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I have 1122 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1719024 times and 1128 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Ugly Puggly 30

Ugly Puggly had a hard and fast rule never to fling out food just because it was out of date. Potatoes could go soft and grow a beard of buds but he...
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Ugly Puggly 29

Ugly Puggly stared into space. Dave stroking the back of his neck, brought him out of his reverie. ‘I need the money,’ he said, ‘to place a bet.’ ‘...
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Ugly Puggly 28

We trooped down the stairs, out of breath and excited, as if we’d just returned from a long cross-country run. Ugly Puggly had that distant look, as...
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Ugly Puggly 27

We’d the pole stuck in the ground, falling sideways at the front of the house with a FOR SALE sign. The latest ruse was to add the name of the...
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Ugly Puggly 26

‘It’ll no take us long if we work as a team,’ Ugly Puggly picked up a ladder from the side of the building. Both aluminium ladders seem much the same...
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1379 of my comments have received 1413 Great Feedback votes

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Believeable (which to my mind

Posted on Thu, 30 Mar 2023

Believeable (which to my mind means good) but spoiled by copy and pasting of the same passages. 

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Posted in Classic First Date

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yeh, Jolono, Di. He wrote at

Posted on Tue, 28 Mar 2023

yeh, Jolono, Di. He wrote at least one story on it Better than mine. 

I wonder i f the Fall is as good as U2? probably not unless Bono is the lead singer of The Fall too. 

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Posted in Goatie

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Top of the list and yet...

Posted on Tue, 28 Mar 2023

Top of the list and yet...

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Posted in Marcus

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Rocks and resonates with

Posted on Tue, 28 Mar 2023

Rocks and resonates with autheticity. 

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Posted in Brean Down

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A baptism of sorts. 

Posted on Thu, 23 Mar 2023

A baptism of sorts. 

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Posted in Blue Lagoon

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[An] On odd sight. Indeed but

Posted on Thu, 23 Mar 2023

[An] On odd sight. Indeed but common place. too common You've caught the lust and lies and deceit. I'm not sure where the dead doctor comes into it. 

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Posted in Who do you think you might be?

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the changing of the night.

Posted on Tue, 21 Mar 2023

the changing of the night. the chaning of the ligtht, jenny, 

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Posted in Awakening Of Spring

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the real Henry is not the

Posted on Mon, 20 Mar 2023

the real Henry is not the real Henry, but Muggiins. I guess we all do that when writing. 

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.3 by Alfred Muggins (himself) My Kingdom For A Pen!

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13 Jenny, a baby. But I bet

Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023

13 Jenny, a baby. But I bet you thought you were so grown-up. We all did. 

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Posted in Part Of Something Special

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funerals are always good

Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023

funerals are always good drama. I like the twist of the knife. 

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Posted in A Man Named Malcolm

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