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I have 1121 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1710467 times and 1127 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1376 of my 14,676 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1410 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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the eleven-minute bore.

My jacket was in the bar. She’d little more than a blouse, with a red bra playing peek-a-boo. The wind cut through thin clothing and buffeted our...
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the ten-minute bore

Christmas-Eve was a big thing in the Blaksketts. We are at the proud tip of a long peninsula leading to nowhere. You had the Christmas lights on...
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Tuesday Afternoon.

Swat away the murky day Clasped hands upwards to pious heaven Exchange it for sniggering and hee-hawing Sharp hinterlands and hard-ons Feet that can...
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Sometimes forever

I wore a beanie beneath another two-tone wool hat. The colour of my hair was a snapshot of fashionable black and white. The Weird Fish logo and the...
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unkissed

Many my days and many my tomorrows Until you no longer remember me in your prayers Shame burns away our ignorance and confusion Some unholy night’s...
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1376 of my comments have received 1410 Great Feedback votes

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dust makes magic. as you've

Posted on Tue, 27 Dec 2022

dust makes magic. as you've shown here. 

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Posted in The Magic of Dust

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An escape route opens. 

Posted on Sat, 24 Dec 2022

An escape route opens. 

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Posted in The hidden painting chapter 1

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look forward to part 2. 

Posted on Sat, 24 Dec 2022

look forward to part 2. 

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Posted in Drumming Up The Christmas Trade!

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perhaps and perhaps not.

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

perhaps and perhaps not. Usually, we don't give a jot. But your parents. They're in heaven, or helll will folllow. 

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Posted in Hereafter

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bloody druids. they get into

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

bloody druids. they get into everything and don't even believe in Santa. Good one, Jenny. 

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Posted in Ancient Festival

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ah, not all black and white.

Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022

ah, not all black and white. nicelly done. 

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part Two of Two)

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the rigth mix of santa and

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2022

the rigth mix of santa and shit behaviour. We really are rooting for Diane and her son. 

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part One of Two)

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a love story that is lovely.

Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022

a love story that is lovely. well done. 

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Posted in Familial Bliss

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I lke that you turn the

Posted on Thu, 15 Dec 2022

I lke that you turn the sister against her brother, becasue he's possibly gay, it must be him. But then you pan back and show the real culprit. well done. 

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Posted in A Christmas Carol : Conclusion

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you've made ice nice. I liked

Posted on Wed, 14 Dec 2022

you've made ice nice. I liked your reading, it adds extra brio. But I thnk canvas[s] has only one s. 

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Posted in Mid-Winter

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