the traffic...
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Ugly Puggly 68

We drove back along the way we came. The nearest petrol station was just off Crow Road. The engine chugged and wheezed before it cut out. I flicked...
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Ugly Puggly 67

Molly had a hand draped over my shoulder as we sat in the back of the Bongo. Her musty perfume stirred me up. She dressed like we were going for a...
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Ugly Puggly 66

I stumbled past ranks of wilting bracken and tepid water turning green with algae. Tenement buildings in straight lines and a clutter of housing...
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1379 of my comments have received 1413 Great Feedback votes

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a delight, apart from Jacob

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023

a delight, apart from Jacob-Rees Mogg, obviously. 

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Posted in Our Man in Golubac

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I'll put off the place of

Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2023

I'll put off the place of rest, as for the rest you've covered it. 

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Posted in In A Place Of Respite

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a fish could  become a dragon

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

a fish could  become a dragon--could happen. You made it happen. 

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Posted in Dragon Gate

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I'm reading about Babi Yar. A

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

I'm reading about Babi Yar. A different kind of obssession with food. But we all need to eat. That's what makes us human as you show with a nice slice of humour. 

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Posted in Shadowy Visions Of The Past

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living beyond is often beyond

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

living beyond is often beyond imaginatioin. Well done for taking us there. 

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Posted in (This Life) Part 10 – Chapter 1: The Dream Catcher’s Tale

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Enjoyed your poem. I'm no

Posted on Wed, 12 Jul 2023

Enjoyed your poem. I'm no archeologist, but I've often heard the theory of  Red Castle is becasue running out of grey paint castle is too much of a mouthful, in Welsh or Scot's. 

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Posted in Castell Coch (Red Castle)

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I thought it was a goat. 

Posted on Tue, 11 Jul 2023

I thought it was a goat. 

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Posted in Every Picture Tells A Story

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brids are beauty in action,

Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023

brids are beauty in action, as you show. 

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Posted in It's Too Late For Things Missed

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if I'd be writing this I'd

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023

if I'd be writing this I'd have made  your dad dying as a hoax to get you home. Reality. That's a different story. Wonderful storytelling. 

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Posted in Miss Australia 1978 – Part Four of Four

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thnaks Turlough. I can write

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2023

thnaks Turlough. I can write posh, Kilsyth even. But you can't take a non-reader to the good book, unless it's the Bible droning over theiir head.

Thanks Sooz, needs work, but as we know get the bones down. . 

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Posted in Goatie 17

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