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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2702276 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1671 of my 15,599 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1704 votes

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kick the can

I kick the can, cause I can Mothers’ handbags, like grief clutched to their breasts I kick the can cause I Their faces open, but closed in a wail...
Cherry

Ugly Puggly 99

Molly said if a job is worth doing it’s worth doing right, or something along those lines. It suited us both. She hadn’t trusted me to pack the...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 98

‘You look nice,’ Dave told Molly. He wanted to take us out to dinner, but I’d said it was stupid and we could just eat in. I found myself glancing at...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 97

‘How’d it go?’ wee Jim sprung up from his seat. He didn’t wait for an answer. He was already racing towards the door and out into the carpark as if...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 96

There was a glow from the kitchen. Molly had left the lights on. She was sitting with her back to me at the table playing Candy Crush. I wondered if...
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1671 of my comments have received 1704 Great Feedback votes

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remembering blossom brings

Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024

remembering blossom brings about the healing heat of growth. 

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Posted in Forest in the Brain

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Obviously, I'm a fan of this

Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024

Obviously, I'm a fan of this kind of narrative that tells it how it is, without frills. I remember it well. I couldn't stand your brother or his wife at the end. I guess you couldn't either. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - Respite

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we are midwifes indeed. 

Posted on Wed, 28 Aug 2024

we are midwifes indeed. 

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Posted in Building A Raven

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sweet. 

Posted on Tue, 27 Aug 2024

sweet. 

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Posted in What Is It Like To Have A Dad?

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Memes or brainworms.

Posted on Mon, 26 Aug 2024

Memes or brainworms. Advertisers love them. 

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Posted in Dancing In The Dark.

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sometimes a shit is just a

Posted on Sat, 24 Aug 2024

sometimes a shit is just a shit, sometimes something more. 

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Posted in A Savage Poindexter

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sound like google

Posted on Sun, 25 Aug 2024

sound like google headquarters, stealing and spying on us. Just because...

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 16

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ah, wonderful ending. I wish

Posted on Sat, 24 Aug 2024

ah, wonderful ending. I wish the world was fairer and we had happy endings of these sorts. Ever a small victory (although I hate camera phones, I hate the privlidged sense of fuck-you-all more). 

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Posted in The meek shall inherit the earth

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Alfred Muggins is right but

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2024

Alfred Muggins is right but not right wing. 

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Posted in Is Britain About To Have Its Own Revolution? Asks Alfred N.Muggins

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amnesia. It doesn't leave a

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2024

amnesia. It doesn't leave a blank slate, but as you get older it might be nice to forget a few things. a new life. new wife? 

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Posted in The Big Blank (1/2)

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