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I have 1211 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3491949 times and 1244 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1869 of my 16,054 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1925 votes

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Goatie 34

I was the only prisoner to get out of the van when we reached the Police Station at Clydebank. A car blocked the entrance so the van couldn’t reverse...
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Cherry

Goatie 33

I was getting good at getting beaten up. I curled into a ball on the bed and let them hit me. Bounced about and squealed. That way you didn’t get hit...
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Cherry

Goatie 32

I tried to save Jordan. Went through the motions of trying to block and unlock death. Pulled the wire of out his mouth and got a jolt that shook me,...
Cherry

Goatie 31

I’m that age. Got confused. Get easily lost. But it seemed the screw was leading me away from the medical block. I’d grown used to and familiar with...
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Goatie 30

Leslie groaned, her face was flushed. ‘Are you quite alright?’ she asked, looking over my shoulder. I could no longer see the shapeshifter, only her...
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1869 of my comments have received 1925 Great Feedback votes

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Love the transition, Hayley

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Love the transition, Hayley being talked down to and then taking charge- in an omnious way. I wonder what she plans to do with the irritating man. 

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Posted in The Irritating Gentleman (part one)

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makes sense out of nonsense. 

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

makes sense out of nonsense. 

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Posted in 3 oz of Insanity

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tigers are killers, man has

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025

tigers are killers, man has little chance but in our dreams perhaps we can escape before we wake? 

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Posted in I Dreamt of Tigers

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bit of theft, sprinkle of

Posted on Mon, 14 Jul 2025

bit of theft, sprinkle of romance. Dark deeds, indeed. 

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Posted in "Art of Trouble"

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works for me. A day late for

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

works for me. A day late for the 4th of July celebrations, but hey, Fuck Trump. Fuck America. 

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Posted in Born on the 4th of July

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the character is in the

Posted on Sun, 29 Jun 2025

the character is in the character and he's right about that blue Proddy shite. 

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Posted in Those Shameful Blue Pyjamas

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memory and trauma, circular

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2025

memory and trauma, circular times. Hardly a crime. Great writing. 

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Posted in To Tell You The Truth — Part 2/2

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the repetition is good as the

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2025

the repetition is good as the broadening and enlargement. Straight lines rarely happen in real life to tell you the truth. But you know that already. 

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Posted in To Tell You The Truth — Part 1/2

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Jeez, three hours!

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025

Jeez, three hours!

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Posted in Steak.

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when you read about the

Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025

when you read about the ghettos created Poland, you know what they are for. We feel compassion for those poor Jews. We know that every country in the world, most definitely America, closed its doors to human flotasm. To Jews, especially. We know...

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Posted in Fifty-One Empty Places at the Dinner Table

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