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I have 791 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 591676 times and 730 of my stories have been cherry picked.
401 of my 11,812 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 409 votes

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Grimms65

Angela’s eyes are splintered with not sleeping, she lies scrunched like a question mark at the bottom of the bed, blankets tight around her shoulders...
Cherry

Grimms64

Jaz is gagging for the first pint of the day, but is stuck in traffic, enclosed in a bubble of the front seat of a red Volkswagen. Del is driving...
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Cherry

Grimms63

In the late bloom of spring, snow scars the Old Kilpatrick hills. Seagulls swoop above Angela’s head, screeching along the bins on Risk Street. A...
Cherry

Grimms62

Jaz tries to erase the memory of the snivelling shadowy self he’d been earlier by tearing into the booze. But Del isn’t hanging about either. They...
Cherry

Grimms61

Del scoots in behind the couch and draws the chintz curtains. On the radio, T-Rex and ‘I’m your main man, Telegram Sam-Telegram Sam,’ beats out, in a...

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401 of my comments have received 409 Great Feedback votes

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I don't know enough about

Posted on Wed, 02 Apr 2014

I don't know enough about poetry to coment about rhythm, metre or lieation, but the imagery is wonderful and the voice is true.

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Posted in It is I, Abiku

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the crew seem afire and I'm

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014

the crew seem afire and I'm sure that death and glory is their desire.

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Posted in The Crew of the Wolverine

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supernatural ending Vera.

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014

supernatural ending Vera. which means you can do and say anythng and nobody believes you.

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Posted in school photos 71

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I'm sure Kellen could get

Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2014

I'm sure Kellen could get used to Jake and others' suffering and getting payback.

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Posted in Gifts That Cost Your Soul 3

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an oldie, nicely told. I'll

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2006

an oldie, nicely told. I'll have a look at your new book. well done

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Posted in An Atheist Family Christmas

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nice story, lovely ending, an

Posted on Sun, 02 Mar 2014

nice story, lovely ending, an aphorism.

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Posted in Más que la belleza

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some lovely imagery.

Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2014

some lovely imagery.

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Posted in The secret to Hollyhocks

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This is very good. Jason's

Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014

This is very good. Jason's voice is just right. You don't need to say 'I make an effort at politeness'. You've already shown it and that's added commentary. Similiarly, appearances' sake is a bit convoluted and would be better left as appearance...

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Posted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 2 of 3

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ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2014

ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be watching for more of this, made me smile.

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Posted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 1 of 3

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yep, a book with insight for

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

yep, a book with insight for people that like to read and should be read.

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Posted in Reviews - In The Day by Kevin Marman

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