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I have 1121 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1710660 times and 1127 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Ugly Puggly 9

I wandered through to the kitchen. While the kettle was boiling, I picked out a mug from the debris in the sink. Tap water was boiling hot. I ducked...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 8

I took Agnes a sausage-roll for lunch. Seventy pence from Villa Bakery. You couldn’t beat that. She’d rolled out of her bed, and she wasn’t looking...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 7

Dave said with the kind of accent that rubbed your nose in wealth, ‘Makes you think.’ I hadn’t noticed that before. I didn’t care what he did with...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 6

I fell asleep in the chair. The telly was on mute and a finger of whisky left in the bottle of Glayva. I’d slobbered down the middle of my dark...
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Ugly Puggly 5

‘Dave’s on the phone,’ Molly made that exasperated face that showed she didn’t know who it was and wondered why I hadn’t answered it. She handed me...
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1376 of my comments have received 1410 Great Feedback votes

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even Orcs need to pee too. 

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

even Orcs need to pee too. 

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Posted in Argibel The Orc : The Bitter Romantic Chapter 1

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words that swirl through you.

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

words that swirl through you. 

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Posted in The bridge of Sante Fe

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ah, sadness epitomised. 

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2023

ah, sadness epitomised. 

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Posted in Flight Path

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Let if go. That's a song out

Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2023

Let if go. That's a song out of Frozen. Very apt. 

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Posted in Allowing Letting Go

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Utopian dreams are never easy

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2023

Utopian dreams are never easy, Dreams of girls much easier. 

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Posted in Part 2 of the Union: 1973

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sibling rivalry and

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

sibling rivalry and metaphysics..  

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 7

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I'm with both of you in this

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

I'm with both of you in this one. 

https://www.thecreativepenn.com/2023/01/01/my-2023-creative-and-business...

For years...

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Posted in 2023 A Trustworthy Liar

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graveyards have a way of

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

graveyards have a way of digging deep into us. truth telling. 

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Posted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

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Darren’s 5’ 11” head and

Posted on Thu, 05 Jan 2023

Darren’s 5’ 11” head and looks Jeff in his 6’ 4” eye. [Might need to re-write this bit to eliminate ambiguity. I don't think Darren's head it 5 foot eleven]

great start, want to know more. what they were looking for? 

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Posted in The Spook Dog (first bit)

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well done,   foresight and

Posted on Wed, 04 Jan 2023

well done,   foresight and fire. 

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Posted in When Lily Was Here

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